2017长沙中考英语作文

2017长沙中考英语作文篇一

2017年中考英语作文专题复习

2017年中考英语作文专题复习

书面表达(结构+要点+逻辑+语法+亮点！)

结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么呢？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

要点：实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。

逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all in all（表示总结的）。转折：but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。

亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good- looking,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

只要把这十个字都搞定了，那么初中英语写作就一定能搞定！

写作步骤

1 审题：审清作文体裁（类型）时态、人称、要点等细节；

2 列提纲（文章结构框架）：分3段（层），以及每段（层）大体内容；

3 写作：在提纲的基础上补充要点；

4 复查：2遍——1遍看查要点、拼写、语法、标点等问题；2遍不出声读查，靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等；英语写作检查的原则：

5 誊抄：不允许做任何的更改。

*总之做到三审：体裁、时态和人称、要点；

三思：词汇—>短语—>句式；

三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。

标点符号特别注意汉英的不同，例如：

汉语 英语

A. 句号 。 .

B. 省略号 „„ „

C. 顿号 、 无

结构

文章分3段（层）：

（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；

（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多2句话；

（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。

逻辑

1)表层次:

1first, second, third, last 2firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally 3the first, the second, the third, the last 4in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly 5 to begin with, then, furthermore, finally 6to start with, next, in addition, finally 7first and foremost, besides, last but not least 8most important of all, moreover, finally 9on the one hand, on the other hand 10for one thing, for another thing

2)表转折；but, however, yet, though, although, after all, in spite of，

3)因果 because, so, because of, thanks to, due to,since, owing to, as a result(of), hence, thus

4)例证 for example, for instance, such as

5)表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact

6)表示利弊的：be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; „have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; have an effect on sb.;

表示喜爱的：love/like/enjoy„; be fond of„; be interested in„; show great interest in„;

7)总结 As I see, As for me，As we all know,To my mind, as far as I’m concerned, from my perspective, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word, all in all, in brief, in conclusion, in short, in summary, to sum up,

句型

一（1）简单句

1. 主系表 I am a middle school student. He is fourteen.

2. 主谓 I ran fast.

3. 主谓宾 We will have dinner together.

4. 主谓宾宾补 (主谓+固定搭配) We keep our classroom clean and tidy.

（2）简单句+状语短语

1. 时间状语 I am a middle school student now. He is fourteen this year.

2. 地点状语 We will have dinner together at home.

（3）简单句（主句）+状语短语

1. 时间状语从句 My parents helped me a lot when I was in trouble.

2. 条件状语从句 If you have any questions, please write to me.

3. 原因状语从句 I like English best because it is interesting and fun.

（4）主句+宾语从句

我认为（我想、我希望） I think he is helpful and great.

I believe you will love this city. I hope I can be a volunteer some day.

（5）使用定语从句

我喜欢可以跟着跳舞的音乐。 I love music I can dance to.

父母是我最爱的人。My parents are the people who I love most.

（6）简单句+连词+简单句

1. 并列连接 I am a middle school student and I study in No. 1 Middle School.

2. 转折连接 I work hard at English but my English is not good enough.

3. 因果连接 He is good at English so I often ask him for help.

二1. I am of the opinion that=My point of view is that=I think=I hold the idea that=as far as I’m concerned=To my mind=in my opinion 2.Among various kinds of +复数名词在各种...中，Among various kinds of sports, I like sth in particular. 3 as the saying goes,/as the proverb goes/as the proverb puts it 4 It’s said/reported/believed that 5 It’s our duty to do sth 6 ask/tell sb. (not) to do sth. 7 concentrate on sth 8 be busy doing sth. 9 be supposed to do sth=should do sth 10Every coin has two sides. Computer has both advantages and disadvantages No pains, no gains. All work and no play make Jack a dull boy. Failure is the mother of success. Think twice before you do. Where there is a will, there is a way. Do as the Romans do. The early bird catches the worm. An apple a day keeps the doctors away. All roads lead to Rome. Practice makes perfect. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。A fall into a pit, a gain in your wit. 吃一堑，长一智。

A good beginning is half done. 良好的开端是成功的一半。Don't put off till tomorrow what should be done today. 今日事，今日毕。Time and tide wait for no man. 时不我待。

