iamafraid六年级作文

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iamafraid六年级作文篇一

六级写作模板

六级写作模板

2015年11月18日选自《巅峰训练 六级写作高分特训》

一、非提纲式作文及写作模板

1、名言哲理性作文

模板一:

①_______(概述某事物的作用). However, as _____(相关人物)once put it, _____(引用名言). It is well

established that______ (给出论点).

②Blinded by ______(错误观念), we often take it for granted that ______ (错误观念). However, ______(指出现状). For instance, ______(举例说明现状). What’s more, ______(进一步举例说明).

③As far as I am concerned, ______(得出结论).

模板二:

①The saying ______(引用名言). However, ______(指出论点).

②In my opinion, ______(给出自己的观点). Such examples might be given easily. ______ (举例论证自己的观点).

③Have you ______(提出疑问)? If not, ______(提出倡议).

2、图画型作文

图画性作文包括漫画作文和图表作文。

模板一:

①What the drawing vividly depicts is that_____(图画主题).The picture illustrates that ______(图画反映的现象).

②Those who favor______(观点1). In contrast, people who hold the opposite opinion maintain that ______(观点2).They think that ______(原因). And the cartoon above ______(举例1). For another example, ______(举例2).

③As far as I am concerned, ______(表达自己的观点). I suggest that______(提出解决措施).

模板二:

①As is vividly indicated in the above chart/ table/ graph, ______(图表主题).

Especially in ______ (关键时间), ______ (图表最大特点).

②The reasons for ______ (描述现象) are as follows. Firstly, ______(原因1). Secondly, ______(原因2). Thirdly, ______(原因3).

③From the changes reflected in the chart/ table/ graph, we can predict/ see

that ______ (得出结论). For one thing, ______(产生的影响1). For another, ______(产生的影响2).

模板三:

①The cartoon above is thought-provoking. ______(描述图画). Apparently, the cartoon

ironically demonstrates a truth that ______(揭示寓意).

②Just as ______(亮出观点). First of all, ______(论据1). Let’s take______(相关事物)as an example, ______(举例1). In addition, ______(论据2). Therefore, ______(得出结论). ③To sum up, ______(总结全文).

模板四:

①From the two charts/ According to the charts/ According to the figures given in

the charts, we can see that ______(图表数字的变化趋势).

②We can see from the statistics that ______ (图表变化细节1). This means that______ (说明原因). In addition, the figures also tell us that ______(图表变化细节2). From it we can see that ______ (说明原因).

③Judging from the figures, we can predict that______ (得出结论).

二、提纲式作文及写作模板

1、现象解释型作文

模板一:

①Today, it is widely acknowledged that______(相关观点). Therefore, ______(提出现象).However, as for this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person.

②Some______(涉及人群)insist that ______(支持观点). However, many other______(涉及人群)do not agree. They hold that ______(反对观点).

③From my perspective, ______(自己的观点). On the one hand, ______(观点的一方面), but on the other hand, ______(观点的另一方面). What's more, ______(强化自己的观点).

模板二:

①Recent decades have seen the rapid development of______(指出现象). As a result, ______(相关事物) have successfully entered our everyday life and are gaining

popularity among ordinary people.

②It's no wonder that some people hold that ______ (提出观点), because______ (原因综述). To start with, ______ (原因1). What's more, ______(原因2). Last but not least,

______(原因3).

③As far as I am concerned, ______(自己的看法). However, with further development of______ (现象相关内容), ______ (未来前景) in the near future.

模板三:

①It is not an uncommon social phenomenon that ______(提出现象). However, opinions vary from person to person concerning this phenomenon.

②Some people hold that______ (支持观点)because______ (指出原因). Consequently, ______(说明结果). But others maintain that______ (反对观点). They argue that______ (反对理由).

③From my point of view,______ (自己的观点).

2、问题解决型

模板一:

①As is known to all, ______(导入命题). However, it is quite worrying that______ (提出问题). ②Therefore, ______(相关各方) should be greatly responsible for______ (问题内容).

