goodbehavior作文初三

goodbehavior作文初三篇一

英语作文good

中考—书面表达

（一）

假如你是Hope Middle school的一名学生，请你用英语写一篇60个词的短文，向你介绍一下你们学校的概况。短文包括以下几个要点：

1．校园（school campus ）

2. 老师和同学。

3． 学习情况

（二）

根据提示，写一篇短文（100个词左右）。

假如你英语学得很好，请你在英语班会上介绍一下学习英语的体会。

1. 简况：学习英语已有3年多。起初觉得英语难学，发音不好，单词拼不准确，不会语法规则，后来，在老师和同

学们的帮助下取得了很大进步。

2. 体会：要在短时间内获得最佳的学习效果，非下苦功夫不可。课内外要多听、多说、多读和多写。

3. 建议：对同学提出适当建议，以供他们学习参考。

（三）

根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。

你原来身体状况不好，经常感冒，经过一段时间的锻炼，你感到身体好了，学习效率也明显提高了。此时校报英语角正在征集“Sports and Health”的文章，你想就此机会写一写你参加体育活动后的感受。

提示词语：the Physical Trainning Centre体育健身中心 join in, energetic精力充沛

（四）

请你以“The more money one owns , the more friends he will have ?”为话题，写一篇80-100词左右的短文。 要求：文字通顺，条理清楚。

(五)

很多人都希望能在事业上有所成就， 但不是所有人都能取得胜利。 成功需要顽强的意志，锲而不舍的努力，勤奋的精神。请你以此为重要内容，写一篇100自左右的简短发言。

（六）

Zhang Hua 是一个中学生。在上星期五下午放学途中，她在地上捡到了一个钱包(wallet)。请根据图画内容和所给的单词，写一个短文。

关键词：on one’s way home, wallet, card, have to wait, in a hurry, thankful, refuse, though

（七）

根据图画内容和所给词汇完成一篇短文。

要求：1、字数80个词左右。

2、短文题目和前两句已给出。

3、所给词语如下：always, take exercise, like, sports, such as, go to bed, get up, take care of, take a bath（洗澡）, every day, wash, before meals, all kinds of, healthy food, like, fruit, so, look, heal

thy

How Li Ming Keeps Fit

It’s important for us to keep healthy. Li Ming gives us a good

example. He______________________________________________________

（八）

老师让同学们讨论网上购物 (Internet shopping) 的利（advantages）与弊（disadvantages），根据下列信息，请你代表你们组做个发言。

好处：方便(convenience)，24小时营业，不用排队（queue with）；不足：看不见物品，不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣……

要求：1. 语言流畅，规范；2. 包含提示内容，并作适当发挥；3. 80 词左右。

（九）

假如你以前是一个不求上进的学生,初二时,你班来了一位随父亲打工进城的学生小雷,他的家境及学习态度改变了你的观点……

要求:1.语言流畅,语法规范; 2.要举出1个例子说明小蕾的贫穷和学习精神,如买不起5元钱一本的练习册(exercise book)…3.展开联想,适当发挥. 4.词数为80-100.

提示词:change, be not paid well (工资不高), afford, lend, return, from then on, value(珍惜), top

（十）

现代化的世界里,广告无处不在。有人喜欢广告,有人讨厌。请你来当评论家，谈谈自己的高见,说说广告的优点与不足。

词数为80词左右。 提示词:cheat 上当,受骗

（十一）

你在2004年暑假到一家饭店工作,你为饭店刷盘子,打扫卫生。每天工作7个小时,为期4周,赚了200元钱。这项工作辛苦而枯燥,使你感到很疲劳,但你从中体验到了钱来之不易。每想到新学期,你将用自己赚的钱买书,便感到非常的骄

傲与自豪……

要求: 1.语言通顺,流畅,语法正确; 2. 适当发挥,谈谈自己的感想; 3. 词数为 80 词左右。

(十二)

你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗? 请以Why should we protect wildlife animals?为题,用英语写一篇短文,说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数为80 词左右。

写作提示: 1. 为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中; 2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要;

3. 我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。

提示词语: wildlife(野生的) ,endangered, tiger, panda, destroy(破坏),fur, take measures(采取措施),plant, tree, build a birdhouse

（十三）

请以“We Learn More Outside the Classroom”为题，从你的个人角度，谈谈你对课堂内外知识与实践的看法。 提示：1. 你认为，从课外学到的东西比在可党上学到的要多，对你将来的成长更有用。

2. 在课堂上，我们知识学到了怎样学习，而不会实践。

3. 希望不能把自己限制在课堂上，„„

（十四）

史密斯先生现在在鸡西市工作。他已经来这里三年多了，在工作中他结交了许多中国朋友。他常说他很喜欢与中国人共事，他将一直在这里工作。直到……

要求：1、字数在50-60左右。

2、意思连贯、符合逻辑。

3、层次清晰，标点正确。

4、必须使用下列单词：Mr. Smith, work, now, he, three years, make, often, say, Jixi

书面表达（共1题，共15分）

目前，合江县城正在积极创建全国卫生文明城市，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建卫生文明县城”这一主题，根据下列提示写一封倡议书。

要点提示： 1. 爱护花草树木；

2．不在公共场所随地吐痰、乱扔垃圾；

3．遵守交通规则；

4．尊敬师长，礼貌待人；

5．团结友爱，助人为乐；

„„„„.

