2017湖南英语高考作文题目

2017湖南英语高考作文题目篇一

2017高考英语作文高分模板

英语作文模板

模板一：

The topic about … is becoming more and more popular in our school recently. There are two sides of opinion about it.

Some students prefer to consider doing sth.(Some students say … is their favorite.) they think that… (理由一).What‟s more， …(理由二)。 Moreover， … (理由三)

However， others believe … is a better choice for three reasons. (然而，其余的人认为做某事是一种较好的选择，有三个方面的理由) to begin with， … (理由一)。 Next， 。。 In addition， …

From my point of view， the former is surely a wise choice. The reason is that…(或者用：As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that…(依我来看，我坚决支持这种观点… that引导同位语从句)

模板二：

There is a widespread concern over the issue that (作文题目)。 But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.

A majority of people think that 观点一 。 In their views there are 2 factors contributing to this attitude as follows： in the first place， 原因一 .Furthermore， in the second place， 原因二 。 So it goes without saying that 观点一 。

People， however， differ in their opinions on this matter. Some people hold the idea that 观点二 。 In their point of view， on the one hand， 原因一 。 On the other hand， 原因二 。 Therefore， there is no doubt that 观点二 。

As far as I am concerned， I firmly support the view that 观点一或二 。 It is not only because ， but also because 。 The more ， the more 。

第二类：好处与坏处的对比 模板一：

In recent years， …… has been popular. There are many advantages in…… First， …… Second， …… Third， ……

However， there’re some disadvantages. ……(之一)。 Besides， ……(之二)。 Also， ……(之三)

In my opinion， it is true that advantages are more than disadvantages.(依我看，的确是好处多于坏处) I think…… One big advantage of … is that…。 / One obvious advantage of … is …。 / Finally， …

While it is true that … has many advantages， andit is also important to realize that…。(虽然某事确实有许多好处，但是意识到…也很重要。

第三类：问题与建议

（第一段 提出问题）In recent days， we have to face a problem that……近来，我们面临这样一个问题，就是(that同从)。

（第二段：解决办法：）With the help of modern technology， we now have many means to solve it. By doing ……， we can……What’s the most important is that……

（第三段：结论：）In a word， it is clear / obvious that…… Only when……can we ……。

第四类：要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法 模板：1.有一些人认为… 2.另一些人认为… 3.我的看法…

The topic of ①____________(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②____________(支持A的理由一)What is more， ③(理由二)。 Moreover， ④_____________(理由三)。

While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly，_________(支持B的理由一)。 Secondly (besides)，⑥______________(理由二)。 Thirdly (finally)，⑦_____________(理由三)。

From my point of view， I think ⑧__________(我的观点).The reason is that ⑨__________(原因)。 As a matter of fact， there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me， the former is surely a wise choice 。

第五类：给出一个观点，要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①____________(观点一)。 For example， they think ②___________(举例说明).And it will bring them ③_______________(为他们带来的好处)。 In my opinion， I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing，④__________(我不同意该看法的理由一)。 For another thing， ⑤____________(反对的理由之二).

Form all what I have said/In a word/In conclusion， I agree to the thought that ⑥__________(我对文章所讨论主题的看法).

第六类：解决方法题型 模板：要求考生列举出解决问题的多种途径：1。 问题现状;2。怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)。

In recent days， we have to face a problem A， which is becoming more and more serious. First， _________(说明A的现状).Second， ___________(举例进一步说明现状) Confronted with A， we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing， _____________(解决方法一)。 For another thing ____________(解决方法二)。 Finally， ______________(解决方法三)。

Personally， I believe that ____________(我的解决方法)。 Consequently， I‘m

confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ______________(带来的好处) 明利弊题型

这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状，再对比事物本身的利弊，有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发，最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测)

1。说明事物现状;2。 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面);3。你对现状(或前景)的看法。 Nowadays many people prefer A because it has a significant role in our daily life. Generally， its advantages can be seen as follows. First _________(A的优点之一)。 Besides ___________(A的优点之二)。

But every coin has two sides. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that _______________(A的第一个缺点).To make matters worse，_______________(A的第二个缺点).

Through the above analysis， I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones. Therefore， I would like to _______________(我的看法).

From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A， we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only by this way， (对前景的预测).)

Dear Sir or Madam：

I’m writing to apply for the job as a\an part-time reporter ， which I saw advertised in the English Weekly 。 ‘Im interested becoming a\an part-time reporter very much. I enclose a copy of my CV.

I’m a girl\boy of 19 years old and I‘m in my second year of senior high school. I work hard and do well in English， especially in writing and speaking. Besides， I’m good at typing and computer. What‘s more， I also know something about photography， which is helpful to my job.