Firstly, ______(解决方法1). Secondly,______ (解决方法2). Thirdly,______ (解决方法3). ③But ______ (相关方面) alone cannot ensure the final success in______ (问题内容).

______(问题相关方)should also take an active part in ______ (怎么做1). They/ We should ______(怎么做2).

模板二:

①It is widely acknowledged taht _______(某事物的重要性1).Besides, ______(重要性2). ②However,_______(事物出现的问题). Some people prefer to______(问题表现或原因1). Others tend to_______(问题表现或原因2).

③As the salt of the earth, college students should be fully aware of

______(相关事物). Therefore, we should______(自身怎么做1).We should also______(自身怎么做2).

模板三:

①In recent years, ______(消极现象) has been prevailing ______(盛行范围).

②There are three main factors that can account for this phenomenon. First and foremost, ______(原因1). Moreover, ______(原因2). Last but not least, ______(原因3).

As a result,______ (结果).

③In my view, effective measures should be taken to solve the problem. First, ______(解决方法1). Second, ______(解决方法2). Third, ______(解决方法3).

3、对比选择型作文

模板一:

①It is widely believed that______(指出现象). What’s more, ______(进一步阐述该现象). Many

people strongly advocate it owing to______(支持原因). However,_______(相关因素),people’s ideas vary.

②On the one hand, some people hold that ______(第一种观点及原因).On the other hand, a great many people insist that _______(第二种观点及原因).

③As far as I am concerned, however, ______(自己的态度及理由).Therefore, it is time that_____(得出结论).

模板二:

①A great many people______(提出观点). First and foremost,some people incline to______(赞成原因1).What’s more, they maintain that______(赞成原因2).

②On the contrary, the vast majority of people assume that_______(提出相反的观点).

③In my opinion,______(提出自己的观点).For one thing,______(理由1). For another,______(理由2).

模板三:

①With the development of society, people attach more importance to

______(提出现象).They regard it as______(进一步阐述该现象).

②Should we______(提出观点)?______(相关答案).To begin with,______(理由1).What’s more,_______(理由2).

③For my part, ______(表明自己的态度). Most importantly, _______(进行进一步阐述).

4、观点议论型作文

模板一:

①Recently, we often hear complaints about______(提出现象).We can see that ______(进一步阐述该现象).

②The following factors need to be taken into consideration.First and foremost, ______(原因

1).What’s more, _______(原因2).As a result, _______(结果).

③From my point of view, _______(自己的态度). In the frist place, ______(理由1). Furthermore,_______(理由2). Hence,______(结论).

模板二:

①_______is always regarded as(提出观点). However, _______(指出特殊情况).

②For one thing._______(原因/看法1). For another. _______(原因/看法2).

③On the whole, it is important to keep in mind that _______(自己的态度).

模板三:

①There are many factors that_______ (与论点相关的内容〉. But of_______(所有因素), I believe_______(个人论点〉to be the most important one for the following reasons.

②The first reason is that_______(原因1). Another reason is that_______(原因2).

Finally._______(原因3).

③In short. I believe _______(重申自己的观点).Thus we should_______(提出建议).

5、应用书信型作文

应用书信型作文指的是书信类的应用文,主要包括简历、广告、通知、道歉信、咨询信、投诉信、邀请信等。{iamafraid六年级作文}.

—般来说,英文书信的结构通常包括六个组成部分:信头(heading,包括寄信人地址和日期)、信内地址(inside

address,指收信人地址)、称呼(salutation)、正文(body)、结束语(complimentary close)、签名(signature),有时候还包括附言(postscript〉和附件(attachment),一般考试中只要求包括称呼、

正文、结束语和签名四个部分,写作应用书信型作文时内容要直截了当,中心突出,层次分明,格式正确,语言得体。

模板一:

①Dear______(称呼),

②I want to express my _______(感谢、歉意等)for_______(相关事件).Thank you for/ I will

be very grateful if _______(表示感谢).