注意：

1． 字数在80字左右；倡议书应该包含所有要点；不要逐句翻译，但可适当发挥。

2． 倡议书的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

3． 参考词汇：traffic rules 交通规则；respect vt.尊敬

Dear schoolmates ,

Our Hejiang City is trying to set up a national civilized (文明的)and clean city . We know it includes excellent environment and good behavior . So the students of our school can do something for it.

Let’s start from ourselves !

The Student Union

June 13 ,2010

（一）

I am a student of Hope Middle School. My campus is big and beautiful. There are many tall trees and beautiful flowers. There is also a big playground.

Our teachers are all very kind and friendly. They work hard and teach us very well. They take good care of us, but they are strict with us.

There are forty-five students in our class. We all get on well with each other.

At school, we learn many subjects, such as Chinese, maths and English. We try our best to learn them well.

I love my school because it’s just like my home.

（二）

How to learn English well

It is more than three years since I began to study English．At first I found it quite difficult．I couldn’t pronounce well，spell the words correctly or remember the rules of grammar．With the help of my teachers and classmates，I have made much progress．Now I am getting on well with my English．

Three years’ study has taught me that one cannot learn English well without hard work．We must do m ore listening and speaking both in and out of class．And do more reading and writing as well. That is “Practice makes perfect”．{goodbehavior作文初三}.

So，in my opinion，we should work hard at English．That’s the most important thing. And we should also practise using it as much as possible．

（三）

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Sports and Health

My name is Lin Tao. I'm from Class 1, Grade Three.

I think sports are very good for our health and study. I have kept doing exercise for a long time. Several months ago, I was weak in health. I often had a cold. So I went to the Physical Training Centre every week. There I joined in swimming, playing basketball and some other sports. Now I'm feeling much better than before. I'm very energetic. Good health makes me study better now. I hope other students should keep taking exercise every day. Start right now!

（四）

Yesterday we had a discussion about whether we should keep animals in zoos.

Twenty students thought that it was good to keep animals in zoos because people could see many different kinds of animals there and animals were taken good care of in the zoos. Thirty students thought it not good for animals. Since the animals were kept in cages, they were not able to travel（walk, run）freely. Animals liked to live in nature.

（五）

The Way to Success

Everyone tries to achieve success in his / her career. But some finally attain their aims while others fail. Why? Some continue their cause to the end through their cause to the end through long period of hard struggles, but others are easily disappointed and stop halfway.

Strong will, perserverance and diligence are the tree essentials of success. A man of strong will and perserverance are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and diligence always has an inflexible sprit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Life is short and we have too much to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.

I believe that where there is a will there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can make constant efforts.

（六）

Zhang Hua is a student of Number 6 Middle School. Last Friday afternoon. When the school was over, she went home directly. On her way home, she saw a wallet lying on the ground. “Who lost it？” she thought. Then she opened it and saw there was some money and ten credit cards in it. She thought the man who lost the wallet must be very worried, so she stayed there and waited. She had to waited and waited. Then a man ran to her in a hurry. He asked Zhang Hua if she saw a wallet on the ground. He said there was some money and ten credit cards in it. They were very important to him. Zhang Hua gave the wallet back to him. The man was so thankful that he gave 100 yuan to her. But Zhang Hua said, “No, thanks.” She refused the man and went home quickly. Though it was late to get home, she felt very happy.

（七）

It’s important for to keep healthy. Li Ming gives us a good example. He always takes exercise. He likes sports such as swimming, running and playing basketball. He goes to bed at 10 at night and gets up at 6 in the morning. He takes care of himself. He takes a bath every day and washes his hands before meals. When he has meals, he eats all kinds of healthy food like fish, eggs, vegetables and meat. He also eats a lot of fruit. So he looks strong and healthy.

（八）

goodbehavior作文初三篇二

新九年级各单元作文指导

Unit 1 How can we became good learners?

Dear Wenxin,

There are three good ways to learn English.(有三种学英语的好方法) One way is being interested in what you are doing.（一种方法就是对你正在学的感兴趣）If you are interested in something, your brain will be more active and you will pay more attention to what you learned.（如果你对什么感兴趣的话，你的大脑就会更活跃并且你会对你所学的更加注意）If you like music, I think you should listen to English songs.（如果你喜欢音乐，我想你应该听英语歌）If you do this, you will be able to improve your pronunciation.（如果你这么做了，你就能够提高你的发音水平）

It is also a good idea to read English books because well-written books can teach you many new words and how they are used.（看英语书也是个好办法，因为写得好的书可以教你很多新单词以及怎样运用他们）

You could try to improve your English by watching English movies.（你还可以通过观看英语电影尽量提高你的英语）This will help you to improve your listening and speaking skills as you will have a chance to listen to natural speech.（由于你有机会听到纯正的发音，这样做也会帮你提高你的听和说的技能）

I hope these three ways will work well for you!(我希望这些方法会对你有帮助!)