I have been a\an part-time reporter of our school newspaper for 3 years， which gives me great fun and benefit. On one hand， it can broaden my knowledge and help me know more about the society. On the other hand， it helps practise using English and improve my comunication skills. In addition， I can also make some money to support myself.

I would appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I look forward to your promt reply.

Yours sincerely，

Lihua

模板一：

As is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage in the table (graph/picture/pie/chart)， _作文题目的议题_has been on rise (goes up/increases/drops/decreases)，significantly/dramatically/ steadily rising/decreasing from_% in _年_ to _%_ in _年_. From the sharp/marked decline/ rise in the chart， it goes without saying that __现象总结___.

There are at least two good reasons accounting for __. On the one

hand， ____. On the other hand， ___ is due to the fact that __. In addition， __ is responsible for ___. (Maybe there are some other reasons to show ______. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. )

As far as I am concerned， I hold the point of view that _______. （再加上对策、口号。）

模板二：

The chart gives us an overall picture of the 图表主题。 The first thing we notice is that 图表最大特点。 This means that as (进一步说明)。

We can see from the statistics given that 图表细节一。 After 动词-ing 细节一中的第一个变化，the动词-ed+幅度+时间(紧跟着的变化) 。 The figures also tell us that图表细节二。 In the column， we can see that accounts for (进一步描述)。

Judging from these figures， we can draw the conclusion that (结论)。 The reason for this， as far as I am concerned is that (给出原因)。 / It is high time that we (发出倡议)。

图画类写作模板

1.开头Look at this picture./The picture shows that.。。/From this picture， we can see.。。/As is shown in the picture.。。/As is seen in the picture.。。

2.衔接句As we all know， 。。./As is known to all，。。./It is well known that.。。/In my opinion，。。./As far as I am concerned，。。./This sight reminds me of something in my daily life.

3.结尾句In conclusion.。。/In brief.。。/On the whole.。。/In short.。。/In a word.。。/Generally speaking.。。/As has been stated.。.

宽 容

恕 孔子的学生子贡曾问孔子：“老师，有没有一个字，可以作为终身奉行的原则呢？”孔子说：“那大概就是„恕‟吧。”“恕”，用今天的话来讲，就是宽容。

宰相肚里能撑船 三国时期的蜀国，在诸葛亮去世后任用蒋琬主持朝政。他的属下有个叫杨戏的，性格孤僻，讷于言语。蒋琬与他说话，他也是只应不答。有人看不惯，在蒋琬面前嘀咕说：“杨戏这人对您如此怠慢，太不象话了！”蒋琬坦然一笑，说：“人嘛，都有各自的脾气秉性。让杨戏当面说赞扬我的话，那可不是他的本性；让他当着众人的面说我的不是，他会觉得我下不来台。所以，他只好不做声了。其实，这正是他为人的可贵之处。”后来，有人赞蒋琬“宰相肚里能撑船”。 蔺相如因为“完璧归赵”有功而被封为上卿，位在廉颇之上。廉颇很不服气，扬言要当面羞辱蔺相如。蔺相如得知后，尽量回避、容让，不与廉颇发生冲突。蔺相如的门客以为他畏惧廉颇，然而蔺相如说：“秦国不敢侵略我们赵国，是因为有我和廉将军。我对廉将军容忍、退让，是把国家的危难放在前面，把个人的私仇放在后面啊！”这话被廉颇听到，就有了廉颇“负荆请罪”的故事。 仁义胡同 明朝年间，山东济阳人董笃行在京城做官。一天，他接到家信，说家里盖房为地基而与邻居发生争吵，希望他能借权望来出面解决此事。董笃行看后马上修书一封，道：“千里捎书只为墙，不禁使我笑断肠；你仁我义结近邻，让出两尺又何妨。”家人读后，觉得董笃行有道理，便主动在建房时让出几尺。而邻居见董家如此，也有所感悟，同样效法。结果两家共让出八尺宽的地方，房子盖成后，就有了一条胡同，世称“仁义胡同”。

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宽容是长者式的，不但表现为一种胸襟，也表现为一种睿智。宽容者，人恒爱之，人恒敬之。何乐不为？行者无疆，一蓑烟雨任平生。宽容者踏过凋零的白玉兰，凝留的是“尊严”的芳香，即使与寒冬、白雪不伍，也留下宽容的胸襟，气度，留住高洁的品格！

