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bec高级范文篇一

BEC写作高级总结(完整版)

PART 1

线性图表的描述

上升

1. 对于上升趋势的描述：

a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组：

to increase

To go up

to rise

to grow

to jump

to leap

to soar

to shoot

to pick up

b. 可以使用的名词：

an increase

a growth

a jump

a soar

an upward trend

2. 对于上升到某个位置的描述：

a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。

b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the peak of＋具体数据。

c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the peak of +具体数据。

d. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。

e. to peak at ＋ 具体数据

f. to climb to + 具体数据

3. 对于上升的程度的描述：

a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。

b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。(见

下降

1. 对于下降趋势的描述：

a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组：

to fall

to decrease

to go down

to slide

to collapse

to decline

to drop

b. 可以使用的名词：

a collapse

a decrease

a fall

a decline

a drop

2. 对于下降到某个位置的描述：

a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。

b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the bottom of＋具体数据。

c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the bottom of +具体数据。

d. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。

3. 对于下降程度的描述：

a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。

b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。(见

4. 对于平稳的趋势的描述：

可以使用的动词或动词词组：

to hardly change

to have little change

to keep steady

to level off

to remain constant

to stay the same

5. 表示程度的副词：

a. 程度较大：

considerably

dramatically

greatly

markedly

obviously

quickly

rapidly

sharply

significantly

suddenly

b. 程度较小：

slightly

gradually

slowly

Steadily

6. 时间的嵌入

a. 嵌入时间时所使用的介词和介词词组：

in

from……to……

between…….and……

during……and……

at the start of ……

by the end of ……

over ……

at the end of ……

throughout ……

7. 时间’s + 具体数据

上升和下降趋势的组合描述(嵌入了时间和程度之后)：

1. 先上升后下降的句型：

...... increased slowly during…… and …… but fell sharply in …….

A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followed the sharp increase in …….

2. 先下降后上升的句型：

…… fell before …… began to make a recovery ……

…… continue the recovery, climbing to ……

…… dropped during …… but increased again in ……{bec高级范文}.

…… fell and then pick up during ……

…… collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……

3. 起伏波动的句型：

…… fluctuated sharply all through ……

4. 波动不大的句型：

…… hardly changed through the period between ……and ……

柱状图形的描述: 转换为线形图形的描述

饼状图形的描述

对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型：

…… % the …… is/has/have/are ……

…… accounts for ……% of the total

…… takes up ……% in the whole chart

趋势的比较

1. 表示相似的句型 (实例) ：

Both share prices rose sharply in January.

Neither company has made a profit yet.

Like X, Y fell in June.

X rose just as sharply as Y.

2. 表示差异的句型(实例)：

X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady.

X fell quickly compared to Y.

Unlike Y, X rose by 10%.

X rose far more dramatically than Y.

3. 表示倍数的句型：

the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in ……

4. 客观比较的句型：

…… is …… in contrast to ……

数据的修饰

1. 表示不足的词或词组：

up to

below

under

almost

nearly

2. 表示超过的词或词组：

over

more than

just over

3. 表示大约的词：

About

补充一点点：

一. 主章开头

图表类型：table; chart; diagram; graph; column chart; pie graph

描述：show; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal; represent

内容：figure; statistic; number; percentage; proportion

二. 表示数据

一般：have 10%; at 10%;over 10%

最高(低)点：peaked; reached a peak/high(point) bottomed out; reached the bottom

变化: recover

略有回升(下降): increase; jump; rise/rose; climb; decrease; fall/fell; drop; decline; reduce

浮动，摇摆不定: fluctuate

保持: remained steady/stable; stay the same; little/hardly any /no change 变化程度: sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的

rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的

dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的

significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的

sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的

steep/steeply 急剧升降的

steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的

gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的

slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的

slight/slightly轻微的、略微地

stable/stably 稳定的

表示范围: from…to… between…and… for …to …多长时间直到

表示程度: almost adv. 几乎，差不多

nearly adv. 几乎，密切地

approximately adv. 近似的，大约

about adv. 附近， 大约，转向，左右，周围

just over 刚超过

over adv. 结束，越过，从头到尾

exactly adv. 正确地，严密地

precisely adv. 正好 精确地；清晰地

比例: 20 per cent 20%

one in three 1/3

one out of every four 1/4

三. 常用词

significant changes 图中一些较大变化

noticeable trend 明显趋势

during the same period 在同一时期

grow/grew 增长

distribute 分布，区别

unequally 不相等地

pronounced 明显的

average 平均

no doubt 无疑地

corresponding adj. 相应的，通讯的

represent vt. 阐述，表现

overall 总体上讲

except 除外

in the case of adv. 在…的情况下

in contrast 相反，大不相同

in conclusion adv. 最后，总之

in comparison 相比之下

inversely adv. 相反地，倒转地

in general 通常，大体上，一般而言

rang from

excessive adj. 过多的，过分的，额外

lower v.降低，跌落

elapse vi.(时间)过去，消逝

category n.种类

government policy 政府政策

market forces 市场规率

measure n. 尺寸，方法，措施 v.估量，调节

forecast n. 先见，预见 v. 预测

1.有用的词

上升：increase rise ascend core surge go up climb mount level up 下降: decrease fall drop descend decline reduce lessen level down 平稳:stable steady remain/maintain/keep/be the same as/similar to 波动:fluctuate fluctuation rise and falls up and down

占:occupy take up account for gain

而:while however whereas on the other hand actually/in fact

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剑桥商务英语BEC高级图表作文常用表达

a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组： to increase to go up to rise to grow to jump to leap to soar to shoot to pick up

b. 可以使用的名词： an increase a growth a jump a soar an upward trend

2. 对于上升到某个位置的描述： a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the peak of＋具体数据。 c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the peak of +具体数据。 d. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。 e. to peak at ＋ 具体数据 f. to climb to + 具体数据

3. 对于上升的程度的描述： a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。

下降 1. 对于下降趋势的描述：

a. 可以使用的动词或动词词组： to fall to decrease to go down to slide to collapse to decline to drop

b. 可以使用的名词： a collapse a decrease a fall a decline a drop

2. 对于下降到某个位置的描述： a. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋具体数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词＋to＋the bottom of＋具体数据。 c. 1. a. 中的动词＋reaching the bottom of +具体数据。 d.

1. a. 中的动词＋reaching + 具体数据。

3. 对于下降程度的描述： a. 1. a. 中的动词＋by ＋ 具体数据。 b. 1. a. 中的动词＋副词。

对于平稳的趋势的描述：

可以使用的动词或动词词组： to hardly change to have little change to keep steady to level off to remain constant to stay the same

表示程度的副词：

1. 程度较大： considerably dramatically greatly markedly obviously quickly rapidly sharply significantly suddenly

2. 程度较小： slightly gradually slowly steadily

时间的嵌入 嵌入时间时所使用的介词和介词词组： in from……to…… between…….and…… during……and…… at the start of …… by the end of …… over …… at the end of …… throughout …… 时间’s + 具体数据

上升和下降趋势的组合描述(嵌入了时间和程度之后)：

1. 先上升后下降的句型： ...... increased slowly during„„ and „„ but fell sharply in „„. A steady fall in …… during …… and …… followed the sharp increase in …….

2. 先下降后上升的句型： „„ fell before …… began to make a recovery …… „„ continue the recovery, climbing to …… „„ dropped during …… but increased again in …… „„ fell and then pick up during …… „„ collapsed before rising to ……at the end of ……

3. 起伏波动的句型： „„ fluctuated sharply all through ……

对于百分比进行描述所使用的句型： „„ % the …… is/has/have/are …… „„ accounts for ……% of the total „„ takes up ……% in the whole chart

趋势的比较

1. 表示相似的句型 (实例) ： Both share prices rose sharply in January. Neither company

has made a profit yet. Like X, Y fell in June. X rose just as sharply as Y.

2. 表示差异的句型(实例)： X fell sharply whereas/while Y remained steady. X fell quickly compared to Y. Unlike Y, X rose by 10%. X rose far more dramatically than Y.