③_______(相关陈述). However, the situation does not allow me to do this./

However, I am afraid I cannot accept your kind offer. _______(阐述原因).

④I sincerely hope that _______(表达真诚的愿望).

⑤Yours sincerely,

_______(写信人姓名)

模板二:

①Dear_______(称呼),

②_______ (客套话),but I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with/ I

venture to write you a letter about/ I am afraid I’m not content

with_______(简要概括投诉内容).

③Firstly, _______(问题1). Secondly, _______(问题2). Finally, _______(问题3). /

_______(问题1). What is worse, _______ (问题2).

④I/ We do hope that _______(提出意愿或建议).

⑤Yours sincerely,

_______(写信人姓名)

模板三:

①Dear_______(称呼),

②I am_______(简要介绍自己的身份)and hope_______(提出希望). I will be grateful if you

would be kind enough to _______(对方的相关行为).

③First, _______(咨询问题1). Second, _______(咨询问题2).Third, _______(咨询问题3).

④I wish_______(再次重申希望)./ I would greatly appreciate it

if_______(向收信人可能提供的帮助表示感谢).

⑤Yours respectfully,

_______(写信人姓名)

iamafraid六年级作文篇二

作文预测

【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】第一波~

【2016安徽中考英语写作预测范文】~~~今天就来范文第一波——“卫生与健康”

2016年安徽中考题预测

人物描写

行为习惯

卫生与健康

科技热点(如网上写作业的利弊)

当然啦,小樱花们不能只准备以上的预测话题,更加要重视的是安徽未考话题所能用到的相关句型和一些可套用在多种话题下的万能句型。毕竟,安徽中考英语作文题现在的变化形式很大,题目很新颖。但是本质不变,抓住主题,写好句型,作文随它怎么变~

今天的范文主题是“卫生与健康”。

你身边有人抽烟吗?请写一篇小短文说明抽烟的害处。要求80词左右。

提示:

1. 抽烟的坏处:

抽烟的人头发和衣服有难闻的气味;

他们的牙齿和手指会变黄;

抽烟的人更可能患上心肺疾病;

抽烟会危害到自己周围的人。

2. 戒烟的好处: 有益身体健康;节省开支。    

Smoking and Health

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

✎ 写前思考

How to express them in English?

1. 危害健康

2. 浪费钱财

3. 头发和衣服会有难闻的气味

4. 引发心肺疾病的可能

5. 牙齿、手指会变黄

6. 危害自己周围的人

✍ 对照翻译

1. smoking is bad for health

2. a waste of money{iamafraid六年级作文}.

3. terrible smell in one's hair and clothes

4. may cause heart and lung diseases

5. have bad/yellow teeth and fingers

6. smoking is bad for the people around you

OK,让我们看一下这道话题的范文1.0版本~~

Smoking and Health

Everyone knows smoking is bad for health. It's also a waste of money. People who smoke too much may not live long. Many people die from smoking each year.

Smokers have bad teeth, yellow fingers. Their hair and clothes may smell terrible. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. Smoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking.

有哪些地方还需要改进?

【关注标注的红色部分~】

Now,让我们看一下这道话题的范文2.0版本~~

Smoking and Health —2.0加强版!!

Everyone knows smoking is not only bad for health, but also a waste of money. People who smoke too much may not live long, because many people die from smoking each year.

Smokers have bad teeth, yellow fingers and terrible smell in their hair and clothes. A lot of people always cough because of smoking. What's worse, Smoking can easily cause heart and lung diseases.{iamafraid六年级作文}.

Smoking is bad for smokers, and it's also bad for the people around them, too. Giving up smoking is good for health, and can save a lot of money. I hope all the smokers can give up smoking so that we can have fresh air again!

