中考英语作文考纲分析

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中考英语作文考纲分析篇一

2015年中考英语作文预测十大考点

2015年中考英语作文预测—十大考点

一. 时事新闻, 国家政策, 家乡变化

1.据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计,每年有200万人死于吸烟,60万人死于二手烟。为此,我国规定,从今年5月1 日起,严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点,以―Saying No to Smoking‖为题,谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害;

2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病;

3. 吸烟影响青少年成长;

4. 二手烟同样有害;

5. 你的态度:面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?

注意:

1. 词数:80词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3. 参考词汇:lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟。

Saying No to Smoking

According to the WHO,2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on.

As is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

2. 从2006年起,我国政府(govemment)让所有儿童都有机会免费入学,但很多乡村的儿童学习条件还很艰苦。假设你叫Sam,请给你们学校的学生会(Student Union)写一封信,提一些建议。

要求语方通顺,建议合理,80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;卷面整洁,书写工整)内容包括:

阅读短文后,谈谈你的感想;

建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款,增添图书和教学设备;

希望乡村的孩子们能受到很好的教育,长大后为乡村服务。

Dear Student Union

I have just read an article on ―Hope Project‖ in an English newspaper. A girl named Xiao Juan was so poor that she couldn’t go to school. Hope Project made her wish of study come true. But do you know there are many thousands of children who can not go to school. I think Student Union organize the students and raise money for a primary school in the local village, and give away some books and Teaching equipments. I hope the children there can get better education, and work for the village when they grow up. Best wishes!

Yours truly

Sam

3. 自贯彻―规范办学行为‖以来,我们学生的学校生活发生了一系列变化。请根据下列表格中的要点

2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;

3.参考词汇:补课have extra classes

Great changes have taken place in our school since the government did something to control school management. In the past, we stayed in our school for nine hours every day. We had lots of homework and had extra classes at weekends. Our after—school activities were few and boring.

But now, we stay at school for less than seven and half an hours. We do homework for less than one and half an hours. It’s very exciting not to have extra classes on holidays. Our after—school activities are very colourful, such as playing balls, singsing, dancing, drawing and so on.

We are very happy to do like this. It is very important for the students to change our study habits. I think we could be interested in study.

二. 健康问题 健康问题是中考常考的话题,出题形式多样,有必要下苦功掌握。

典型例句

1. It is very important to keep healthy。

2. How can we keep healthy?

3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late。{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

4. We should eat the food healthily。

5. We should do more exercise。

6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7. I didn’t feel like eating anything。

8. I decided to see the doctor。

9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。

10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。

12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。

13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文: 1.健康一直是人们关注的问题,我校要举行以―关爱健康‖为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

(1)、保持健康的重要性;

(2)、保持健康的方法:.多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;再睡早起;勤洗手;

(3)、自己的看法(至少一条)。

注意:1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词;

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

2.近年来,中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。 要求:(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

(2)字数:60---80词。

(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

范文:Every one wants to keep healthy today, especially our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, especially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

3、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。―英语角‖打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。 参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

三. 关于环境保护问题

环境保护问题是中考热门话题,出现频率高,难度较大,必须掌握。

典型句子

1. It’s our duty to save water

2. As we know , water is very important to man,

3.we can’t live without water.

4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

5.But some people don’t care about it .

6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be done to stop the pollution.

7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。

8. It is very important to take care of our environment

9. We should not throw litter onto the ground

10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

11. We should plant more flowers and trees。

12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.

17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.

例文:

1.保护环境是每一个人的职责。请你写一篇以―Lower Carbon(低碳),Happier Life‖为题的英语短文。短文要点如下:

自己走路或骑自行车上学,父母骑车上班;(ride a bike, on foot)

节约用水,用电;(save, turn off, electricity)

将用过的课本留给低年级学生;(old books, next grade students)

购物时带上篮子,别用塑料袋。(basket, plastic bags)

要求:1.词数:80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译;

3.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。

Lower carbon, happier life

It’s our duty to protect the environment…………

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

It’s our duty to protect the environment. The environment is becoming worse and worse, we must do something to prevent people from polluting the environment. First, we can ride to school or go to school on foot and tell our parents to walk to work instead of driving the car. Second, we should save water and electricity by turning off the taps and lights in time when we don’t need them. Third, give the old books to the next grade students if we don't use them any more. By doing this, we can save many trees. At last, remember to go shopping with basket rather than plastic bags. I believe our life will become better and better if we can do these things.