11.be glad to do sth 12buy/give/show/bring/lend/send/pass/tell sb. sth. 13 there be 句型 14 enjoy/hate/like/finish/stop/mind/keep/go on doing sth. 15 find it + adj to do sth. 16 get + 比较级 17 don’t do sth=stay away from sth 18 had better (not) do sth. 19 help sb. (to) do/help sb.with 20 I don’t think that 21 I would like to /Would you like to„? 22 is one of the + 最高级 + n(pl.)„ 23 It is +adj. for sb. to do sth. (important/ essential/ necessary/ urgent/ proper)24 It is a good idea to do sth. 25宾语从句、定语从句、感叹句型 26 不用说„„ It goes without saying that „ = （It is） needless to say （that） „= It is obvious that 27 It seems that„ 28 It sounds +adj. /It looks +adj. 29 It takes sb some time. to do sth. 30 It’s bad/good for„ 31 It’s time for„/to do sth. 32 Can you give me some advice on... 33 keep sb. doing 34 keep/make sth. +adj. 35 like to do / like doing 36 make / let sb.(not) do sth. 37 neither„nor 38 not„at all 39 not„until 40 One„the other„/Some„ others„ 41 prefer„to/prefer to...rather than...42 see/hear sb. do(doing) sth. 43 so„that 44 have fun doing sth48 thank sb for sth. 49 The more„the better 50 There is sth. wrong with„ 51 too„to 52 used to 53 What about /How about„? 54 What’s the matter with„? 55 What’s wrong„? 56 Why not„? 57 Will (would, could) you please„?

58.How nice to hear from you again./Let me tell you something about the activity./I’m glad to have received your letter of Apr. 9th./I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit./I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.59.I’m looking forward to hearing from you. / I’m looking forward to your reply.

亮点

一、the + est + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most + 形容词 + 名词 +(that)+ 主词 + have ever + seen(known/heard/had/read, etc)

例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen。海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩。

二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V

例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education。没有比接受教育更重要的事。

三、cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much (再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。) 例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much。我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。

四、There is no denying that + S + V .。。(不可否认的„„)

例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse。不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。

五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„)

It is well-known + 句子~~ (全世界都知道„„){2017长沙中考英语作文}.

例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us。

全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的。

六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ (毫无疑问的„„)

例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired。毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。

七、An advantage of is that + 句子(„„的优点是„„)

例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution。使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。

八、The reason why + 句子is that + 句子(„„的原因是„„)

例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air。我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。

九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子(如此„„以致于„„)

例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it。

时间是如此珍贵，它经不起我们浪费。

十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V (虽然„„)

例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory。

{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不} 虽然我们的国家富有，我们的生活品质绝对令人不满意。

十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V

The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V (愈„„愈„„)

例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make。

十二、By +Ving, can (借着„„，„„能够„„)

例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy。 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。 十三、enable + Object(受词)+ to + V („„使„„能够„„)

例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed

听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。

十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ (我们绝对不能„„)

例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge。

我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。

十五、It is time + S + 过去式 (该是„„的时候了)

例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems。该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。

十六、Those who ~~~ („„的人„„)

例句：Those who break the law should be punished。违法的人应该受处罚。

十七、There is no one but ~~~ (没有人不„„)

例句：There is no one but longs to go to college。没有人不渴望上大学。

十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不„„)

例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports。由于考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。

十九、It is conceivable that + 句子 (可想而知的) It is obvious that + 句子 (明显的)It is apparent that + 句子 (显然的)

例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.

可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。

二十、That is the reason why ~~~ (那就是„„的原因)

例句：Summer is hot.That is the reason why I don't like it。夏天很炎热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。

二十一、For the past + 时间，S + 现在完成式。(过去„„年来，„„一直„„)

例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination。过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。

二十二、Since + S + 过去式，S + 现在完成式

例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard。自从他上高中，他一直很用功。

二十三、It pays to + V („„是值得的。)

例句：It pays to help others。帮助别人是值得的。

二十四、be based on (以„„为基础)

例句：The progress of the society is based on harmony。社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的)

We should spare no effort to beautify our environment。我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事 (让„„明白„„事)

例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard。我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。

二十七、be closely related to (与„„息息相关)

例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health。做运动与健康息息相关。

二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成„„的习惯)

We should get into the habit of previewing and reviewing。我们应该养成预习和复习的习惯。 二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, (因为„„)

例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream。

因为他的鼓励，我终于实现我的梦想。

三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!(多么„„!)