3. 表示倍数的句型： the …… doubled/tripled in …… compared with those in …… 4. 客观比较的句型： „„ is …… in contrast to ……

数据的修饰

1. 表示不足的词或词组： up to below under almost nearly

2. 表示超过的词或词组： over more than just over

3. 表示大约的词： about ,approximitately

补充一点点：

一. 主章开头 图表类型：table; chart; diagram; graph; column chart; pie graph 描述：show; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal; represent 内容：figure; statistic; number; percentage; proportion

二. 表示数据 一般：have 10%; at 10%;over 10% 最高(低)点：peaked; reached a peak/high(point) bottomed out; reached the bottom 变化： recover 略有回升； increase; jump; rise/rose; climb; decrease; fall/fell; drop; decline; reduce fluctuate 浮动，摇摆不定 remained steady/stable; stay the same; little/hardly any /no change 变化程度： sudden/suddenly 突然的，意外的 rapid/rapidly 迅速的，飞快的，险峻的 dramatic/dramatically 戏剧性的，生动的 significant/significantly 有意义的，重大的，重要的 sharp/sharply 锐利的，明显的，急剧的 steep/steeply 急剧升降的 steady/steadily 稳固的，坚定不移的 gradual/gradually 渐进的，逐渐的 slow/slowly 缓慢的，不活跃的 slight/slightly轻微的、略微地 stable/stably 稳定的 表示范围：from„to„ between„and„ for „to „多长时间直到 表示程度： almost adv. 几乎，差不多 nearly adv. 几乎，密切地 approximately adv. 近似的，大约 about adv. 附近， 大约，转向，左右，周围 just over 刚超过 over adv. 结束，越过，从头到尾 exactly adv. 正确地，严密地 precisely adv. 正好 精确地；清晰地 比例：20 per cent 20% one in three 1/3 one out of every four 1/4

三. 常用词 significant changes 图中一些较大变化 noticeable trend 明显趋势 during the same period 在同一时期 grow/grew 增长 distribute 分布，区别 unequally 不相等地 pronounced 明显的 average 平均 no doubt 无疑地 corresponding adj. 相应的，通讯的 represent vt. 阐述，表现 overall 总体上讲 except 除外 in the case of adv. 在„的情况下 in contrast 相反，大不相同 in conclusion adv. 最后，总之 in comparison 相比之下 inversely adv. 相反地，倒转地 in general 通常，大体上，一般而言 rang from excessive adj. 过多的，过分的，额外 lower v.降低，跌落 elapse vi.(时间)过去，消逝 category n.种类 government policy 政府政策 market forces 市场规率 measure n. 尺寸，方法，措施 v.估量，调节 forecast n. 先见，预见 v. 预测

1.有用的词 上升：increase rise ascend core surge go up climb mount level up 下降: decrease fall drop descend decline reduce lessen level down 平稳:stable steady remain/maintain/keep/be the same as/similar to 波动:fluctuate fluctuation rise and falls up and down 占:occupy take up account for gain 而:while however whereas on the other hand actually/in fact 相比:by contract on the contrary likewise compared with 最高点:the highest the top the summit the peak the most 最低点:bottom less least rock bottom 平均:mean average 趋势:tendancy trend inclination 预见:prediction 达到顶峰: mount to 在***中占***:***gain the percentage of 有一个稳定的过程:a stable period can be seen

原则： A.不可能写的很好，关键是要很稳地写清楚。 B.概括一些内在关联性或原因推测作为总结 1. As is shown by the graph/in the table。。(概述图表) 正如曲线所示，最近54年来该国人口飞速增长。 As is shown by the graph,there has been a rapid increase in the population of the country in the past five years. 2. It can be seen from the table that „ (得出结论) shown graph concluded figures estimated statistics A. 从表中所给的统计数字可以看出，从1985年到1990年中国的人均收入迅速提高。 From the statistics given in the table it can be seen that the average personal income of the Chinese people increased (grew 、rose) rapidly from 1985 to 1990. B. 从曲线图可以得出结论，最近5年来中国人口的出生率已经大大下降。 It can be concluded from the graph that there has been a great decline in birth rates in China in the past five years. 3. „ amount to „ (数量总计) add up to come to sum up to 全部费用合计200美元。 All the expenses (costs) amount to (= add up to) $ 200.

4. „ increase from „ to „ (数量增减) decrease rise fall drop A. 这个工厂生产的彩电已由1986年的5000台增加到1990年的21000台。 The number of colour TV sets produced by the factory increased (rose , grew , climbed) from 5000 in 1986 to 21000 in 1990.