Lower carbon, happier life. Let’s take actions.

2.地球是我们人类共同的家园。―低碳、环保‖已成为当今时代主题。目前,我市英语学会准备在全市中学生中开展以―Save(拯救)our earth‖为主题的英文征文活动。现请你根据以下三个方面的提示,写一篇70词左右的短文参评。{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

1.重要性:只有一个地球

2.主要问题:污染、疾病、灾难

3.措施:停止污染、保护大自然

参考词汇:disaster n.灾难 protect V. 保护

注意:(1)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名;

(2)文章标题已给出,但不计入总词数;

(3)可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。

Let’s Do Something to Save Our Environment

It is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The bottoms of the rivers and lakes have become grass land. The water is becoming less and less because of the bad weather.

So everyone should do something to save our environment. First, we should save every drop of water, such as turning off the taps after using it and recycling the water. For example, we can water the plants and clean the rest room with our used water. Second, we should save energy, such as less turning on the lights

and turning off the lights when we leave;do more walking, more bicycling and less driving and so on. Third, we should ask our government to control the pollution from the factories.

Let’s act now from everything to save our environment. Don’t let our tears be the last drop of water in the world!

3. 环境问题:今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重..........,如何保护我们的环境?请以― How to protect/save our environment/world? ‖为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾等。 要求:如何改善/保护环境?至少:3---4个方面, 80字左右的。 How to protect/save our environment/world?

The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are cutting down, some animals is getting less and less. Some factories is poring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources is getting less and less…etc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. People’s health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollution. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.

We shouldn’t throw away rubbish everywhere. We want to recycle, reduce, reuse things .Don’t waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We don’t use plastic bags. We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful.

四. 语言学习

这是中考中的老话题,近几年常考,形式多样。典型例句:

1. My favorite subject is English。

2. More than three quarters of the information on the Internet is in English。

3. It is used by travelers and business people all over the world。

4. China has joined the WTO and the Olympic Games will be held in China. English becomes more and more useful。

5. So English is very important and I like English very much。

6. We have a lot of fun in the English class。

7. Our English teacher often makes us happy in the English class。

8. I hope I can go abroad one day, and then I can speak to foreigners in English。

9. I like English and try my best to learn it。

例文

1. 假如你是张华,你的加拿大朋友Dave来信向你了解学习汉语的方法,根据以下要点用英语写封回信。除以下外再提出一条建议。

要点:1.加入汉语班学习,可向老师学习并与同学练习汉语;

2.看中文电视、读中文书、报纸、杂志;

3.听、唱汉语歌,有助于汉语词汇;

4.交中国朋友,即可练习口语又可了解中国。

要求:1.要点齐全,可适当发挥;80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

2.文中不能出现自己的地址、姓名及所在学校名称。

Dear Dave,

I’m glad to get your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well. Here is my advice. First, As a foreign, you need to go and join a Chinese learning activity group, the3 most important thing is to

中考英语作文考纲分析篇二

2014年中考英语作文预测—十大考点

2014年中考英语作文预测—十大考点

一. 时事新闻, 国家政策, 家乡变化

1.据世界卫生组织(WHO)统计,每年有200万人死于吸烟,60万人死于二手烟。为此,我国规定,从今年5月1 日起,严禁在公共场所吸烟。请你结合图片和下面所给要点,以―Saying No to Smoking‖为题,谈谈吸烟的危害。

1. 吸烟有害;

2. 吸烟导致咳嗽、肺癌等疾病;

3. 吸烟影响青少年成长;

4. 二手烟同样有害;

5. 你的态度:面对别人吸烟、给烟怎么办?

注意:

1. 词数:80词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数;

2. 应覆盖所有要点;可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;

3. 参考词汇:lung cancer肺癌; secondhand smoke二手烟。

Saying No to Smoking

According to the WHO,2 million people died from smoking and 600 thousand from secondhand smoke every year. So smoking is banned in China in all public places both inside and out from May 1 on.