之前的1.0文章句与句之间,缺少连接词,句子独立缺少联系。2.0作文看蓝色的补充部分,润色作文。

重点短语+句型打包:

1. 做运动;锻炼身体 take some exercise

2. 对……有害 be harmful to; do harm to; be bad for

3. 身体好 be in good health

4. 健康的饮食 a healthy diet

5. 感冒 catch/have a cold(前者强调动作,后者强调状态)

喉咙痛 have a sore throat

肚子痛 have a stomachache

发烧 have a fever

牙痛 have a toothache

头痛 have a headache

6. 这是一种保持健康的好方法。It’s a good way to keep healthy.

7. 多吃水果蔬菜,少吃垃圾食品 eat more fruit and vegetables instead of junk food

8. 早睡早起,身体倍儿棒 go to bed early and get up early in order to be in good health

小试牛刀

信息提示:

1. 健康饮食; 健康的生活习惯对于成长中的我们是非常重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应当是怎样的呢?请根据下面的信息提示写一篇短文,首句已给出。

2. 早睡早起,不熬夜;

3. 参加运动,强身健体。

要求: 1.根据信息提示,把握要点,适当发挥,不逐字翻译。

2. 字数在80词左右。

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参考范文

I think healthy habits are very important for us.

All of us want to be healthy. First, we should get enough sleep during the night. We can go to bed early and get up early. Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must have the right kinds of food. We should eat more fruit and vegetables and less meat. We should drink a lot of water. We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should do more exercise to build up our bodies. Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

iamafraid六年级作文篇三

9年级作文

Unit 1

你的英国笔友Frank想学汉语,请你给他写一封信,告诉他如何学习汉语。

要求:1. 语句通顺,书写工整

2.可用所提示的词语,也可以适当发挥

3. 词数:60-80

(提示词语:go to Chinese classes, make friends, listen to the radio, dictionary, useful, read Chinese stories, talk with, difficult, ask a Chinese teacher for help„)

Dear Frank,

How’s it going? I miss you.

I know you want to learn Chinese now. I have some good ideas. First, you can go to Chinese classes and make Chinese friends. Then, you must listen to the radio in the morning, and read Chinese stories. It's good for your listening and speaking. If you see some words you can't understand, you can by looking up dictionary. It's useful for you. Maybe, you can ask a Chinese teacher for help.

I hope you can speak Chinese well.

Friend, XXX

假如你叫张华,你的笔友李林在学习英语中遇到了

困难,给他发一封e-mail, 向他提供几条学习英语的建议。

要求:1. 词数80-100

2.条理清楚,词意连贯,字迹工整

Dear Li Lin,

I know it isn’t easy to learn English well, but I have some suggestions that help. You said you couldn’t understand people when they talked fast. Well why don’t you join an English club? You can get much listening practice there. Having conversations with friends is helpful, and also you can watch English-language TV. It’s the best way to improve your English. I believe you’ll be good at English if you work hard at it!

Yours,

Zhang Hua

P6 3c Write an article about the things that have helped you the most in learning another language. I think the best way to learn English is to use it. Every morning I read English aloud after I get up. I practice my listening skills by watching English-language videos. Every Friday afternoon I go to the English club to practice conversations with friends. I think it helps me with my speaking skills. Oh, keeping a diary in English is also helpful.

In my free time, I usually listen to English songs. It also helps. Now I can sing many English songs. What do you think is the best way to learn English? Can you tell me?

P7 SC2 Xu Zheng won a prize for his essay about the importance of English. Later, a reporter from the school magazine interviewed him. Use the reporter’s notes to write an article about Xu Zheng.

Xu Zheng is a middle school student. He won a prize for his essay about the importance of

English. He likes taking notes, watching movies and listening to pop songs. He finds the pronunciation is difficult. And native speakers speak English too quickly. He often learns English by making up conversations and speaking to friends in English. He thinks most people speak English as a second language. English is used around the world for computers and also used in science. English can help us understand many new books and movies.