2017湖南英语高考作文题目篇二

2017高考英语一轮复习 专题突破34 写作之开放性作文

专题技能突破(34) 写作之开放性作文

【技能讲解】 开放性作文给学生自由发挥提供了更多的空间，考查考生的想象能力、发散思维能力等。写作时考生需要注意：首先，找主题。认真审题，把握要求，找准主题，紧紧的围绕主题来打开思路、发挥想象；其次，列提纲。发散思维，从不同的角度去看待分析一个事物或现象。逻辑要清楚，语言要得体，内容要健康充实；再次，遣词造句。准确定位人称、时态，认真打磨每个单词、短语、句型，灵活运用所学知识，准确表达主题内容。

典例剖析

[2015·湖南高考]请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

注意：

1．续写词数不少于120个；

2．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

[范文] As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates. Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year.{2017湖南英语高考作文题目}.

I felt extremely nervous the instant the class began. The reason was that the new English teacher Mr Zhang might announce the exam result and that I would probably get scolded as before. Surprisingly, when entering the classroom, he glanced at us, saying gently, “Today, I won't talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you Li Jia wrote an excellent English article in the exam. I do hope he will make more progress with great efforts.” On hearing what he said, I couldn't hold back my tears. It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates. From then on, I fell in love with English. You can't imagine how grateful I am to Mr Zhang. Without his praise, I couldn't have gone so far in my English study.{2017湖南英语高考作文题目}.

[解析] ①never位于句首，引导倒装，我永远不会忘记去年一次英语课上的经历。 ②“The reason was that...and that...”两个that引导的表语从句。新老师张先生会宣布考试结果和我可能像以前一样受到责备，道出了紧张的原因。

③“entering”前省略了“he was”更加简洁，saying作伴随状语，他看着我们，温柔地说„„。

④强调句的使用，突出“for the first time”，第一次被表扬。

技能演练

1 ④③②①

[2015·浙江高考]在班级活动中，当你的想法与大多数同学不一致时，你是坚持自己的观点并说服别人，还是尊重大多数同学的意见？请你以“When I Have a Different Opinion”为题，用英语写一篇100～120个词的短文。要求如下：

1.从以上两种做法中选择一种；{2017湖南英语高考作文题目}.

2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。

注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。

When I Have a Different Opinion

One possible version 1：

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.

Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer place. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.

One possible version 2：

When I Have a Different Opinion

We may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.

The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism, I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.

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2017湖南英语高考作文题目篇三

湖南省岳阳县第一中学2017届高三下学期开学考试英语试题 Word版含答案

2017年上学期岳阳县一中高三开学考试英语试题

说明：1、本套试题为完整高考试题节选，即除了听力与作文不考之外，其他高考题型都考。

2、本套试卷实际题目分数为95分，5分为卷面分，累计100分。但年级最后会以 150分进行换算，即成绩统计总分仍旧是以150分为基础换算分数。

第一部分：阅读理解（共两节，满分40分）

第一节（共15小题；每小题2分，满分30分）

阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项。

[A]

When I asked my mom why I was so short when I was 7 years old, she explained that I have a medical condition called dwarfism (侏儒症).

At first, I was very sad. I wanted to be tall, mainly because of the way people reacted to me. Kids would say mean stuff, like, “It's weird how you're so short.” In elementary school, whenever classmates would bully (欺侮) me, I'd run away and cry.

Life outside school can also be tough. At the local amusement park, I'm not tall enough to go on all the rides, so sometimes I have to sit on the sidelines while my friends have fun.

I'm now in the seventh grade, and I'm four feet two inches tall. And you know what? It doesn't matter! My height no longer bothers me like it did when I was little. I met a girl at school named Nevaeh, who is my best friend, and she has helped me realize that it's not what's on the outside that matters — it's what's on the inside.

Nevaeh doesn't even mention my height when we hang out. In fact, if people tease us about being short (she's only six inches taller than I am), we'll make jokes, like, “We're not short. We're fun-sized!” I refuse to let unkind people get me down. I'd rather turn something cruel into something funny, laugh it off, and move on.

One of my favorite things to do is prove people wrong. Take basketball, for example. Since it's a sport associated with tall people, I was determined to play. And for almost two full seasons, I didn't make a single basket! But then, during a game last year, I stole the ball from a girl. I got to take two free throws. It was amazing. Everyone cheered. The experience made me realize that if I can score baskets, I can do anything.

I'm not going to let my height get in the way of achieving my dreams.