Your friend,

Li Ting

Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious!

Dear Sue,

My favorite Chinese festival is the Spring Festival(我最喜欢的中国节日时春节). It is celebrated on the first day of the Chinese lunar calendar(它在中国农历的第一天庆祝).

Before the festival, our houses have to be cleaned and we need to buy new clothes for a new year’s coming(在节前，我们的房子必须打扫干净，而且我们要为新年的到来买新衣服).

On the eve, my family goes to my grandparents’ home for a reunion dinner(在除夕夜，我们全家去爷爷奶奶家吃团年饭). Our family usually has dumplings, fish, niangao and a great many dishes(我们家通常吃饺子，鱼，年糕和许多丰盛的菜肴).

On the first day of our New Year, people wear their new clothes and visit family and friends(在新年的第一天，人们穿上新衣服去看望亲戚，拜访朋友). Children will receive red packets filled with “lucky” money(孩子们会收到装满压岁钱的红包). That’s one of my favorite parts of this festival(那是我最喜欢这个节日的部分).

It’s my favorite festival because I enjoy spending time with my relatives(它是我最喜欢的节日因为我喜欢和我的亲人们一起度过时光). It makes me feel very happy and loved to be with my family!(这使我觉得非常高兴，而且我喜欢和家人在一起!)

Yours truly,

Mei Li

Unit 3 Could you please tell me where the restrooms are?

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Li Jie and I’m from Beijing, China(我来自中国北京). I’ll be coming to your school for a short study vacation this year(今年我要到你们学校进行一次短期的学习). I’d like to know more about your school and the courses I will study(我想知道更多关于你们学校的信息以及我将学到的课程).

First, I would like to find out the time of the course(首先，我想查一下课程所需的时间). Could you please tell me where and what I can eat in your school（你能告诉我在你们学校哪里吃饭和有些什么品种的吃的吗）? And do you know where I will stay(还有你知道我该在哪儿住吗)? I also wonder what activities I can do as a student and how I can get to school(我也想知道作为一个学生我能参加些什么活动以及我用什么方式上学呢). Could you tell me how much the course costs?(你可以告诉我学习的费用是多少吗？)

I would like to thank you for your help and I’m looking forward to your reply.(我衷心感谢你的帮助，并且期待你的回复)

Yours faithfully,

Li Jie

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Unit 4 I used to be afraid of dark.

How I’ve changed!

My life has changed a lot in the last few years(在过去几年里我的生活发生了很大的变化). I used to be short but I’m not anymore now(我过去个子矮但是现在我不再矮了). I became taller after I stated playing tennis(在我开始打网球后我长高了). Playing tennis three times a week is very good exercise(一天打三次网球是不错的锻炼). Now I’m taller and healthier(现在我更高更健康了).

The biggest change in my life was becoming much better in English(我生活中最大的变化时我的英语学习更好得多了). This is thanks to my English teacher, Ms. Wong, who gave me an interesting book to read(这得谢谢我的英语老师，王老师，她给我阅读了一本有趣的书). I enjoyed it so much that I started to read other books(我如此喜欢这本书以致于我开始看其他的书). This is the most important change because I am no longer afraid of the English language and I am doing better in my exams(这是最重要的变化因为我不再害怕英语语言而且我在考试方面更好了). This has made my parents even prouder of me.(这使我的父母更为我骄傲)

Unit 5 What are the shirts made of?

My city, Suzhou, is famous for its silk quilts(我住的城市苏州，因它的蚕丝被而闻名). These quilts are made of pure silk(这些被子是用天然桑蚕丝制作的). They are made by skillful workers in many silk factories in the city(他们是由城里许多家丝绸厂里的熟练技术工人制作的). The silk quilts are used to keep people warm and comfortable in bed(这些蚕丝被被人们用来保暖和使床铺舒适. They are known to be very comfortable because they are light and soft to touch(他们因舒适闻名是因为触感轻柔). In addition, they look beautiful as they are decorated with beautiful patterns(此外，他们看起来美丽而有装饰漂亮的图案). Many people from all over the world come to Suzhou to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but many other silk products too(来自世界各地的许多人来到苏州参观丝绸厂，不仅购买蚕丝被还买其他的丝绸产品).

Unit 6 When was it invented?

在学校举行的小发明大赛上，Andy的发明是Cool shoes，这种鞋子是用一种特殊材料做成的，可以根据脚的尺码调整大小。假设你是Andy，请你根据下面的问题提示，以My cool invention为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍自己的发明。

1. What problem do you want to solve? 2. What’s special about your invention?

My cool invention

Many of us may have to throw away our shoes when they are too small for our feet. (我们大多数人不得不扔掉我们的鞋子当他们对我们的脚来说太小的时候。)It’s a big waste（浪费）. And sometimes new shoes can be too tight for us to wear（而且有时候新鞋可能我们穿起来太紧了）.