Unit 2

假如Lily是你的朋友,你与她一起长大, 她的变

化让你吃惊。请根据以下内容介绍Lily的变化。

In the past: straight hair, quiet and shy, not like English, like singing.

Now: tall, short and curly hair, outgoing, like English very much, like sports.

Two days ago, I met my friend Lily. To my surprise, she has changed a lot in the last few years. She used to have straight hair. But now she is tall and has short and curly hair. She used to be really quiet and shy. Now she is so outgoing. And in the past, she used to hate the English class. But now it's exactly opposite. She used to like singing, so that we often went to concerts. But now her favorite hobby is sports.

写一篇文章,说明你小学与初中学习方面的变化。

要求:1. 词数80左右

2. 条理清楚,语意连贯

My life changed much. When I was in primary school, I used to study four subjects, but now I have seven subjects. I used to like math, but now I find it so difficult for me. I used to like tests, but now hate them. When I was young, there was little homework every day. So I had much time to play. But now I’m a middle school student. I have to study hard for tests.

P15 SC2 Look at the pictures and write about Yu Mei.

It seems that Yu Mei has changed a lot. She used to be short when she was younger, but now she is much taller. She used to have long, curly hair, but now she has short, straight hair. She used to play soccer, but now she is outgoing and friendly. We all like her very much. We are good friends.

假如你是李华,这个学期刚转到一所新学校。请根据下面表格中的信息,介绍你的一些变化。

I have changed a lot since I moved to this new school this term.

I used to have many friends and be outgoing, but now I have few friends, and I become a little quiet. In the old school, I used to spend much time playing with my friends, but now I have to spend most of my time on my schoolwork. I used to have no interest in my lessons, so I usually got bad grades. However, now I become more interested in my studies, and my grades are improving a lot.

Unit 3

P23 SC2 Read the article. Write a letter to the editor agreeing or disagreeing. Explain your reasons.

Dear Editor,{iamafraid六年级作文}.

I would like to reply to the article “Helping and learning” in your last newsletter. I agree with some ideas and disagree with others. The article said that students should be allowed to do these things, such as going to an old people’s home. I agree, and we should have a special day to help others. By doing this, we can understand the society more. But I disagree that students should be allowed to have Friday afternoon off to volunteer and help others. I think we can do that on Saturday or Sunday. As for Friday afternoon, we should join different clubs. That would be more fun.

Yours sincerely,

**

最近你和父母针对“青少年该不该在周末与朋友外出”进行了讨论。请根据下列表格中的信息提示,以“Should teenagers go out with friends on weekends?”为题,写一篇英语短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

要求:1. 所写内容需包括表格中提供的父母的想法

2. 至少给出你的三个想法。

3. 80词左右

Should teenagers go out with fiends on weekends?

Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with friends on weekends. My parents think that teenagers should stay at home on weekends. They should go over their lessons. And they could have enough time to have a good sleep. They also think teenagers should help parents do some housework on weekends.

In my opinion, we teenagers should be allowed be go out with friends for fun on weekends, so we can relax more. And we can also share ideas with each other. What’s more, we can also take some exercise together to keep it.

国有国法,家有家规。不同的学校,校规也可能不同。假如下面表格中的内容是你所在学校的校规,请根据表格中提供的内容,描述你们学校的校规。词数80左右。

Different schools have different rules. We also have many rules at school. Students are not allowed to bring mobile phones to school because they can make a lot of noise. But we can bring drinks and dictionaries to school. We’re not allowed to run in the hallway because it is dangerous. But we can play basketball, run and do other exercises on the playground after class. Coming to school late and getting the ears pierced are not allowed in our school. Could you please tell me what your school rules are?

Unit 4

P31 SC2 Read the e-mail from Fran and write a reply.