As is shown in the picture, smoking is bad for people’s health. It may cause many diseases such as cough, lung cancer and so on. Smoking is especially harmful to us teenagers because our bodies are still growing. Secondhand smoke does harm to us as well. So we must do something to keep away from smoking. If someone offers a cigarette, we should refuse it. And if anyone smokes nearby, we should try to stop it. From now on, every of us should follow the law and say no to smoking.

2. 从2006年起,我国政府(govemment)让所有儿童都有机会免费入学,但很多乡村的儿童学习条件还很艰苦。假设你叫Sam,请给你们学校的学生会(Student Union)写一封信,提一些建议。

要求语方通顺,建议合理,80词左右。(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;卷面整洁,书写工整)内容包括:

阅读短文后,谈谈你的感想;

建议学生会组织同学们为当地一所乡村小学筹款,增添图书和教学设备;

希望乡村的孩子们能受到很好的教育,长大后为乡村服务。

Dear Student Union

I have just read an article on ―Hope Project‖ in an English newspaper. A girl named Xiao Juan was so poor that she couldn’t go to school. Hope Project made her wish of study come true. But do you know

there are many thousands of children who can not go to school. I think Student Union organize the students and raise money for a primary school in the local village, and give away some books and Teaching equipments.

I hope the children there can get better education, and work for the village when they grow up. Best wishes!

Yours truly

Sam

3. 自贯彻―规范办学行为‖以来,我们学生的学校生活发生了一系列变化。请根据下列表格中的要点提示,用英语写一段话,词数在80~100之间,内容必须包括表格中的提示要点。

要求:1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;

2.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数;

{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

3.参考词汇:补课have extra classes

Great changes have taken place in our school since the government did something to control school management. In the past, we stayed in our school for nine hours every day. We had lots of homework and had extra classes at weekends. Our after—school activities were few and boring.

But now, we stay at school for less than seven and half an hours. We do homework for less than one and half an hours. It’s very exciting not to have extra classes on holidays. Our after—school activities are very colourful, such as playing balls, singsing, dancing, drawing and so on.

We are very happy to do like this. It is very important for the students to change our study habits. I think we could be interested in study.

二. 健康问题

健康问题是中考常考的话题,出题形式多样,有必要下苦功掌握。

{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

典型例句

1. It is very important to keep healthy。

2. How can we keep healthy?

3. We can’t go to sleep too late. We can’t get up too late。

4. We should eat the food healthily。

5. We should do more exercise。

6. Last Tuesday I got a cold and had a pain in my head。

7. I didn’t feel like eating anything。

8. I decided to see the doctor。

9. In the doctor’s office, the doctor looks over me carefully。{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

10. He said :"Nothing serious." And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。

11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。

12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。

例文:

1.健康一直是人们关注的问题,我校要举行以―关爱健康‖为题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

(1)、保持健康的重要性;

(2)、保持健康的方法:.多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;再睡早起;勤洗手;

(3)、自己的看法(至少一条)。

注意:1.文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2. 内容可适当扩展。3. 字数为60—80词;

4. 文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

Boys and girls,

_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Thank you.

One possible version

It is very important for us students to keep healthy.

There are many ways to be healthy. We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables. Take exercise for at least one hour every day. We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early. Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible. In my opinion, we mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for our health.

2.近年来,中小学生健康问题日益引起人们的关注。请你用英语就该问题谈谈你的看法。 要求:(1)内容包括①列举中小学生面临的健康问题。

② 请谈谈怎样才能保持健康。

(2)字数:60---80词。

(3)短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。

范文:Every one wants to keep healthy today, especailly our students. But we don’t pay attention to our health. Some of them go to school without breakfast in the morning. Some students and pupils play computer games or watch TV all day, espacially at the weekends. Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke.

It is important for us to have good habbits. We should eat breakfast every morning. We can watch TV or play games for a short time, then have a rest. We also can take part in some clubs. I think it is necessary for us to keep healthy.