B.参加者的人数增加到30万。 The number of paticipants grew up to 300000 persons = increased , reaching 300000 persons). C. 这个学校的教职工人数已减少到700人。 The number of teaching staff members in this school has decreased to 700 persons. 5.(be)three times as + 形容词 + as 总产量 total output 钢的年产量 the annual output of 上升17% rise by 17per cent steel 日产量 the daily output 导致产量下降 result in a diminished output 现在我们地区的粮食产量相当于1970年的3倍。 The grain production (= output)in our area now is three times as great as that of 1970. 6.Compared with … , … 与去年相比，今年13项主要产品的产量都有大幅度增长。The factory has an output of 9 million cigarettes daily. Compared with that of last year,the output of 13 main products (= items) this year has increased to a great extent. 7.There is (was) a rapid rise in … be on the rise has been sharp increase on the increase sudden decrease on the decline steady decline gradual fall slow drop slight 最近几年来这个地区的棉花产量有了迅速增长。 The cotton output in this area has increased rapidly in the past few years. ——“结尾”段落中常用的句型： 1. In my opinion, … 2. Personally, I … 3. In short (= In brief), … 4. In conclusion, … 5.As far as I’m concerned, … 6. To conclude , it seems clear that … 至于说到我，我赞成前一种观点。所以，我的结论是，只要我们坚持正确的东西，改正错误的东西，我们就一定能成功。 As far as I’m concerned ,I’m in favour of the former view. Therefore, my conclusion is that we are certain to succeed as long as we stick to what is right and correct what is wrong.

同学们在选用描述图表变化的动词、名词，介词词组，形容词和程度副词方面要注意是否准确到位和形象。 以下一些词汇大家重点揣摩： spiral upward / the demand for talents (fair ) spiraled upward / climbed drastically / soar / surge / experience an explosive growth / an acceleration / swell / manage a modest ( marginal ) gain / on the rise / on the ascendance / wane / shrink / slump / fall off / drop off / take a dip / take a nose dive / trend (tide ) / sth. continued its upward / downward trend. / reach the plateau / the bottleneck / sth. level off / sth. remains steady / stable / unchanged / constant / stay the same / There was a slight drop( fall ) between 2000 / and 2005 / hugely / sharply / dramatically / drastically / substantially / steeply / incredibly / massively / surprisingly / alarmingly / distressingly / slightly / steadily / gradually / marginally / moderately / gently / reach a ( the ) peak / the highest point / A record number of students / reach the nadir / reach the bottom / the rock bottom / experience a moderate fluctuation / swing /

另外，大家仔细研究我下面提供的五种描述图表的句型，在考试的时候要会灵活使用。 This bar chart describes significant changes in the ownership of houses in a big city in China. It can be seen from the chart that a very noticeable trend from 1990 to 2000 was the dramatic increase in the private ownership of houses as opposed to the huge drop in the state ownership of houses. In 1990, three out of four houses were state-owned. However, by 2000, the percentage of the ownership of private houses has soared to 80%. The above chart reveals that the huge expansion in the private house ownership has been accompanied by a corresponding fall in the state ownership of houses in a span of a decade. As is suggested (unfolded / demonstrated / illustrated / mirrored) in the above chart, with the sharp rise in the private ownership of houses; the state ownership of houses has dramatically (substantially / alarmingly) dropped in a passage of a decade. According to the above chart, there has been a drastic growth in the private ownership of houses, while the state ownership of houses has shrunk steeply over the past decade. From the above chart, we can see distinctly that the private ownership of houses has witnessed an huge rise as distinct from ( as opposed to / in contrast to / in comparison with ) the drastic decrease in the state ownership of houses in a matter of a decade.

英语图表写作套句精选 1.the table shows the changes in the number of……over the period from……to…… 该表格描述了在„„年之„„年间„„数量的变化。

2.the bar chart illustrates that…… 该柱状图展示了„„

3.the graph provides some interesting data regarding…… 该图为我们提供了有关„„有趣数据。

4.the diagram shows （that）„„ 该图向我们展示了„„

5.the pie graph depicts （that）„„ 该圆形图揭示了„„

6.this is a cure graph which describes the trend of…… 这个曲线图描述了„„的趋势。

7.the figures/statistics show （that）„„ 数据（字）表明„„

8.the tree diagram reveals how…… 该树型图向我们揭示了如何„„

9.the data/statistics show （that）„„ 该数据（字）可以这样理解„„

10.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that…… 这些数据资料令我们得出结论„„

11.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table…… 如图所示„„

12.according to the chart/figures…… 根据这些表（数字）„„

13.as is shown in the table…… 如表格所示„„

14.as can be seen from the diagram，great changes have taken place in„„ 从图中可以看出，„„发生了巨大变化。