This will not be a problem if you wear my Cool Shoes.（如果你穿我的酷鞋，这将不会是一个问题。）The shoes are made of special materials, which can grow with your feet and always fit your feet（这鞋是特殊材料做的，可以随着你的脚生长而且总是合你的脚。）. What’s more, you don’t need to worry about wearing too small or too big shoes anymore.（还有，你不必再担心穿太小或太大的鞋了。）

The shoes don’t cost much. So just have a try!（鞋子不贵。所以就来试一试吧！）

Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.

I do not agree with the rule that I must be home for dinner every day. (我不同意那条关于我必须每天在家吃饭的规矩。)This is because the rule affects my social life.（这是因为这条规矩影响我的社交生活。）It takes away important opportunities(机会) for me to spend time with my friends. (它夺走我和朋友们相处的重要机会。)As a result, my life is quite uninteresting(boring) sometimes. （结果，我的生活有时候相当的无趣无聊。）I think I should be allowed to have dinner with my friends once a week. （我想我应该被允许每周和朋友吃一次饭。）For example, I would like to ha0ng out with my classmates until after dinner on some Fridays.（比如，我想在一些星期五和朋友闲逛直到饭后。） I wish my parents will allow me to do this if I promise not to stay out too late and if there is no important family activity on those days.（如果我承诺不在外面呆太晚或者在那些天没有重大的家庭活动，我希望我的父母会允许我这么做。）{goodbehavior作文初三}.

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Unit 10 You’re supposed to shake hands.

Dear Ivan,

You must be excited about coming to China soon.(你一定对很快要来中国感到兴奋吧。) Let me give you some suggestions and advice about Chinese customs. （让我给你一些关于中国的建议和意见。）When you’re eating at the table, it’s impolite to start eating first if there are older people at the table. You should let them start first. When you are eating with（用） chopsticks. It is also impolite to stick your chopsticks into the bowl of rice and leave them there（把它们留在那儿）.

In our house, you’re supposed to take off （脱下）your shoes before you enter the house or just inside the front door. In our culture（文化）, we don’t usually hug or kiss people.

When you go out with people, you should tell the hostess（女主人） where you are going, who you are going with and when you will come back. In our culture, the hostess will worry a lot about the safety of her guests（客人）, so a polite guest will always let her know these things.

Have a safe trip（祝旅途愉快）, and I look forward to meeting you soon!（期待很快见到你！）

Best wishes,（衷心祝福）

Xiao Wei

Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected.

My lucky day

I will always remember the date February 28, 2004. This was the luckiest day of my life.

When I woke up that morning, the sky was very dark. I took the early bus to school as usual（像往常一样）. As soon as I arrived at school, it started to rain very heavily（雨下得很大）. Many students were late and were all wet（全身湿透） when they got to school. But I wasn’t because I caught（赶上） the early bus, I would have been late and wet as well（也）!

Later that day, I realized that I had forgotten my wallet（钱包） and couldn’t buy lunch. I couldn’t believe it. Then my friend Lisa said that she could share（分享） her lunch with me.

Finally, my older brother told me that night he could take me to the concert that weekend. I was so happy!

I think that was the best day I’d had in a long time.

What a lucky day!

综合题（一）

【写作任务】多数人认为，抄袭别人作业是一种不良现象。Anna的好友Simon不擅长数学，他经常抄袭Anna的作业。请你写一篇80词左右的短文，谈一谈你对此事的看法。

要点：1. 表明观点，Simon是否应该抄袭Anna的作业；2. 你对抄袭作业的看法。

【范文】It is known to us（我们都知道） that some students copy others’ homework. Here is an example. Simon isn’t good at math, so he always copies the homework from his best friend, Anna. In my opinion（我觉得）, Simon shouldn’t be allowed to copy the homework.

Copying others’ homework is a bad habit. For one thing, it’s against（违背） the school rules. The more we copy others’ homework, the less interest we will have in what we are learning（对我们所学就越缺乏兴趣）. For another, by copying others’ homework too often, we will lose the ability of thinking（失去思考的能力）. What’s more, homework is useful. It helps us know our weakness（弱点）.

We should try to finish our homework by ourselves instead of by copying. Let’s take action to prevent such bad behavior from spreading.（让我们积极行动起来防止这种坏行为蔓延。）

综合题（二）

【写作任务】假设你是某英文杂志的编辑Susan。你收到了一封来自张林的求助邮件。在邮件中，张林表示他学习压力大，脾气变得暴躁，最近经常和父母、朋友发生争吵。请你根据所给出的提示内容写一封邮件，给张林提供一些建议。{goodbehavior作文初三}.

内容包括：1. 向父母道歉，并和他们谈一谈你的情绪问题。2. 做一些休闲活动(听音乐，做运动„„)。

3. 将卧室涂成蓝色。蓝色会使你平静，放松。

要求：1. 邮件内容必须包含所有要点，语句通顺，逻辑合理。2. 80词以上。

【范文】Dear Zhang Lin,

Thanks for your e-mail.

I am very happy to give you some advice.