3、根据中英文提示,写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。(字数不少于60词,英文提示词供选用)

有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭,常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。―英语角‖打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿,谈谈你的看法和建议。 参考词汇:not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer

范文:

We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn’t delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something they like to eat. But I’m afraid it’s bad for their health to eat lunch outside because some of the food they buy isn’t healthy enough.

In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

三. 关于环境保护问题

环境保护问题是中考热门话题,出现频率高,难度较大,必须掌握。

典型句子

1. It’s our duty to save water

2. As we know , water is very important to man,

3.we can’t live without water.

4.The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less.

5.But some people don’t care about it .

{中考英语作文考纲分析}.

6.Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted.

Something must be done to stop the pollution.

7. It’s our duty to protect our environment。

8. It is very important to take care of our environment

9. We should not throw litter onto the ground

10. We should not spit in a public place/ cut down the trees

11. We should plant more flowers and trees。

12. We must pick up some rubbish and throw it into a dustbin

13. If everyone makes contribution to protecting the environment, the world will become much more beautiful。

15.Trees are very helpful and important for us.

17.We should plant more and more trees in order to live better and more healthy in the future. It’s everyone’s duty to love and protect the environment.

例文:

1.保护环境是每一个人的职责。请你写一篇以―Lower Carbon(低碳),Happier Life‖为题的英语短文。短文要点如下:

自己走路或骑自行车上学,父母骑车上班;(ride a bike, on foot)

节约用水,用电;(save, turn off, electricity)

将用过的课本留给低年级学生;(old books, next grade students)

购物时带上篮子,别用塑料袋。(basket, plastic bags)

要求:1.词数:80个左右。文章开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数;

2.必须包括全部要点,但不能逐词翻译;

3.在文中不要提及真实的校名和姓名。

Lower carbon, happier life

It’s our duty to protect the environment…………

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中考英语作文考纲分析篇三

中考英语作文考点导析与高分宝典

中考英语作文考点导析与高分宝典

一、考点导析

写作能力是语言能力的综合体现,它包括学生的词汇、语法、惯用法等语言知识,还包括学生对文章的构思、组织、表达以及传递信息和解决实际问题的语言交际能力,它能准确全面反映学生的实际语言水平。近年来写作在中考试卷中的比重逐年加大,并对考生提出了更高的要求。英语写作要注意以下两点。

一)正确审题, 纲举目张

审题是写好文章的第一步。生的作文是以写人、写事为主的情景,提供情景的形式花样繁多、不一而足,常见的有提纲、图片、表格、关键词或引言等形式,虽形式各异,但只有正确审题,才能纲举目张。审题要做到弄清题目的要求、写作的意图,抓住要点,确定体裁,拟写提纲,确定所要表达的内容要点。因提供情景的形式不同,所以写作的要求也不同。

1、以提纲形式提供情景的作文。这种形式本身的要点已经很明确,重点也很突出,只要把各个提纲加以发挥,注意谴词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性,就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题,但要注意,文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点。

2、以图画形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文应以“看”为主,通过细心观察图中的人物、景物、文字、数字等弄清写作的意图;通过分析思考,把握逻辑联系,找出主题并借助所给的文字把图中的信息转化成文章,但要注意,文章不能停留在图画的浅表而要表达出提供情景的意图和内涵,即“文在图上,意在话外”。如命题为“W hat kind of pollution do we have in Shanghai?” Picture 1:The factories let out polluted water;Picture 2:The cars produce polluted smoke ;Picture 3:A man is coughing badly.写作时并不是简单的对图画进行描述,而是要通过这3幅图画的情景说明人类正在毁坏自己的家园,并唤醒人们的环保意识和与污染作斗争的决心,这样才能体现出这篇文章的灵魂。

3、以图表形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文要以“读”为主,通过读懂图表中的数据、时间、编码以及相互间的变化关系,对所给的信息加以分析、推断、筛选概括,去粗存精。在写作时目的要明,要点要清,要注意内容的准确性和严肃性,尤其是图表中的数据、时间等不可出错。 4、以关键词形式提供情景的作文。这种形式的作文要以“思”为主,通过已给出的关键字的提示,展开遐想的翅膀,把每个词