例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise! How important a thing is to keep our promise!

遵守诺言是多么重要的事!

三十一、Leave much to be desired （令人不满意）

例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.

我们的交通状况令人不满意。

三十二、Have a great influence on ~~ （对„„有很大的影响）

例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.

抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响。

三十三、do good to （对...有益），do harm to （对„„有害）

例句：Reading does good to our mind.读书对心灵有益。

Overwork does harm to health.工作过度对健康有害。

三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ （对„„造成一大威胁）

例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.

污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁。

三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best （尽全力去„„）

例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.

我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标。

范文

2017长沙中考英语作文篇二

2017中考必考的15篇英语作文

2017中考必考的15篇英语作文

第一篇：

[写作要求] 现在我们周围的环境污染越来越严重。作为一个中学生，我们应节约资源，保护环境，从我们身边的小事做起，做一个“低碳生活”的中学生。请以“My Low--carbon Life”为题，写一篇短文描述自己的“低碳生活”。

内容包括： 1。地球的污染越来越严重，我们能看到森林被砍伐、水污染和空气污染。 2。你是怎样从身边小事做起，做到“低碳生活”的。如：每天步行上学、离开教室及时关灯和电扇、充分利用纸张、节约用水等。

3。号召更多的人加入到“低碳生活”中来。 作文要求： 1。不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。 2。语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的题目已经给出，不计入总词数。 My Low--carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。

[优秀满分范文]

My Low-carbon Life The environmental pollution is worse and worse today。 Many trees are cut down， and water and air are polluted。 As a student I try to have a low-carbon life to save energy and reduce pollution。

Firstly， I often walk to school。 It can reduce air pollution。 Secondly， I always turn off the lights and fans when leaving the classroom。 Thirdly， I always make full use of paper and other school things and never waste water。 I wish more students to join me and make the earth more and more beautiful。

第二篇：

[写作要求] 每当朋友之间即将分手的时候，耳边常常会响起这首歌“朋友啊朋友！你可曾想起了我，如果你正享受幸福，请你忘记我……”。请你以Friends为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，可以围绕主题适当展开，阐述交友的重要性和好处。

[优秀满分范文]

Friends

What are friends？ We often talk about the topic with others。 I think friends are those people who can help you when you are in trouble。 Don’t forget the saying， “A friend in need is a friend indeed。” Friends can tell you your mistakes， though what they say is hard for you to listen to。 You can share your happiness， trouble and worry with friends。 Someone also says， “You can’t walk any step without a friend。” So I think friends are very important to us。 I would like to make as many friends as possible。 第三篇：

[写作要求] 最近，你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？根据所提供的信息，以“Should We Help Strangers？”为题，写一篇短文。

原因 帮助他人是美德；

赞成

反对 帮助他人就是帮助自己； 怕陷入麻烦；

怕被误解；

你的观点？（至少两点）

要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 参考词汇：美德virtue

Should We Help Strangers？ Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。

[优秀满分范文]

Should We Help Strangers？ Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers.Different students have different opinions。

Some think we should try to help strangers。 Helping others is a virtue，and helping others is helping ourselves.We may come across some trouble and

need others‘ help some day.If everyone isn’t willing to help us just because we are strangers to them，it‘s hard to imagine what our world will be like。 However，some are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble.Sometimes we are just misunderstood and even have to pay the cost of kindness。

In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves from getting into trouble.If everyone tries a little kindness，our world will be full of love。

第四篇：

[写作要求] 某英语报开展“How to Deal with Our Study Problems”征文比赛，请你根据提示的内容，简要描述并适当发表自己的观点，写一篇英语短文。内容要点如下： 1。 尽管我们常常感到有压力，但是应该找到合适的方式来解压。可以选择穿像蓝色和白色一样的冷色调来使我们自己感到放松；

2。 我们应该足够细心，因为“失之毫厘，谬以千里”； 3。 也应该在课业和业余爱好之间取得平衡，试着安排好自己的空余时间； 4。 任何时候都不要失去信心。通过努力学习，我们会取得大的进步。

2017长沙中考英语作文篇三

2016-2017中考英语作文指导及范文

2016-2017中考英语作文指导 如何写好一个句子？ --如何写好复合句。

复合句是由一个主句和一个或一个以上的从句构成的句子，我们在写作时，要学会使用宾语从句，状语从句和定语从句等。下面就谈谈有关这方面的一些句型。

句型 1 主+谓+that从句-- We’re sure that we’ll win the first prize.我们肯定能得头奖。He found that his English was too 他发现他的英语太差了。She decides that she is going to be a nurse.他决定要当个护士.I don’t believe that he has finished his work.我相信他还没有做完他的工作.