First, you must say sorry to （对…说抱歉）your parents and friends. Talk about your problems with 3

them. When you are in trouble(遇到困难), your parents and friends will always be there(在你旁边陪伴). They may help you. Second, you should spend some time listening to soft music(轻音乐), reading books or doing some exercise. They can make you relaxed. Third, try to paint your bedroom blue(把你的卧室涂成蓝色). This color can help you be calm and peaceful(冷静和平静).

I know that your problems make you feel upset(沮丧). I hope my advice can help you.

Best wishes,

Susan

综合题（三）

【写作任务】假如你是Bob, 你表妹Lucy进入初中已经一学期了， 她的生活中遇到了很多困难，请根据以下提示给她写一封信，阐述清楚她的问题，并针对每个问题提出你的建议。100词左右。

Lucy’s Problems: (Study)too much pressure; (Friendship)be afraid of talking to strangers a small circle; (Health)get pimples(长痘痘)……

【范文】Dear Lucy,

I’m so sorry to know you’ve had so many problems since you came to the middle school for one term. Don’t worry, I can give you some suggestions to help you.

First, about study, you told me you were under too much pressure(压力山大). I think you can ask your parents or teachers for help.

Then, you said you were afraid of talking to strangers(害怕和陌生人说话) and only had a small circle of friends(朋友圈子很小). In my opinion, you’d better be more outgoing and brave enough to make friends with more classmates.(你最好是更外向些，并且够勇敢地去和更多的同学交朋友。)

Finally, as for your health（至于说到你的健康）, I think because you often get pimples（长痘痘）, you can’t eat any hot food(燥热的食物) and eat more vegetables.

In a word(总而言之), being more outgoing, doing more sports and having good eating habits(养成良好的饮食习惯) can help you a lot in your life(在你的生活中会有很大帮助). Hope to hear your good news. 综合题（四）

【写作任务】现在越来越多的人认识到阅读的重要性。现在，请以“The advantages of reading”为题，写一篇90-110词的英语短文， 内容必须包括：1. 阅读可以愉悦身心；2. 阅读可以增长知识；3. 再给出一条你的理由，并简要说明；4. 应该有明确的主题、合理的支撑以及适当的结尾。

【范文】 The advantages of reading阅读的优点

Now more and more people realize(know) the importance of reading, because reading has a lot of advantages（优点）.

First, reading can make us happy. When we are reading, we can enjoy ourselves（自娱自乐） and fell very pleased（觉得非常高兴）.

Second, reading can bring us more knowledge(知识). We can know(了解) more about the world after reading. And also we can improve(提高) ourselves（自身的修养、素质）.

For me(对我而言), I like reading because reading can improve my scores(提高我的分数). I can get good grades(取得好成绩) after reading.

So, I think reading is very useful and important. I like it.

综合题（五）

【写作任务】假设某英语课上，老师要求写题为“在日常生活中如何用实际行动关爱和尊重父母”的英语作文。现在，请根据下列提示完成该英语作文：1. 我们应该尊重父母。例如：仔细聆听父母讲话；

2. 我们应该帮助父母。例如：替父母做些家务；3. 我们应该关爱父母。例如：我们应把自己事情做好（按时休息，自觉完成作业等）让父母少操心；4. 建议：日常生活中如何更好地关爱尊重父母（2条）。

注意：1. 字数：90---110词；2. 文中不能出现考生及所在学校的真实名字。

【范文】 How to care and respect our parents in our daily life?

In our daily life, parents love us so much. Can we do something for them, too? Sure, but how?

First, we’d better respect our parents, such as listening to them carefully when they talk. Then, we should help them. Doing some housework is good. Next, we can do something to care them like going to bed on time, finishing our homework by ourselves and so on.

And I think in our daily life we shouldn’t argue with(和…争吵) our parents. We can say “I love you!” often to them.(我们可以常对他们说“我爱你们！”

Let’s do something for our parents right away!（让我们立即为我们的父母做点事吧！）

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goodbehavior作文初三篇三

初中作文辅导(初三适用)

初中作文辅导

作文开篇二十招

宋代大文学家欧阳修曾有诗曰：“文章看落笔，议论驰后先，破石出至宝，决高泻千川。”意思是说写文章要特别注重开篇落笔之处，如果下笔便石破天惊、涌现精华，则全篇就如高崖泻水，气势如洪。明朝诗人谢榛也说：“起句当如爆竹，骤响易彻。”同样强调了开篇应以爆竹骤响之势震彻全文。可见。文章的开头是相当重要的，特别是考场作文更是如此。如何利用开头在浩瀚文海中脱颖而出呢，现简略归纳出以下二十种方法，供参考：

⑴欲扬先抑，开发胃口

唉，老师怎么让我和他坐一个桌呢？她可是我班最凶的女生啦！就因为这，大伙都叫她“虎妞”。——《同桌》

⑵开门见山，直截了当

我和阿敏的交情可不一般——初中三年的同桌。对她，我有一肚子的话要说。

——《同桌》

⑶描形绘神，印象逼真

她，长得真丑：黄瘦的脸；尖尖的下巴；淡得几乎看不见的眉毛下，一双细眯的眼睛；鼻子扁而大；一口参差不齐的牙齿，略有黄色„„唉！甭提了，她的外表真不符合这么动听的名字——祝丽丽。——《同桌》