Dear Fran,

I’ve got your e-mail. After I read your e-mail, I just want to give you some advice. First, I think you should help your friend Mei set up her confidence. If she has confidence in herself, she won’t be terrified of speaking in front of other people. Second, it’s a good chance to practice English. Don’t take it as a contest. Third, if your friend is really hard at everything, though she fails, nobody will blame on her. Your friends and other students will understand her. Finally, it’s important to take part in the activity, but not the results. I really hope your friend will win this contest. Wait for your good news.

Yours,

Knowledgeable

阅读下列邮件,然后根据要求写一封回信。

{iamafraid六年级作文}.

Dear Yang Fen,

Now I am new here. I can’t understand what the English teacher says, and I am afraid of talking with the classmates here. But the biggest problem for me is that I can’t sleep the night before a big exam. Could you help me?

Yours,

Wang Li

要求:{iamafraid六年级作文}.

请根据王林的困难,运用以下句型给出建议。80词左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

You should„

Why don’t you„

If I were you, I would„

Dear Wang Lin,

I’m glad to hear from you. I have some suggestions that may help you.

First, you said you couldn’t understand what the English teacher said. Well, you can try to listen

for the most important words, not every word. And after class you should do more listening practice.

Second, you may feel shy to talk with your new classmates. Well, you can try to talk to someone who looks friendly.

Lastly, don’t be afraid of exams. If I were you, I would drink some milk and have a good sleep to face the next day’s exams.

I hope you will do better in English and get along well with your new classmates.

Yours,

Yang Fen

我们经常听到有些孩子抱怨父母不理解他们,父母与孩子之间存在着代沟。假设你是一位父亲或母亲,你会怎样处理与孩子之间的关系。

要求:语句通顺,过渡自然,80词左右

提示:1. 多交流,增进相互了解;

2. 不要总是抱怨孩子,应当多鼓励;

3. 给孩子适当的娱乐时间;

4. 为孩子树立一个好榜样

If I were a parent, I would not always complain that my child doesn’t understand me. I would communicate with him or her. I wouldn’t say I wasn’t like this at his or her age. They could have their hobbies, such as listening to pop music, watching action movies, choosing their own clothes and friends, etc. If I were a parent, I would encourage them to have fun. I would force them to study all day. I would encourage them however a little progress they had made. The most important thing is that I would be a good model for them and win their respect.

Unit 5

P38 Write another paragraph about Bell Tower using these notes.

Then we interviewed some other neighbors. Everyone had their own ideas. Chu family said, “Late night, we found footsteps in the hallway. We thought it might be the neighbors, so we didn’t mind it at all.” Lao Zheng said, “I thought someone trying to get in the window when I heard the noise. But I couldn’t find anyone. At last, I thought it might be the wind.” Xiao Ning said, “Each time when I get home, I can find garbage in front of my house, so I think it might be cats which often eat near my home.”

假如你是Mike,你的好朋友Lucy的宠物狗-Mary,走失好几天了,为此,她感到很焦虑。请给Lucy写封信,安慰她,并推测狗可能会在哪里,在做什么。

要求:1. 书信格式要正确。

2. 运用以下句式进行推测:

She might „

It is possible that„

3. 80词左右。

Dear Lucy,

iamafraid六年级作文篇四

新外研版八年级上册英语M1至M6作文

书面表达

1. 大明在英语学习中遇到了以下问题:大明喜欢英语,但是对他来说学英语是困难的。他能够听懂英语老师讲的课,但是他很害羞。他不敢喝同学用英语谈话。他花很长时间记忆新单词,但是很快就忘。他也不擅长英语语法。假如你是大明, 请针对以上问题,给语言博士写一封,求助学习方法。

Dear Language Doctor,

I’m Daming. I like English very much. But it’s difficult for me to learn English. I understand my teacher in class. But I am a shy boy. I’m afraid to talk with my classmates in English. It takes me a long time to remember new words. I will forget them quickly. I am not good at grammar, either. What should I do?

Best wishes,

Daming

2. 假设你是语言博士,请根据大明的问题,回复一封信。

Dear Daming,

You need to practise speaking more often. Why not try to speak English as much as possible? You can talk about films and songs with your classmates in English. Don’t be shy. Just try.