句型点评：在动词say，think，hope，believe，expect，explain，hear，know，find，regret，remember，decide后可接that引导的宾语从句，that常可省略。

句型2 主句+whether/if+从句.我不知道他会不会来。。我问他是否有字典。I don’t know 句型点评：if和whether可引导一个表示疑问的宾语从句，二者一般情况下可通用。

句型3 主句+疑问词+从句--No one knows what he is doing.没有人知道他在干什么。Take back what I said just now.我收回刚才说的话。Could you tell me where the booking office is？你能不能告诉我售票处在什么地方？I must thank you 我一定要谢谢你为我所做的事。

句型点评：连接代词who，whom，whose，what，which等和连接副词when，where，why，how等都可以用来引导特殊疑问句充当宾语从句。注意：从句中要用陈述语气。 句型4 主句+when/while/as/before/after+从句（时间状语从句)

We took notes as/while/when we were listening to the teacher.我们一边听老师讲课一边做笔记。Please keep silent while/when she’s writing.她在写作，请保持安静.I was speaking when a policeman came in.我正在说话，这时，突然进来一个警察.You must finish the work before I go home.你们必须在我回家以前把工作做完。

句型点评：时间状语从句通常由从属连词when，while，as，after，before等引导，使用时必须注意他们之间的词义和用法区别。

句型5 主句+until/till-从句--Last night,his parents waited for him till/until it was 12.昨晚他父母一直等他到12点。 我们练唱一直练到下课。The child 这个小孩看完电视剧后才开始做功课。He did not go home until/till he finished his work.他一直把工作做完之后才回家。

句型点评：在使用本句型时要注意until/till的用法，若主句中的谓语动词是“keep，remain，stay，wait..”等延续性动词，则用动词的肯定式，until/till的含义是“一直到....为止”；若主句中的谓语动词是“arrive，come，finish，go，reach，start”等瞬间性动词，则用动词的否定式，这时的until/till的含义是“直到....才....” 句型6 主句+since-从句/It is+.....since.....

自从我们来到这个城市，就一直住在这儿。 句型点评：since是从属连词，连接时间状语从句表示“自从....以来”。从句中的谓语动词通常用过去时，主句中的谓语动词通常用现在完成时，以表示从过去某一时刻开始，一直延续到现在的动作或状态。

句型7 主句+as soon as/the moment.... ---Please call us as soon as you arrive at the airport.请你一到机场就给我们打电话。I’ll tell your mother the news as soon as I see her.我一见到你母亲就把这个消息告诉她。As soon as the students got they began to help the farmers with their work.学生们一到农场，the children stopped talking.老师一进来，孩子们立即停止谈话。

句型点评：as soon as表示“一...就...”的意思，它引导的从句所表示的动词几乎跟主句的动作同时发生，相当于the moment that引导的从句。

句型8 主句+where/wherever(no matter where)从句 --Get up where you fall.哪里跌倒就在哪里站起来。She phoned to I always follow you.不论你到哪里，我总是跟着你。Wherever you go，you may find friends.不论你走到哪儿，你可能找到朋友。 句型点评：where和wherever都可引导表示地点的状语从句，不过wherever的语气较强，相当于“no matter where”意思是“不论/无论......在/到哪里....”。

句型9. 主句+because从句；Since/As从句+主句

He didn’t pass the English examination last term .因为他学习不努力，所以上学期英语考you’d better put on a coat.今天天气很冷，you can begin your experiment.既然一切都准备好了，现在你们可以开始做实验了。 句型点评：表示原因的状语从句通常用从属连词because，since和as等引导。 句型10. 主句+so that/in order that-句型