⑷自然交代，平引下文

新学期一开始，我就注意到一个问题：我们班三十三名男生，二十七名女生，男生两人一桌恰好多一名，女生亦如此，必将出现一个男生和一个女生同坐一桌的危机。可万万没想到这个危机会降临到我的头上。——《同桌》

⑸歌词开头，响彻云际

“明天你是否会想起/昨天你写的日记/明天你是否会惦起/曾经最爱哭的你„„”一曲悠扬的《同桌的你》从路边音像书店传了出来，那带着绵绵情思的乐曲，把我的思绪带回了三年前的时光„„——《同桌》

⑹排比反复，创造旋律

朋友，就是我可以为他献出真挚情感的人；朋友，就是我可以对他付出全部信任的人；朋友，欢乐时与我分享，危难时与我同行。人生中没有朋友，就像生活中没有阳光。我就有着这样的一个好朋友。——《朋友》

⑺设问开篇，无沿无边

往事如烟，随着时光的流逝，大都渐渐淡忘，而那双眼睛，怎能使我忘怀？——《朋友 ⑻名言指路，开宗明义

培根说过：“无真实朋友之人，可以谓之真可怜而永陷于孤独生活之人。”他的话道出了朋友的重要。是的，假如一个人丧失了友情，他简直无法生存在世界上。——《朋友》

⑼对比映衬，突出重点

随着岁月的流逝，许多人渐渐被我淡忘了，然而，有那么一双眼睛，一种声音一个身影，至今萦绕在我的心头，久久不能忘怀。——《朋友》

⑽倒叙开头，吸引读者

当我们乘着离开国防教育学校的时候，不知道为什么，泪水竟然在我的眼眶里打转。难道是留恋吗？是留恋那一段虽苦虽累但充满活力的生活，还是留恋那待人苛刻却真诚亲切的军人，我们的教官？——《朋友》

⑾拨乱反正，拨云见日

有人说，淡泊就是看破红尘，看透一切，认为一切都是假的、虚伪的„„这种看法是对淡泊的曲解。如果我们翻一下词典就会明白，“淡泊”是不追求名利的意思„„——《淡泊》

⑿泰山压顶，观点强现

目前，校园攀比之风肆虐，我认为这种风气确实需要刹一刹。——《攀比风，可休矣》 ⒀联想象征，奇妙无穷

一个梦，曾经在西方强盗的炮舰下埋葬，留下的是老一辈辛酸是泪珠不止的心痛和望眼欲穿的期盼作为见证。伴随着流泪的长江长大的我们也就少年已尝愁滋味，踩着前辈留下的印证期待，期待着有那么一天„„——《期待》

⒁环境描写，渲染气氛

十月九日又到了，鲁迅先生已经逝世六十年了。从傍晚到子夜，静静地，一个人坐在窗前，任冷雨打着窗棂。灯下一盆吊兰淡淡地涂抹一壁翠色书柜。夜风荡起，身上微微泛起寒意。想起了鲁迅先生，泪水就滑落下来。

⒂题记为冠，哲理为先

世间万物皆难逃自然辩证法，孰是孰非，孰优孰劣，孰喜孰忧，岂可一言以蔽之？——《假如记忆可以移植》

⒃博览群书，信手拈来

据说，在非洲的原野上，有一种食虫的花朵，色彩绚丽，芳香异常，许多飞虫抵御不了“诱惑”而葬身其中„„——《抵御“诱惑”》

⒄抒发情感，以情动人

暮色中，几缕炊烟从农舍里袅袅升起。我捧着一束栀子花，站在张老师的窗前。张老师，您还是那样忙碌？该歇歇了吧，今天是您的节日——教师节。我带着我的收获来看您来了。——《琐忆》

⒅以物喻人，含义深长

在一望无际的旷野上，一棵古老的树，虽然生命已到了最后一刻，但它仍然倔强的生长着。在它的身旁，一棵小树正在抽出嫩嫩的芽。老树的根枯了，它把生命的汁液输给了小树；老树的叶黄了，它把绿色的生命注入了小树。老树历经沧桑，走完了它艰难的历程。如今，小树刚刚抽枝吐叶，老树却离开了它„„这正像外公离开了我，他来不及接受我对他的报答之情，就匆匆离开了我。——《琐忆》

⒆解题铺陈，明示中心

责任，就是一个人分内应该做的事。军人，有保家卫国的责任；医生，有救死扶伤的责任；教师，有培养接班人的责任。工人、农民、职员、商人„„人人都有自己的责任。在我们的社会里，各行各业都有许多尽职尽责的人，他们组成了一道道最美的风景——请允许我，从这道道美丽的风景画卷中撷取一幅动人的画面吧。

⒇设置矛盾，引人入胜

“我就不信，你在这个班生活了两年多，对这个集体就会没有一点感情？„„”这是今天早晨班主任陈老师对我说的话。我望着陈老师愤怒的目光，委屈的眼泪直在眼眶里打转，心理说：“陈老师，你误会了„„我怎么能不爱我们的班级体呢？”