It is natural to forget new words. I suggest you write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them, and try to use them.

Grammar is important. What about writing down your mistakes in your notebook? And don’t forget to write down the correct answers next to the mistakes.

Best wishes,

Language Doctor

3.北京和德州作比较。

Beijing is the capital of China. It’s in the north of China. The population of it is over twenty million. Beijing is over 5000 years old. It is famous for Roast Duck and the Great Wall.

Dezhou is smaller than Beijing. It is in the northweat of Shandong. It has a population of seven million. It is a younger city than Beijing. It is famous for Dezhou Chicken. The roads are wider than that of Beijing. Beijing’s traffic is heavier than that of Dezhou.

4.东北虎主要生活在吉林省长白山地区,以捕猎动物为食,走起路来很轻,跳跃高度可达两米。东北虎会游泳,但不会爬树。由于人们砍伐森林,东北虎越来越少。人类为了虎骨和虎皮而滥杀东北虎。如今,政府正在建立自然公园来保护它们。 Northeast tigers mainly live in Changbaishan area of Jilin Province. They can walk quietly and jump as high as two meters. They can even swim but they can’t climb up trees. There are fewer tigers now than before, because people cut down more trees. And people killed tigers for their bones and fur. The government is building lots of nature parks to protect northeast tigers.

5.请根据提示向外国友人简单介绍黄山。1. 位于安徽省南部,是中国著名的旅游圣地。每年有大批中外游客前去观光。2.乘汽车去大约要花3个小时,也可以乘火车或飞机。3.登山可领略云海(the sea of clouds),奇松(wondrous pines),怪石(unique rocks)等秀丽的风景及清晨美丽的日出。

The Huangshan Mountain is one of the most famous mountains in China. It lies in the

south of Anhui. Every year thousands of Chinese and foreigners pay a visit here. It’s not far from here. It takes you about three hours to get there by bus. You can also go there by train or by plane. While you are climbing the mountain, you can enjoy the sea of clouds, wondrous pines and unique rocks around you. In the early morning when the sun rises, the sky looks very beautiful. It’s really a nice place to visit.

iamafraid六年级作文篇五

I made it 作文

I made it

Nowadays, many people are afraid when they face the problems. Let me introduce my problem and how I solve it.

I got low grades in English, I didn’t give up but make arduous efforts. I not only listening carefully in class but also work hard at home. I have done some revision since I failed the exam. I didn’t think I can remember words that like turning tide, but in my perseverance make me believe noting is impossible you have a willing heart. In the end, I sorted problems to ask teachers and classmates for help, so that I improve my grades.

I was proud of mine and I gained confidence from successfully solving my problem.

I try my best and I made it.

iamafraid六年级作文篇六

Unit 2 I used to be afraid of the dark同步作文练习

Unit 2 I used to be afraid of the dark同步作文练习

【单元话题分析】

随着年龄的增长、时间的推移, 人们的相貌、性格、兴趣爱好可能会发生变化,人们的行为习惯、生活环境也会发生些许变化。本单元的话题就是谈论变化,运用目标语言(如used to等 )描述自己生活中的一些变化情况。该话题常见的命题方式是要求学生根据文字提示、表格提示和图片提示等归纳、整理,写出条理清晰的短文,描述人物或事物的今昔变化。写作时要注意顺序得当,主次分明。由于本话题涉及到了过去和现在的情况,因此,要注意恰当的使用过去式和现在时,写作时尽量作到句式多样。

【写作指导】

1、本单元话题的特征是通过今昔比较发现变化。写作时要注意对作为描写对象的人或事物进行仔细的思考和观察,根据思考和观察的结果客观地将对比情况告诉他人。在完成考试题时,要仔细理解文字、表格和图片等提示,答题时不要遗漏内容要点。