他大声喊，为的是让别人听见。We had to 为的是参观长城和其它名胜。

句型点评：so that/in order that意思是“以便；为的是”，引导表示目的状语从句，其从句中的谓语动词通常要与一些情态动词“may，might，can，could”等连用。另外，“so as to/in order to/to+do”也可引导目的状语。 句型11 主语+be/v+so+adj./adv.+that从句

她唱得很动听，所以受到了听众的高度赞扬。 珍妮是这样一个可爱的孩子，所以每个人都喜欢她。She did so well in the office that she was praised by the manager。她在办公室里

干得很出色，受到了经理的表扬。

句型点评：表示结果的状语从句，通常用“so/such....that”表示“如此...以致”来引导。 句型12 主句+as+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 主句+not/so(as)+adj./adv.+as+比较状语从句 黄河不像长江那样长。他不像我所想的那样聪明。I hope you will start as early as you can.我希望你们尽早动身。 句型点评：“as+adj./adv.+as”这个结构中，其中的形容词或副词要用原级；“not as（so）+adj./adv.+as”意为“不如....那样；不像....那样”，其中的形容词或副词也用原级。

句型13 主句+adj/adv比较级+than+..... 主句+（the）+adj./adv.最高级+...... 卡车比自行车跑得快多了。It’s 这是我读过的最好的一本小说。In autumn，the weather of Beijing is much cooler than that of Wuhan.秋天北京的天气比武汉凉爽得多。 句型点评：表示甲>乙（或甲< 乙），要用“形容词（或副词）的比较级+than”句型；表示最高级时，常用“（the）+adj/adv.最高级+.....”等句型。

句型14 Though/Although-从句+主句 Although you are very clever,you are unable to work out the problem.尽管你很聪明，你也不可能解出这道题。He made little progress although he studied very hard.尽管他学习很用功，但是他取得的进步很小。

句型点评：though和although引导的让步状语从句可以置于句首，也可以置于句末。注意“though/although”不与不but同时使用。

句型15.主句+if/unless-从句 We will go and visit the museum if it is fine tomorrow.如果明天天晴，我们将去参观博物馆。I won’t let you leave unless you promise to return tomorrow.=If you don’t promise to return tomorrow,I won’t let you leave.除非你答应明天赶回来，否则我就不让你离开。 句型点评：if/unless引导的条件状语从句可以放在句首，也可放在主句后面，其从句常用一般现在时表示将来。（即主从句要遵从：主将从现的原则）

句型16 先行词+关系代词who(that)/whom/whose+从句-- The child who is reading is my daughter.在那儿读书的那个孩子是我的女儿。The man(whom)you met at the gate is my teacher.在门口你碰到的那个人是我的老师。The boy whose mother died in the accident works hard.其母亲在事故中死去的那个孩子学习努力。 句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是人，要用关系代词“who，whose，whom，that”等引导，其中who在定语从句中作主语或宾语；whose在定语从句中做定语，whom在定语从句中作宾语。 句型17 先行词+关系代词that/which+从句

The book(that/which)you lent me yesterday is very interesting.你昨天借给我的书非常有趣。The film which/that is about animal is wonderful.关于动物的那部电影好看极了。

句型点评：在定语从句中，如果先行词是物，要用关系代词“that，which”等引导。在定语从句中that，which作主语时，不能省略；若作宾语时则常省略。 附2015年各省中考满分作文---

1.上周五，你们班举行了《我们的梦想》的主题班会，在班上同学们踊跃发言；有的想成为老师，有的想成为一名警察，有的想当医生.....请你根据下面的表格的提示以“Our Dreams”为题，写一篇英语论文，报告这次班会的情况，并谈谈你自己的梦想。

Our Dreams Last Friday,our class held a class meeting about

our dreams.Here is my report.Liu Wei’s dream is

to be a teacher,so he decides to study education.Li Ming,he does sports every

day,wants to become a policeman,for he thinks

that without physical exercise,he can not make his dream come true.Susan wants to be a movie

dreams one day.