凤头豹尾酿佳作

好的开头是作文成功的一半，又称凤头。中考作文的开头尤其要充满吸引力。这样的开头一般有以下几种：

１．起兴式 这种形式的开头往往充满诗意，能引起阅读者的兴趣。如《人生因忙碌而精彩》的开头是这样的：

蜜蜂因忙碌于花丛之中而被人赞美，燕雀因忙碌于衔泥营巢而为人称道，人生同样因忙碌于理想追求而精彩纷呈。

主旨鲜明，能感染读者。

２．排比式 这种开头体现了流畅的文势，又能起到清晰地提挈下文的作用。《忙的苦与乐》这样开头：

现代社会的节奏加快，人们在忙中穿行，慨叹着忙的苦与乐。在我看来，忙的苦与乐渗透在生活的每一角落，忙的苦与乐考验着人们的品格灵性，忙的苦与乐昭示着时代的巨大变迁。

语句节奏明快，立意新颖，文意指向清晰可见。

３．名言警句式 这种形式的开头既增加了文章观点的可信度，也显现了文章语言的感染力。如《张弛有度》一文的开头这样写道：

南非总统曼德拉说过：“张弛有度是一种积极向上的人生态度。”我欣赏这样有弹性的人生态度。

简洁明了，气势不同凡响。

４．直奔主题式 如果作者不擅长文采，那就尽量直奔主题。如：

纷繁的社会，人们有各种各样的“忙”法；我要歌颂的“忙”，是为他人幸福而忙，为社会进步而忙！

不蔓不枝，主旨豁然明朗。

５．叙事引旨式 这种开头往往用于材料作文。它的特点是，运用最简洁的语言叙述集中蕴涵主旨的故事内容，然后自然引出题旨。如：

有两位修行僧在外云游，看见一位姑娘在水塘边踯躅。水塘太大了，她无法越过，一位修行僧默默抱起那位姑娘，跨过了水塘。晚上，另一位修行僧埋怨他说：“你不该抱那位姑娘，这有损佛门形象。”他平静地回答：“哦，是那位姑娘吧？我早把她放下了，你还抱着她吗？”

故事的简叙与主旨的引出衔连自然。

显然，以上几种开头能鲜明集中地亮出中心，能激起阅读者的兴趣，对阅读全文有着明显的引导功能。要写好这样的开头，必须具备两个条件：第一，构思成熟，全文内容已了然于胸；第二，有较强的遣词造句的能力，准确、简洁、生动，富有节奏感。

优美的乐章要有好的尾声，或余音袅袅，或震人心魄。议论文的结尾能起到归纳全文、照应全篇、深化主旨的作用，并可以综合运用议论抒情等手段，使文章意味深长，发人深省，回味无穷，又称豹尾。

这样的结尾，通常有以下几种：

１．名言归纳式 例如一位考生以“忙宜有度”为题，表达出“忙也应‘内紧外松’，切勿忙得疲于奔命，才能使合理的忙持之以恒”的主旨，颇有新意。文章的结尾这样写道：

古人云：“引而不发，跃如也。”让忙碌的人们在忙中反思，忙中积累，忙中锤炼，从而持久高效地忙，忙出一片璀璨夺目的天地！

作者以一句颇具哲理的古训，归纳全文，并拓展了文章的意蕴。

２．总结升华式 如《文武之道，一张一弛》的作者这样结尾：

综上所述，忙能让我们感受到生活的充实，但是我们的忙应有张有弛，这样，才能保证生活的质量，人人都能忙出效率，忙出成果，从而带来国家富强，人民幸福。

作者将张弛之道的效果，由个人而延及国家、人民，使文意丰富深化，自然升华了主旨。 ３．铺陈排比式 这样的结尾在内容上能照应前文，但又不是简单的重复，而是有深化主旨的作用，更兼语意亲切感人，语句富有节奏韵律，能使阅卷者击节称叹。如：

忙碌的身影，也已为现代化建设加瓦添砖；

忙碌的身影，也曾让世界为你感动呐喊；

忙碌的身影，也向关怀你的人倾诉爱的呼唤！

作者有意将三个排比句独立成行，强化了结尾的意图，给阅卷者留下了深刻的印象。 以上三种结尾形式常常互相兼容，使结尾的形式更为丰富。显然，要写好结尾，作者必须有着全文脉络的强烈的整体感，有着深化中心、升华主旨的强烈意识，遣词造句要抒发饱满的激情，从而使结尾蕴含震撼力。

好题如好茶

——浅谈话题作文拟题方法

话题作文是近几年中考语文试卷中一直采用的作文测试形式。“自拟题目”则是话题作文的一个重要写作要求。文章的标题犹如人的眼睛，可以让我们从中窥见人的精神面貌。在教学中，笔者经常发现同学们把话题当题目，这很难达到令人满意的效果。怎样教学生拟一个好的标题呢？如下几种方法不妨一试：