2、注意写作的顺序,做到顺序得当,主次分明。理顺要点在所给提示,按事件先后的顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序,分出层次。如果是看图作文,则要按图构思,这样做既可避免要点遗漏,又可使表达内容条理清楚。

3、尽可能在作文中使用多种句式,不可一种句式从头用到尾,篇幅不宜过长。

【佳篇欣赏】

A

My Life Has Changed

Dear Robby,

I haven’t seen you for ages. How are you? Do you play the piano every day now? I study in a junior middle school now,I am always busy with my lessons. I used to play the piano every evening, but now I can’t. I have to do my homework. As you know, I used to have lots of hobbies, but now I just have no time for them. I gave up collecting model cars, sent away my dog and stopped painting. I used to enjoy myself with my friends at weekend, while I spend most of my time doing my lessons now. My life has changed a lot, I feel frustrated.

What about the life of middle school students in your country? I hope you can enjoy yourself.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Jay

B

My Mother Has Changed

My mother is 42 years old. She is a good mother. Recently, my father and I found that my mother has changed a little.

She used to be very kind and gentle, smiles were always on her face. But now she gets angry easily and seldom smiles, she even gets upset if I speak too loud. In the past, she would smile and say “It doesn’t matter” if I made mistakes. Now, if I do something wrong, even it is a minor mistake, she will shout at me and will tell me a lot of “You should…” In the next few days ,she will talk about my mistakes angrily.

I am really worried about my mother, is she ill?I really miss my kind and gentle mother.

C

My Childhood

I spent my childhood in a small city.

There was a small river in the south of the city. My father used to take me there to catch fish on weekends. When we were tired, we always slept for a while under the big tree. At that time, weekends were a happy time for children. My little friends and I used to climb up the trees to play even it was dangerous.

When I was very young, I was afraid to sleep alone because I used to be afraid of the mouse, I thought they would bite me and take away my toys. I was really a little fool then.

I have a happy and colorful childhood. It is the best part of my memory.

【原创习作点评】

(改自江苏省南通市中考题)请你按照下面表格的提示,写一篇题为“Changes in

要求:1.2.或者以单项对比的方式写一篇短文;

3.词数:80词左右(包括已经写出的单词)。

Changes in My Hometown

Over the past 10 years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

分析:本篇作文的题目和要点已经给定,有两种写法,一是今昔整体对比,也就是先说明过去的总体情况,再说明现在的总体情况;

二是单项对比,也就是先说明过去的房子是什么样子的,而现在的房子是什么样子的,按照不同的比较项目逐一列举。最后也可通过对比,表达自己对家乡变化的喜悦之情或对家乡的热爱。 在选词方面,同学们可灵活运用本单元重点结构used to do/be 或there used to be/do,注意正确使用一般过去时。

1、Jack以前在学习上不愿下功夫,学习成绩也不好。在朋友John的帮助下,他2. 简单表述自己对这一问题的看法。

_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:

Jack is a student at No.2 School. He lives with his uncle because his parents work in another city. He does really well in his subjects. But he used to be a “problem student”. He was always late for school. What was worse, he didn’t listen to the teachers carefully in class and he never finished his homework on time. His teachers and classmates were very worried about him. John,a top student in the class, decided to do something to help him. He used to talk with Jack every afternoon after school. He did his homework at Jack’s home so that he can help his with his problems and help him review his lessons. At the end of the school year,Jack did better in the

exams, he made great progress. Now, with the help of John,Jack is careful about his lessons, he is trying his best to do it well. John now is Jack’s best friend. I think Jack is really lucky, he got two things ---true friendship and good grades.

2、马上就要初中毕业进入高中了,你是否还记得丰富多彩的小学生活,小学生活与你现在的学习生活有什么区别吗?请以此为主题写一篇80字左右的短文。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________One possible version:

My life has changed since I became a middle school student. When I was in primary school,I used to study fewer subjects,but now I have nine. I used to spend some time playing

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