2.某校开展“我是课堂小主人”建议征集活动，各班就此展开讨论，同学们纷纷发言：“我希望能有足够的自主学习时间....”“我喜欢的课堂是每个人都有一台笔记本电脑，方便网上查询.....”“课堂上我们能自由的讨论，充分展示我们的学习成果.....”等等。请你结合同学们讨论的结果，给以电子邮件的形式写一封信，建议什么样的课堂形式更为同学们喜爱，也更有利于同学们未来的发展。内容包括以下要点：

1)What is your favorite class like? 2)Please tell us an unfotgettable experence you’ve had in your class. 3)Please give at least two suggestions. My favorite class is an open and free class where we can learn by myself and discuss in groups,it is good for my development,I think.

I still remember an unforgettable experiencein my math class.Several days ago,I spent a long time working on three maths problems in class,but they were too hard for me to work them out.So I had to ask my classmate for help.After a considerable discussion,we solved the problems in our group.How excited I was.

Having such a great experience,I want to give two suggestions.Firstly,please don’t teach us too much in class.We need about 30 minutes to learn by ourselves and work in groups every class.Secondly,please provide us with some laptops if possible,so we can surf the Internet easily.No doubt,we need an open and free class,you see. That’s all.Thank you.

3.请根据提示内容，以“A visit to________home”为题，为学校英文报写一篇短文，叙述你“走亲访友”的一次经历。提示：When？Whose home？ How？ What？ Your feelings..... A visit to my friend’s home

Last Sunday afternoon,I went to my friend’s home.It was not far.So I went there by bike.

In her home,we watched an English movie and listened to music.We also made some toys with some old clothes.It was not easy but we tried.We cut clothes into pieces.Then we put the pieces and other things together.At last,these pieces were made into different toys.How lovely they were!We had fun when we did it.We were very proud!What a pleasant day!

4.某中学正在招收赴英夏令营领队，应聘的条件是用英文给你的队友写一封e-mail，提醒相关注意事项。假如你是王涵，请根据要点提示，写一封e-mail，参加应聘。 要点提示：1.出行前（了解相关信息，提高英语口语）。。。2.旅行中（注意言谈举止，人身安全等） You will soon leave for England for a camp.Before you start,you should get to know the imformation and improve your oral English.While traveling,you should try to keep yourself safe and at the same time pay attention to your behavior.As a Chinese,it’s your traditional to be polite and behave well.Besides,wherever you go,be sure not to litter. I hope you can do these well while you are enjoying the summer camp in England. 5.某中学生英文报正开辟专栏讨论中学生如何减压。假设你叫李华，请从以下几个方面，用英语写出你的具体做法，向该栏目投稿。1.与他人交流 2.参加体育运动 3.参与娱乐活动 4.其他减压方式 参考词汇：stressed adj.有压力的 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 my friends,parents and teachers,they can help me reduce stress.In addition,I also enjoy taking exercise with my friends,especially playing basketball.Sometimes,I will listen to light music in my free time or dance to music,too.Besides,walking with my pet dog in the evening is also a good way to relax myself.I think that as long as we are relaxed,we can have a good time and learn better. Nothing is too difficult,if you put your heart into it. 6.英文有句谚语“East，west，home’s best”。某英文报以此为标题，向广大中学生征文。请根据下面图表信息写一篇短文，介绍你家的情况。内容包括：你家的居室及居住环境，家庭成员及家庭成员之间的关系，并谈谈如何让你的家更美好。 80词左右 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 East，west，home’s best

.I live in a house in the countryside.There’s a big living room,three bedrooms,a kitchen and a washroom in it.There’re some trees and flowers around my house.The air is really clean.And I often hear birds singing.

There’re four people in my family.They are my parents,my sister and I.We’re helpful and friendly.And we always get on well with each other.

I’m happy I have a good family.I will do what I can to help do more housework and farm work.I’ll study harder so that I can make more money in the future.With our effort,I’m sure my home will be better and better.

7.假设你是李杰,正通过e-mail和美国友好姐妹校的朋友Tom交流校纪班规,请你用英文向他介绍下面的“班级公约”. 班级公约:

1.准时到校穿校服，见到老师问声好；2.上课专心勤思考，作业认真按时交；3.教室保洁常打扫，离班熄灯关门窗； 4.和谐相处应友爱，互相帮助共进步

参考词汇：school uniform； be active in thinking come to school on time in school uniforms.It’s polite to greet our teachers when we meet them.Second,we must listen carfully in class and be active in thinking.Also,we should do our homework carfully and hand it in on time.Third,we need to clean the classroom often and always keep it clean.And we’re required to turn off lights and close windows and doors before we leave.Fourth,being friendly is importan8.生活中每个人都有与他人沟通交流的体验，如：与家人，朋友等。请根据下面的要求写一篇不少于80词的短文。 要求：1.表达你对沟通的理解 2.描述自身经历或社会现象中在沟通方面存在的问题 3。提出至少一点更好地与人沟通的方法。

In our daily life,if we want to get on well with others,we should learn some skills about communication.