一、附加法

就是选取话题中的关键词，在其前后补充成分，使之成为标题。这种方法特别适合于以一个词为话题的作文。

比如以“幸福”为话题：《追求幸福》《追求幸福没有错》《体味幸福》《幸福是一种心情》、《幸福在哪里》《为了幸福而努力》等题目。

二、修辞法

1． 比喻式

如《小心这把双刃剑》，把移植人的记忆比喻为“在杀伤别人时也会杀伤自己的双刃剑”，准确而形象；《他们都选择了明月》，把“明月”比做“美好的心灵”。《凤凰的选择》，借凤凰而自喻，表达了自己愿在中考落榜后的艰难历程中涅盘出新我的强烈愿望。又如《灵魂美丑的试金石》《生命如花》《放飞灵感的白鹤》《拾起那一枚贝壳》《我发现女孩也可以做“太阳”》《家，我们成长的避风港》等，这样拟题，更加贴切、形象、新颖。《我渴望老师的“阳光”》，以“阳光”喻暖人的关爱，简洁含蓄。《人生之网》，题目带给人深思。

再如：《别抱怨手上的牌》（“挫折”话题），《点燃绿色的火焰》（“环保”话题），《请给老人一轮暖阳》（“孝”话题），《我爱曲线的生活》（“关注生活”话题），这些设喻佳题也都富于文学色彩。

2．比拟式

如《诚信“漂流记”》，把“诚信”拟人化，通过诚信巧遇“快乐”“地位”“竞争”的遭遇，得出富有哲理的结论：没有诚信不会长久，地位也是虚伪的，竞争也是会失败的。《出卖诚信》，把诚信当物卖，一斤多少钱，具有强烈的讽刺性。《品味初三》，把初三当做能咀嚼、品味的食物，显得意味深长。《“诚信”喊冤》《天空的诉说》等，使人如闻其声，如临其境。又如《我是网，我怕谁》《你听见冰川的脚步声吗？》《香烟的自白》《我是电》《树的“叹息”》《地球就诊记》，都运用了拟人手法，形象生动，别有韵味。

3．双关式

语义双关，如《灯》《药》，言在此而意在彼。《古井》《种子的力》《挑山工》等课题也采用了双关的修辞手法。又如：《冬日暖阳》《花落春仍在》（话题：温情）《从心做

起》（话题：亲情）等。

4．借代式

如《周庄，那一抹绿》，用—抹绿来借指周庄绿的天、绿的水、绿的房屋，显示“中国第一水乡”被一片绿色所笼罩的特点；《黑白债》紧扣母亲乌黑发丝中的白发展开叙写，揭示岁月无情、母爱无价这一真谛，借色彩代本体，寄托深情。又如《倾听自己的心跳》，“心跳”代指某次独特的自身经历；《人生需要掌声》，这一标题借“掌声”代“鼓励”，有创意。

5．引用式

文题中恰当地引用一些名言警句，能达到言简意赅的效果，又使作文增加一定的文化底蕴，如《前事不忘，后事之师》《己所不欲，勿施于人》《淡泊以明志，宁静以致远》《生于忧患，死于安乐》《直挂云帆济沧海》《少年心事当拿云》《知识就是力量》《走自己的路，让别人去说吧》《不幸是一所最好的大学》《做生活的强者》等。

《前不见古人，后不见来者》（“假如记忆可以移植”话题），表示对移植记忆的困惑，《横看成岭侧成峰》（“答案是丰富多采的”话题），《救救孩子》（“素质教育”话题），写生活对人的考验——《让暴风雨来得更猛烈些吧》（“关注生活”话题），《百年孤独》（“友谊”话题），《滴滴香浓，意犹未尽》（“亲情”话题），《潇潇雨歇》写某件发生于雨后的事件。

如引用流行歌词：《一笑而过》（“宽容”话题），《未来的主人翁》（“素质教育”话题），《我要的幸福》（“家庭”话题），《一千零一个愿望》（“心愿”话题）等。

6、设问式

用设问来引起读者的思索，如说明文的题目《地球是圆的吗？》《花儿为什么这样红？》；议论文的题目《老实人总是吃亏吗？》《什么样的青春最美》《“顺境出人才”吗？》等。又如《错？对！》，先问后答，以简驭繁，又穿插标点，构思巧妙。再如《我从日本邮局取回了什么？》（“效率”话题）《我是谁？》（“假如记忆可以移植”话题）等。

7、对偶式

如《朋友最真，友情最贵》《读智慧之书，做有用之才》《一头白发，满山青葱》《梦绕吴山翠，情随湘水流》（“环保”话题），《高高山顶立，深深海底行》（“人生感悟”话题），《斩断亲情，昭显正义》（“人与我”话题）等。

8、夸张式

如《那个障碍粉碎了我》（“挫折”话题）等。

9、呼告式

如《别了，漫画书！》（“书”话题），《给生活加点苦吧！》（“关注生活”话题），《回来吧，妈妈！》（“亲情”话题）等。

三、反常法（矛盾法）

逆向思维，力求出新：如《感谢你的敌人》《珍惜你的痛苦》《败了，多好》（“竞争”话题），《往事并不如烟》《以胖为荣》（“关注生活”话题），《真想做个后进生》《渴望停电》（“素质教育”话题）。又如《近墨者未必黑》《“闲