15.from the table/chart/diagram/figure，we can see clearly that„„or it is clear/apparent from the chart that„„ 从图表我们可以很清楚（明显）看到„„

16.this is a graph which illustrates…… 这个图表向我们展示了„„

17.this table shows the changing proportion of a & b from……to…… 该表格描述了„„年到„„年间a与b的比例关系。

18.the graph，presented in a pie chart， shows the general trend in„„ 该图以圆形图形式描述了„„总的趋势。

19.this is a column chart showing…… 这是个柱型图，描述了„„

20.as can be seen from the graph，the two curves show the flutuation of„„ 如图所示，两条曲线描述了„„的波动情况。

21.over the period from……to……the……remained level. 在„„至„„期间，„„基本不变。

22.in the year between……and…… 在„„年到„„期间„„

23.in the 3 years spanning from 1995 through 1998…… 1995年至1998三年里„„

24.from then on/from this time onwards…… 从那时起„„

25.the number of„„remained steady/stable from （month/year） to （month/year）。 „„月（年）至„„月（年）„„的数量基本不变。

26.the number sharply went up to…… 数字急剧上升至„„

27.the percentage of……stayed the same between……and…… „„至„„期间„„的比率维持不变。

28.the figures peaked at„„in（month/year） „„的数目在„„月（年）达到顶点，为„„

29.the percentage remained steady at…… 比率维持在„„{bec高级范文}.

30.the percentage of……is sightly larger/smaller than that of…… „„的比例比„„的比例略高（低）。

31.there is not a great deal of difference between……and…… „„与„„的区别不大。 32.the graphs show a threefold increase in the number of…… 该图表表明„„的数目增长了三倍。 33……decreased year by year while……increased steadily. „„逐年减少，而„„逐步上升。

34.the situation reached a peak（a high point at） of[%]. „„的情况（局势）到达顶（高）点，为„„百分点。

35.the figures/situation bottomed out in…… 数字（情况）在„„达到底部。

36.the figures reached the bottom/a low point/hit a trough. 数字（情况）达到底部（低谷）。

37.a is ……times as much/many as b. a是b的„„倍。

38.a increased by…… a增长了„„

39.a increased to…… a增长到„„

40.high/low/great/small/ percentage. 比低高（低）

41.there is an upward trend in the number of…… „„数字呈上升趋势。

42.a considerable increase/decrease occurred from……to…… „„到„„发生急剧上升。

43.from……to……the rate of decrease slow down. 从„„到„„，下降速率减慢。

44.from this year on，there was a gradual declinel reduction in the„„，reaching a figure of„„ 从这年起，„„逐渐下降至„„

45.be similar to…… 与„„相似 46.be the same as…… 与„„相同

47.there are a lot similarities/differences between……and…… „„与„„之间有许多相似（不同）之处

48.a has something in common with b a于b有共同之处。

49.the difference between a and b lies in…… a与b之间的差别在于„„

50„„（year）witnessed/saw a sharp rise in„„ „„年„„急剧上升

一,图表部分

Introduction:

The chart aims at comparing the performance of …./revealing the significant differences of …../illustrating…..

Body:

1. 开头(第一个/类事物)：a. According to the survey results„./In general„/Generally

bec高级范文篇三

BEC高级写作

CAMBRIDGE

BUSINESS ENGLISH CERTIFICATE

HIGHER

BEC高级写作讲义

内部资料,仅供参考

目录

一． BEC考试概述 二． BEC高级写作概述 三． Part One写作(概述与方式) 四． Part Two写作(概述) 五． Part Two (Report写作方式) 六． Part Two (Proposal写作方式) 七． Part Two (Letter 写作方式) 八． 总结