视为思维链上的轨迹,环环紧扣、节节相连。要注意,“思”要做到“思前顾后”,不可胡思乱想,文章既要打破框框和束缚,展得开,又能前后呼应,收得回。要注意关键词并不是文章的提纲,应学会从关键词中寻找文章的纲目,提炼文章的重点,确定笔墨的主次轻重。 5、以引言形式提供情景的作文。如“Situation: Your pen pal Alice is an American girl. She has never been to Shanghai. She wants to know what Shanghai is like to- day.”,对于这类形式的作文,首先设想自己要告诉A lice 一些什么内容,然后拟订提纲,再依纲行文,就不会盲目无序地乱写了。为了使文章更精彩、更具灵性,可以加上作者的情感、态度和观点,使文章鲜活起来。

二)准确用词,言表意达

对初中生来说,英语写作用词不能像母语那样信手拈来,常会受到生词、语法、惯用法等的限制,所以在写作时要注意用词的准确性、可能性和两种语言的异同性,把握好自我空间,即在考试的有限时间范围内和在你有限的知识能力范围内,发挥出自己应有的水平,尽量减少失分。

1、遣词造句要准确。如要表达“地球正处于危险之中”,应为The earth is in danger.,而很多同学却写成The earth is dangerous ,此句意为“地球是危险的”而不是“地球正处于危险之中”;再如,玩电脑游戏应为Play computer games. play 意为“操作电脑游戏”,但很多同学用P lay with computer games. play with 是指“玩弄、把玩”的意思。 2、人称、主要时态要固定。人称和时态不固定会造成人物关系混乱和时间顺序颠三倒四,为了保证文章层次分明、条理清楚,在确定了文体后就要把人称和时态定下来。如写人和写事一般用过去时写,为了避免把握不准时态,可以在文章的开头加上yesterday 、 last week 、 two days ago 等表示过去的时间状语。人称通常用“我”或“他”来写比较好叙述,而且从头至尾时态和人称要一致,不能随意改动,以免造成混乱。

3、避免使用自己无把握的词。有些同学为了使自己的文章一鸣惊人,不愿意使用熟悉的常用词,而片面追求一些生冷的词汇,这些词他们往往不会用,不知道如何搭配,结果适得其反,使文章显得生硬不协调,甚至错误连篇。如要表达“他没能和朋友联系上”,He failed to keep in touch with his friend. failed 表示“没能够”,但有些同学从“文曲星”等工具上查得disenable ,其意思为“使不能够”,是不可以代替f ail 的。所以在写作时,主动权掌握在自己手中,实事求是地选择自己有把握的词,避免不必要的失分是能够做得到的。

4、注意两种语言的异同性。不同的语言有各自的表达习惯,如“我的理想是做个医生”,很多同学写成My ambition is to do / make a doctor. to do表示“做”或者“干”,to make 表示“制作”,而“做一个医生”则表示“成为一个医生”,应该用“be / become a doctor ”;再如,“看书、看报”应用read a book / newspaper ,而不是 see a book / newspaper ;“把书忘在家里”应该用l eave a book at home ,而不是 forget a book at home 等。因此平时应该特别注意不同的语言的习惯表达,望文生义,一味的生搬硬套,只会闹出诸如“我的理想是制作一个医生”的笑话。

5、注意文采和逻辑结构。文章不是单词的堆砌,也不是简单句的罗列,既然是文章就理所当然的要考虑到文采。有些同学怕出错,只写短语和简单句,写出的文章过于幼稚、空洞和贫乏,要使文章言之有物、有血有肉,就要把平时学的知识用上去,如从句、非谓语动词和比较等句式,关键时刻用上一两个,就会起到鹤立鸡群的效果,使文章增色不少;再如对高级词汇的使用也可以显示出文章的文采。如very important 较平常,但用essential 就显得高出一筹;helpful 用of great help , finally 用 eventually , dirty water 用专业词汇sewage等。关联词如now…… that, not …… but, the more …… the more, not only …… but also 等的使用,会使文章逻辑结构紧密,层次鲜明,条理清楚,就更加显示出你的英文功底,但要做到这些并非一日之功,要靠平时的训练和不断积累。

那麽英文写作如何得高分?