1. In elementary school, the author _____.

A. had many friends

B. enjoyed herself at school

C. was hurt by her classmates

D. had a great time in the local park

2. Thanks to Nevaeh, the author learns _____.

A. how to make friends

B. to perform better at school

C. the importance of friendship

D. not to care much about her appearance

3. How do the author and Nevaeh react to unpleasant words now?

A. In a funny way.

C. In an angry way. B. In a pitiful way. D. In a violent way.

4. Through playing basketball, the author has become _____.

A. more tolerant B. much smarter

D. more confident C. much healthier

[B]

There's a new kind of bullying on the block. Rumors (谣言), threats, exclusion (排斥), and the lot have recently been accompanied by an equally dangerous but less overt (明显的) method of tearing other people down: body shame bullying.

Body shaming can affect anyone — regardless of gender or weight — and it's been observed as a growing trend appearing in school cafeterias.

So what does this mean exactly? Kids and teens are pressuring one another to skip lunch or eat much less food than they want. With judgmental looks and comments, students intentionally make their schoolmates feel ashamed of how much they eat, leading some kids to go so far as to buy lunch and then throw it away.

In a recent survey of over 5,000 Canadian middle and high school students, researchers found that teens who reported being bullied were more likely to skip meals. The bullying took place online or in-person. As scientists have previously linked bullying with depression, anxiety,

and eating disorders, it's not safe to brush off an occasional meal pass as an isolated incident; it's likely to become a repeated self-destructive behavior.

To help fight against this form of bullying, researchers suggest that schools prohibit students from hanging out in the cafeteria if they're not eating, requiring parent permission forms if a student wants to skip lunch, and simply asking students what they ate for lunch, which may encourage them to discuss the issue.

5. Body shame bullying _____.

A. mainly hurts young girls

B. not only affects fat people

C. is less dangerous than threats

D. is a traditional kind of bullying

6. Which of the following words can best replace the underlined word “nasty” in Paragraph 3?

A. Unfair.

C. Unkind. B. Brief. D. Helpful.

7. What can we infer from Paragraph 4 about body shaming?

A. It can be very harmful.

B. It always takes place in-person.

C. It can be good for people's health.

D. It doesn't always cause missed meals.

8. What is the last paragraph mainly about?

A. Different forms of bullying.

B. A discussion about bullying.

C. How to avoid body shame bullying.

D. What parents should do to stop bullying.

[C]

Football players suffer more concussions (脑震荡) than athletes in any other high school sport. Is this beloved game worth the risks — or should schools do away with it?

YES: Football is a dangerous sport.

Football is a cruel sport that can have lifelong consequences! When your brain is bashed (猛撞) against your skull, it never fully recovers. In fact, scientists are learning that repeated concussions may lead to Alzheimer's disease, Parkinson's disease, and memory loss. We don't let teens ruin their lungs with cigarette smoke — so why do we allow them to damage their brains in the name of football?

Recently, Chris Borland, a promising young San Francisco 49ers player, quit after just one year, because of the risk to his health. That's a strong statement.

And just look at all the cases of violence in the NFL (National Football League) — clearly brain damage isn't the only problem! Football promotes a culture of violence that rewards aggressive behavior. This culture needs to be stopped.

—Vikram Chandramouli, a seventh-grade student from Illinois

NO: Banning football will not solve the problem. I've seen field hockey (曲棍球) teammates get hit in the face with balls and struck in the head with sticks, so I know firsthand: Concussions do not discriminate among sports! Why take away one of the most popular pastimes, then? At many schools, football is the center of student life. Without it, there would be no school spirit.

I firmly believe that banning football will not solve the concussion problem. Bringing awareness to this issue — so that coaches and players understand how to prevent injuries and provide proper treatment if they occur — just might.

Sports safety needs to be taught at the beginning of each season, so students understand the risks of playing with symptoms of a brain injury. And that goes for all teams, not just football.

—Amanda Vigdor, a high school senior from New Jersey

9. Chris Borland is mentioned _____.

A. to show how important football is

B. because he is crazy about football

C. to prove that football is too dangerous

D. because he is suffering from many diseases

10. From Vikram's point of view, football _____.

A. can ruin players' lungs completely

B. is bad for the social environment

C. has some advantages

D. encourages smoking

11. What does the underlined part mean?

A. Brain damage can be caused by any sport.

B. Racial discrimination does not exist in sport.

C. Discrimination in sport can cause concussions.

D. Football encourages students to compete fairly.

12. What does Amanda stress in the last paragraph?

A. The advantages of playing football.

B. The importance of banning football.

C. The possibility of preventing injuries in sport.

D. The necessity of teaching students sports safety.

[D]

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2017湖南英语高考作文题目篇四

2017版高考英语(全国通用)考前三个月配套练习：专题6 书面表达 (二)图画作文 Word版含答案

分类突破(二) 图画作文

解题指导

图画类作文以图画和文字相结合的方式呈现内容要点，其难点在于如何将图画语言转化

为逻辑语言。只有读懂图画所蕴含的深刻道理才能有的放矢。需注意以下几点：{2017湖南英语高考作文题目}.