教科书：《剑桥BEC真题辑》第2、3辑 练习资料：《剑桥BEC真题辑》第4辑

一． BEC考试概述

剑桥商务英语（Cambridge Business English Certificate）：

简称为BEC考试，是英国剑桥大学考试委员会专门为非英语母语国家的人员进行国际商务活动需要而设计的。该证书由于其颁发机构的权威性，在欧洲大多数国家的商业企业部门获得认可，作为确认证书持有者英语能力证明的首选证书。也是在所有举办该项考试的国家和地区求职的“通行证”。在一些国家，许多大学要求获得BEC3(第三级)证书者才能获得工商管理硕士(MBA)学位或参加学位课程学习。

BEC考试特点：

1． BEC考试报名不受年龄、性别、职业、地区、学历等限制，任何人(包括学

生、待业人员等)均可持本人身份证到当地考点报名。

2． BEC考试测试考生在听、说、读、写四个方面的语言交际能力，着重考察学

生的应用能力与接受能力，并对考生的能力概况做出较全面、客观的评价。 3． BEC考试分为三级，BEC1为初级语言水平考试，难度相当于我国大学英语

四级，就剑桥英语考试系列来说，它介于入门英语考试(Key English Test)和初级英语考试(Preliminary English Test)之间；BEC2介于我国大学英语四、六级之间，相当于剑桥第一证书英语考试(First Certificate in English)；BEC3介于我国大学英语六级和英语专业八级之间，相当于剑桥熟练英语证书考试(Certificate of Proficiency in English)。

BEC高级（BEC3）考试：

1. 考试同样分为四个部分（阅读，60分钟；写作，70分钟；听力，40分钟左

右；口语16分钟）；即总时间为166分钟左右（2.5小时）

2. 四部分总分为120分，每部分为30分，考生的登记以4部分所得的总分为

基础，并不需要所有的四分试卷都达到令人满意的水平才能通过考试。 3. 分数分为5档，A（优秀），B（优良），C（及格），D、E（不及格） 4. BEC考试所使用的材料尽可能属于真实事件中的节选，因此不存在偏见或者

其他个性因素。

二． BEC高级写作概述

概述：

1． 总时间为70分钟；

2． 两部分内容，第一部分（Part One）为一片短篇报告（Short Report）；第二

部分（Part Two）为三选一（Report，Letter，Proposal）；

3． 总字数要求为320-390词，第一部分为120-140词，第二部分为200-250

词；

4． 考官会根据整体印象评分，印象的标准主要来源于能否满足题目要求和是否

具有商业逻辑性为主。

5． 分数同样分5档，5、4、3为及格，2、1、0为不及格

具体评分标准：

1. 是否完成题目要求：

 所有内容点是否已包含在文章内  语言是否规范、自然；错误的多少  是否灵活运用语言，词汇量

 文体是否组织得当，逻辑性、格式是否适当

2. 给读者的感觉

 5极佳、4良好、3较好、2不佳、1，0极差

写作课程训练目标：

1. 商务思维训练 2. 模板灵活运用

扩展阅读资料：

1.

（美国证券交易所网站，在此网站下点击Advanced Search， 搜10K文档，10K文档为年报，可下载阅读）

2. （雅虎财经，在GET QUOTES处输入股票代码，

然后查询免费下载分析报告）

3．各上市公司中（Investor Relation）链接，建议找寻英国基地公司，如英航等

三． Part One写作（概述与方式）

问题共点概述：

   

Write a Short Report Write 120-140 Words

Describe the movements (Charts or graphs) At least one chart (Line, Bar and Pie)

解题总思路：(Accomplish In Four Steps)

I. Reading ...................................读题（归纳图表主要内容）

II. Organizing ...............................订框架（根据模板、例句完成文章主要部分） III. Conclusion ...............................客观总结（仅归纳最显而易见的客观联系） IV. Checking ..................................检查（拼写、语法及其他错误）{bec高级范文}.

文章基本框架：（Basic Structure）

 Introduction ..............................简要介绍题目，归纳图表主要内容  Findings ...................................说明图表中数据走势，趋势和变化  Conclusion ...............................图表、数字简最客观联系

写作要点：

 直接了当进入主题

 抓住数据特点，突出变化趋势，进行对比

 建议写作中使用小标题，增强各段落写作方向，条理更加清晰

分步解题：

1． 如何读题：

 学会节省时间,速读  只挑不同的内容读

 归纳图表的主要表达内容，先中文后英文

例：Book2， Test1， Part One （以下例题部分均为此题，简称如上题）

Question1:

 The graphs below (Page 28) show

 Using the information from the graphs, write a short report

describing  Write 120-140 words.