When friends are eating dinner,most of them just surf the Internet on the phone without any communication.They may feel bored so that they won’t get together any more.In addition,some students always get into trouble with others,so they have no friends and so on.All these problems are caused by lack of communication.

In my opinion,if they learn to talk with others more,share ideas and feelings with others or be a good listener sometimes,they will communicate better with each other.The better you communicate with others,the more friends you will have. 9.亲爱的同学们，中考过后将迎来愉快的暑假。你一定对旅行感兴趣吧？请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，介绍一下你的旅行计划。可适当发挥。

1.与父母乘火车去北京 2.想游览哪些风景名胜 3.其他打算 4.将会有何收获

可能用到的词语：capital，symbol，the Great Wall，the Palace Museum，Tian’anmen Square,Beijing Duck The summer vacation is coming.I’m so excited because I’m going on a trip to Beijing with my parents.

We’ll go there by train.As we all know,Beijing is the capital of China and there are many places of interest there.We’ll first visit the Great Wall,a symbol of our country.Next,we’ll pay a visit to the Summer Palace and Tian’anmen Square.After that,we’ll enjoy Beijing Duck.Of course,we’ll take photos during our trip. I do believe we’ll have a wonderful time.

10.学会自我保护是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示，并结合自己的观点，以“How Can We Protect Ourselves?”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样自我保护（self-protection）。 提示：1.never swim 2.be careful to make friends 3.call the police when you are in danger 4.eat healthy food 5.Don’t crowd （go upstairs and downstairs）

How Can We Protect Ourselves?

Self-protection is one of the most important skills for teenagers.But how we protect ousdelves?Here are some suggestions.

First,we should be careful when we make friends,especially on line.Second,if we are in danger,we must call the police in time so that we can keep ourselves safe.Also,we should eat heathily and safely.Besides,we shouldn’t crowd each other when we go upstairs or downstairs at school.Last,summer is coming,we must remember it’s dangerous to swim alone. All in all,everyone needs to learn how to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.

11.请你以My______为题，写篇英语短文。要求：1.在My后面加上适当的词补全标题。2、词数80左右。 My dream I always dream of becoming a doctor in the future.

Doctors are nice and kind.They devote all their lives to helping patients.They are always dressed in white,so we regard them White Angels. It is said that doctors are always tired and busy working in the hospital,but it can’t obstruct me in realizing my dream.I’ll study harder and read more books about medical science.No matter how difficult,I will never give up my dream.

12.请你以“My Father”为题，写一篇短文。从性格，爱好等方面简略介绍一下你的父亲，重点写一个曾经发生在你们之间的令人感动的故事，并简要说明你将如何回报这如山的父爱。参考词汇：感动move（v.) 回报 in return My father is an ordinary worker.He is a kind and generous man. He is always ready to help others.He likes playing chess and listening to music when he is free.In my heart,he is my hero.

Last year,I took part in the relay race held by my school.I got so tired during the race that I even wanted to give up.My father not only ran with me but also encouraged me all the time until I reached the finishing line,which made me very moved.

In return for his love,I’ve decided to work hard and make greater progress so that one day he can be proud of me!

13.你身边的每个人对你来说具有特殊的意义。请你以“My special_______”为题用英语写一篇短文，描述你家庭的某个成员或你的朋友，老师，同学的等。要求：1.在题目空格中填入你要描述的对象，如grandma，teacher或friend等。2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。3.80词左右。 My special grandma

My grandma is special to me because we’re like friends.She always helps me and whenever I am in trouble.There are no secrets between us. When I am with my grandma,we spend a lot of happy time together.I know my grandma is very

smart because she seems to know everything.My grandma is good at many things.One thing she likes best is cooking.She often cooks delicious food for me.I know my grandma loves me and I love her as well.