1．仔细观察图画。图画中的每一个要素对表达图画的寓意都有提示作用，注意图画中

每一个要素提供的信息。

2．品味图画文字。图画配有的语言文字言简意赅，认真思考这些文字所隐含的观点，

使之成为弄清图画寓意的钥匙。

3．挖掘深刻内涵。图画背后隐藏的深刻寓意才是图画要揭示的真正主题。挖掘出图画

寓意是写作的关键所在。

4．适度联想发挥。图画作文一般要求做适度的联想发挥，使上下文更好地衔接。但是

要注意，一定要根据图画，做到合情合理。

5．描写虚实结合。对于图画中的内容，要分清主次，详略得当。

6．做好衔接过渡。在适度发挥的前提下，注意连词的使用，达到浑然一体的效果。

实战演练

学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生

潘阳， 你已找到以下三幅图片， 决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须

包括以下内容：

1．简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；

2．阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。{2017湖南英语高考作文题目}.

注意：词数100左右。

构思要点 请写出要点提纲

范文赏析 欣赏并背诵满分作文

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’m writing to recommend a picture of three students enjoying discussing the books around

the table.

Reading is mostly a personal activity，but it can also be a sharing experience.More often than

not，we are so amazed by the genius of the writer and can’t help sharing with classmates or

friends，who turn out to be impressed as well.The moment we mention the book，the passion and

enthusiasm will explode，which can never be gained on our own.This is my ideal picture of

reading—reading and sharing，and thus we have a better understanding.

To sum up，reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and

common interest.I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestion into consideration and I’m

looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Pan Yang

作文升级 依据括号内提示改写满分作文

Dear Sir/Madam，

I’m writing to recommend a picture of three students enjoying discussing the books around

the table.

Reading is mostly a personal activity，but it can also be a sharing experience.More often than

not，①(我们会对作者的天分感到很吃惊，以至于我们会忍不住和同学或朋友一起分享；用倒装句)，

who turn out to be impressed as well.The moment we mention the book，the passion and

enthusiasm will explode，which can never be gained on our own.② (这就是我理想中的阅读场景；用倒装句)—reading and sharing，and thus we have a better

understanding.

To sum up，reading，instead of being dull and isolating，can be full of participation and

common interest.

③

(如果你能考虑我的建议我将不胜感激；用I would appreciate it if...句式) and I’m looking

forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely，

Pan Yang

答案

①so amazed by the genius of the writer are we that we can’t help sharing with classmates or

friends

②Such is my ideal picture of reading

③I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into consideration

2017湖南英语高考作文题目篇五

2017考研英语：满分作文要怎么写？

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研途宝以2014考研英语一大作文的满分作文为栗子，让广大考生抓住复习方向

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This picture, which illustrates the importance of love and help between parents and children, consists of two drawings. The first drawing shows what a mother and a daughter were like 30 years ago. The second drawing , in contrast , shows what the mother and the daughter are like now. The mother was taking the daughter’s hand in the first drawing while the daughter is aiding the mother in the second.

第一段作者非常朴实的描写了图画内容，没有过难的词汇;逻辑清晰：段落总分总，首句为主题句，二三句分述，最后一句总结。亮点还在于句型多变。首句一个简单句添加插入结构，三句也同样使用插入语，实现华丽变身。本篇文章由两图构成，使用的”in contrast”，”while” 同学们应该学习。

What is intended to show in the picture is clear: parents should help their children when the latter are young, and the children, when growing up, should take care of their parents who have by now grown old. This is what makes a family.

二段详细阐释图画含义：父母与子女之间应该相携。值得学习的地方是要变换说法，避免单调重复。

Impacted by the change in lifestyles, China is witnessing some kind of disintegration or loosing of ties in family relationship。 Yet, the love between parents and children is not only eternal, but the basic component of a healthy society. Only upon the solid

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foundation of domestic well being can the skyscraper of social progress be built; but if that be loosening, the construction upon it, however towering and glorious, would fall inevitably into debris. Love your parents and love your children.

三段提出了自己的建议和评论。句型更加丰富多样，不仅采用插入结构(最后一句)，首句采用过去分词，第三句采用only半倒装句。

总之，满分作文多能够紧扣思想，行文逻辑非常清晰，表达地道，句型结构丰富多变。希望同学们认真学习此篇满分档作文，争取在不久的考试中拔得头筹，取得胜利!