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BEC高级写作复习资料

写作部分

BEC HIGHER写作部分主要涉及商业信函和图表写作两部分的内容，现具体介绍如下：

商业信函

第一章 格式问题

1. 格式问题：

请同学们在BEC的写作中采用平头式的写法。

收信人的姓名和地址置于信纸的左上方

地址、称呼和结束礼词后没有标点符号

日期在右上方

段落从定格开始，段落之间的行距为两行（但在考试中由于受答题卡限制，请同学们酌情考虑）

写信人的名字和头衔在签名下方

2. 称呼和结束礼词的注意事项：

Dear Mr John

Dear Mr John Smith

3. 日期：

在英国英语中，天在前，但是在美国英语中，月份在前。所以某些特别的时期容易引起误解。例如：12 06 2003

在英国指的是：6月21日

在美国指的是：12月6日

因此日期要写成：12 June 2003

注释：在bec考试中同学们可以采用恩波所推荐的用法。但是12 06 2003 的用法仍然是可以使用的，因为bec为英版考试。

在使用恩波推荐的用法时，要记住月份使用大些字母开头。天后不必写th、rd、nd或者st。{bec高级范文}.

第二章 写法问题

预备参加bec考试的同学们由于缺乏商务写作的实际经验，对于写作部分都比较郁闷。恩波结合历年考试实际，为大家准备了15类共计50个经典的实战句型，供大家在考场上使用。我们对每一个句型都模拟了一种环境：

You want to know the prices of some air conditioners.

We are interested in your air conditioner and we would like to know the prices of some air conditioners.

You saw an advertisement in the newspaper yesterday and you want further information. We are writing in connection with the advertisement in the newspaper yesterday. You want to know if the company you are writing to organizes holidays to Africa.

We are writing to inquire about the holidays to Africa that your company organizes.

A company wrote to you on 23 July. They wanted to know if you sell photocopiers.

Thank you for your letter of 23 July, asking if we sell photocopiers.

A man wrote to you on 18 December. He wanted employment with your company. He also sent his curriculum vitae.

We have received your letter of 18 December, enclosing your curriculum vitae.

A company sent you a fax on 3 June. They wanted to know if you were going to the marketing conference in London.

Thank you for your fax of 3 June, asking if I was going to the marketing conference in London.

A woman telephoned you this morning. She wanted to know if her order No. 599 had arrived. Thank you for your telephone call this morning concerning the order No. 599.

3.

信件的结尾：

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bec高级范文

Unit1a P8 Report writing Ex 4: Sample answer: (235words)

Reassessment of job satisfaction:

Sue Pearson (PR Dept.)

Introduction

This report sets out to use Work set colors toassess the accuracy of my job description as PR officer and to suggest a number of changes.

Findings

It is clear that there is a difference between the way the pany views the job and the reality as I perceive it. Firstly, a number of areas which demand a significant proportion of my time are not mentioned in the official job brief.The segment on the pie chart which provides most cause for concern is the pink sector; this relates to my attendance at a number of meetings which I can contribute little.Another significant area is the grey segment; this refers to the unscheduled time I spend sorting out puter problems.

I feel these activities are hampering my core work. As can be seen from the pie charts, the time I spend actively working to meet the goals agreed with my line manager is less than envisaged.

Conclusions

The above discrepancies clearly indicate that my current job brief is inaccurate.

Remendations

I would remend that my official job brief should be updated using the Workset colours.

It would also be valuable to consider the proportion of non-core colours in the pie chart and

to investigate whether work in these areas could be carried out by someone else more suited to these tasks. Unit1b P12 Flexible working Ex 5:

Sample answer: (250words)

Resource Planning Manager: Assessment of Suitability for Home-based Working

Introduction

真的不掉线吗？？、？？？？？？？？？？？？ The purpose of this report is to assess the suitability of my position as Resource Planning Manager for home-based working.

Findings

My working pattern and that of my colleagues varies from week to week. During certain periods a large proportion of my time is spent doing fieldwork. This is followed by office-based collating and recording the data collected. Once the results have been recorded, I proof-read the colour copies of all reports and maps.

As regards munication with colleagues,

department meetings are held once a fortnight.At other times, the individual members of the team municate either face-to-face or by phone,

depending on their