这要从对英文写作的评价标准入手。初中英文写作的评价标准通常要考虑以下六个方面: 1.你所表达的内容是否与中文提供的情景一致,是否达意。 2.单词拼写错误,语法时态及句子结构错误是否影响了内容的准确性。 3.扩展部分的逻辑推理是否与所提供的中文情景相关,所用语言是否准确的表达了你的思想。

4.能否使用恰当的关联词或者复合句使文段内容完整,逻辑合理,结构正确。 5.是否注意了必要的造句技巧,句子开头大写及句尾的标点符号。 6.卷面是否整洁。 因此,写作高分不是以高级词汇及从句的堆积取得的。而是由合理的逻辑思维能力,熟练运用英文基础词汇及语法准确表达思想的能力,以及基础写作技巧的运用能力得到的。

初中英语作文分为四等。一等文:13-15分;二等文:9-12分;三等文:5-8分;四等文:0-4分。教给大家十个字,搞定初中英语写作,帮你拿到一等文。

要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点

要点:实际上中考英语写作就等于两个字,翻译!因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点,要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好,只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点,也就是文章的第二段内容,要做到全,围绕中心。

结构:中考最流行的结构就是三段式,深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼?因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点——要点——总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段:简单明了,开门见山,不超过2句话,如,我们想表达小强很强壮,第一段直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确,这一句足矣。

第二段:分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭,He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。

2. 每天运动2小时,He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。

第三段:经过第二段的论证,可以得出结论。但请注意,不能完全照抄第一段,要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如,How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!

逻辑:这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的,转折的,总结的逻辑词等。递进:除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的,如first of all(首先),in addition, what's more, moreover(都是另外的意思),in a word, all in all(表示总结的)。转折:but, yet, however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词,因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。

语法:其他几点都不是硬性的要求,不那样做不能说是错,只能说是不好,但是语法却是硬性的。如,单词的使用,时态等。

亮点:当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文,最后两个字,亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前,都是结构清晰的三段式,要点都很全,都用了一些逻辑词,都没有语法错误,但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-looking,B篇却用到了attractive,charming,catching等,我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇,词组,句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以,以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。

文章的结尾没有固定的模式,同学们可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一般情况下,记叙文和说明文经常采用自然结尾的方法;但夹叙夹议和发表观点类的文章则往往有结束语,以使文章首尾呼应,结构完整。文章结尾的形式也因文章类别和开头的风格而灵活多变。

1. 自然结尾,点明主题

随着文章的结束,文章自然而然地结尾。如“Helping the Policeman(帮助警察)”的结尾可以是:The two children were praised by the police and they felt happy。再如“The Tortoise and the Hare(龟兔赛跑)” 的结尾可以是:When the hare got to the tree, the tortoise had already been there。

2. 首尾呼应,升华主题

在文章的结尾可以用含义较深的话点明主题,深化主题,起到“画龙点睛”的效果。如“I Love My Hometown(我爱家乡)”的结尾可以是:I love my hometown, and I am proud of it。

3. 反问结尾,引起深思

这种方式的结尾虽然形式是问句,但意义却是肯定的,而且具有一定的强调作用,可引起他人的深思。如 “Learning English can give us a lot of pleasure (学英语能为我们带来许多乐趣)” 的结尾可以是:If we learn English well, we can …Don’t you think learning Eng-lish is great fun?

4. 表达祝愿,阐述愿望

这种方式的结尾常出现在书信或演讲稿的文体中,表示对他人的祝福或对将来的展望等。如“A Letter to the Farmers(给农民们的一封信)”的结尾可以是:I hope the farm-ers’ life will be better and better。 另外,书信的结尾常有以下形式的祝福语:Best wishes;I wish you a merry Christmas and a happy new year;I wish you have a good time等。

1. 不用说…… It goes without saying that …

= (It is) needless to say (that) …

= It is obvious that …

中考英语作文考纲分析篇四

中考英语作文范例

小作文

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大作文:环保类

1. Saving Our Earth

It is very important to deal with the rubbish in cities. For one thing, rubbish may cause a lot of pollution. It may pollute the air, the water and the places we live in. For another, it may do harm to people's health. So in our city, rubbish is well dealt with. First, it is sorted. Then old newspapers and glass are recycled. The harmful wastes are buried and the waste water is cleaned before it goes into the river. The government has already madelaws against pollution caused by rubbish. But that's not enough. We must all try our best to prevent rubbish from polluting the environment in order to save our city and our living place.