14.假如你是李平，最近你学习上遇到困难。请用英语给你的英国朋友Nancy写一封电子邮件，讲述你的问题并寻求她的帮助。参考词汇：考试不及格fail the exam 熬夜stay up late 开头和结尾已给出。

Last week,I failed the physics exam again.My mother was very angry with me.She said I wasn’t hard-working.So I didn’t go to bed until I finished my homework every night.Since I stayed up late,I couldn’t pay attention to my lessons in class next day.My teacher asked me”What’s wrong with you?”But I didn’t know how to answer.I expect you to give me some advice on how to study well in an efficient way. 15.假如你是李明。本周五早上你班同学将去格林农场参加实践活动。请你用英语草拟一则通知。内容要点如下：1.摘蔬菜，给植物浇水； 2.7点校门口集合，乘车前往 3.体验农场生活，活动约2小时 4.互相关照，注意安全 5.补充一两点有关事项。词数80左右。参考词汇：experience v.体验 pick摘 activity n.活动

We’ll meet at the school gate at 7:00 am and take a bus to the farm.We will spend around two hours experiencing the lives of farmers and taking some meaning activities such as picking up vegetables,watering the plants.Of course,safety is the most important.Never walk along the river,and never leave our class.We are supposed to help each other.Besides,we will have a big lunch at the farmers’. I believe we will have a great time.

2017长沙中考英语作文篇四

2017中考英语复习：英语写作三部曲

2017中考英语复习：英语写作三部曲

英文书面表达是中考试卷中的最后一部分内容，分值设置通常为十到十五分。它考查考生的英语表达能力，看是否能够运用学过的英语知识和掌握的技能进行思想交流。通常，该题对写作的目的、内容、体裁及字数都有明确的要求，会提供一些材料，如文字、图画和图表。因此，中考英语书面表达题不同于汉语写作，做到以下几点即可：审清题目要求，能读懂题；组织好所提供的材料；连词成句，连句成篇，用明白、通顺、恰当、得体的英语表达出来。毕竟是初级写作，篇幅和难度方面要求并不高。

写作的过程应当是有计划、有步骤地展开。可以把这一过程划分为三部曲，即写作前、写作中、写作后。

一、写作前

不可急于动笔，要先审题，列出要点，写出提纲。接下来，脑海中确定文章的体裁与时态。初中阶段所接触的体裁主要有：记叙文、应用文、议论文及说明文。其中，应用文又包括信件、电子邮件文稿、寻物启示、失物招领、请假条、留言条、通知等不同的形式，这些都是生活中常用的。至于时态，要依据表达的内容来灵活应用。初中阶段较常用的主要时态有：一般现在时、一般过去时和一般将来时。其他时态多为必要时穿插使用。平时有必要积累一些有代表性的，与生活贴近的文章，用以参考。

二、写作中

动笔前要有清晰的轮廓，即上述的要点、体裁、时态，并可回顾一下已学过的类似篇目。但在考试时，最好不要直接写在试卷上，以免修改时涂改太多。先写在草稿纸上为宜。写作中应注意三大问题：文章所要求的格式，逻辑顺序和遣词造句。以下主要谈格式的运用与过渡性和连接性词汇的运用。

（一）常见格式

信件的格式：

[Dear Betty，

Thank you for your last letter. Here are…

Love，

Lucy＼&]

电子邮件的格式：

[Subject：My dog From： Thomas＼&Nancy，

Good news！ I have a new pet…

Thomas＼&]

日记的格式：

[Friday，April 10th Fine

Today our school held a sports meeting on the playground…＼&]

（二）、写作中的遣词造句

1、使用熟悉的，已掌握的词汇和句型；少用难拼写的词及复合句，多用容易词、简单句。

2、学会用同义词及同义句替换不会写的词句。

3、使用过渡性、总结性的词汇。

如：文章及段落起始的用语：to begin with， first of all

表示先后次序的词：first， second， then， next， finally

表示因果关系的词：so， because， as

表示并列关系的词：and， or

表示转折关系的词：but， however

表示举例的词： for example ， such as， on the one hand， on the other hand

表示总结性的词：in fact， in a word， in general

4、多用固定词组，为文章增色。

5、直接用英语表达，避免用汉语思维。

6、简单发挥，不能脱离中心。（下转第18页）