生词:dealt分配deal的过去式 cause引起 sort按种类分

2. Reuse the Wastes

In everyday life, we have a lot of things, such as used paper, old newspapers ,used plastic bags, cans, bottles and so on. It is important to make good use of the waste things. There are some ways to reuse the wastes. The used plastic bags can be used to contain our family rubbish. The empty tins can be made into ashtrays. We can don't know how to reuse the wastes, we can sell them to the recycling station. There are many other ways to To cherish the environment is to love ourselves.

生词:Ashtrays烟灰缸 handiwork手工艺品 cherish珍爱

3. Environmental Protection

Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important problem. The world population is time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth can’t be safe. Luckily people have made some progress in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have made laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution. I think more ways To use modern methods to protect our natural resources and recycle(再循环)our products.

We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.

4. Low carbon life低碳生活

Presently, a new lifestyle called low carbon life is spreading every corner of our country. The meaning of low carbon are low energy and no waste. it is necessary todoitatonce.

First of all,a no-car day is supposed to set up every week in our school. Because cars notonly cause serious air pollution but also waste energy. riding a bike or go on foot is a good idea.On no-car day, neither students nor

use plastic bags any more. No one can stand the “white pollution”.again and again.Finally, one thing that we should keep in mind: every big thing comes from the everyday our textbook and so on. no plastic bags and no waste. Let’s do it now.

梦想类

1. 最近,你们班召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活动。请写一篇日记,记述班会情况

及自己的感受。内容要点如下:

1.每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理解; 2.你谈到了自己的梦想; 3.如何实现自己的梦想。 Xi’s Chinese Dream. Everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that this dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. I have always wanted to be a doctor. Not only can doctors save people’s lives but also they are doing a useful job. Doctors can also help people to live a better lifewith their professional knowledge.

To realize my dream, I must try to work hard from now on. I must learn as much as I can so that I can get for the job of a doctor. I can achieve my goal in this way.

2. 以后十年内我的生活(MY LIFE IN TEN YEARS) 为题,写一作文 。

In ten years,I think I’ll be a reporter.I will live in an apartement with my sister.Because I don't like living alone. And I can play with her in the aparement. So in ten years,I will be a good reporter.I will meet a lot of

In ten years,I’ll have many different pets. Maybe I will keep a pet turtle.I think I will go shopping with my sister as long as I have time.And I will go to London on my vacation.

So,my life in ten years will be better and better!

中考英语作文考纲分析篇五

2011-2015年广东省初中英语考纲及考点分析(关文英)

2011-2015年广东省初中英语考纲及考点分析

桃园中学英语备课组 关文英

2016年佛山中考采用广东省初中英语学业考试试题(省题),我们就要预先做好中考准备,研究近五年的考纲及考点。五年来,广东初中英语考试用时100 分钟。全卷满分120分。整卷难度0.65左右。现分板块进行分析:

考情分析: 2013—2015年中考广东省初中英语学业考试试题考点分析(学科老师填写)

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2014年佛山英语中考试题分析

试卷结构 :

全卷分四大题:听力、语言知识及应用、阅读、综合语言运用,每大题包含若干小节,满分120分,考试用时90分钟。 难度分析

各种题型的数量和权重分布情况如下:

第一部分听力题,共20分,占全卷分值的16.7%。

第二部分语言知识及应用,包括单项选择题(语法)及完型填空(课内词汇&短语搭配),共25分,占全卷分值的20.8%;其中单项选择题15分,占全卷分值的12.5%;完型填空10分,占全卷分值的8.3%。

第三部分阅读,包括两篇阅读选择题及一篇主题匹配题,共30分,占全卷分值的25%。

第四部分综合语言运用,包括综合填空、完成句子、读写综合, 共

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