beyond励志作文

beyond励志作文篇一

( 4 ) 大作文范例

a hurry, he decided to go by air. He

when he got onto the plane, he looked for a window seat. He found all of them (take) except one. There was a soldier sitting in the seat beside . Wondering why this one had not been taken, Mr. Robinson at once went towards it.

When he reached it, however, Mr. Robinson saw that there was a notice stuck on the seat. It said, “This seat (usual) notice in a plane before, Mr. Robinson was a little surprised. But he thought that the plane must be carrying something Two or three people tried to sit in the window seat beside the soldier, but they too read the notice and went

on. When the plane was nearly full, a very pretty girl hurried was watching the passengers coming in, quickly took the notice off the seat beside his and in this way succeeded in having the

Part 3 英翻中：

The concept of solitude(独处) in the digital world is almost non-existent. In the world of digital

technology, e-mail, social networking and online video games, information is meant to be Solitude can be hard to discover it has been given up. In this respect, new technologies have our culture.

独处的概念在数字世界里是不存在的。在数码科技，邮件，社交网络以及网络视频游戏的

世界里，信息注定是要被分享的。人们一旦被放弃独处，很难再找回。在这一点上，新的科技已经塑造了我们的文化。

The desire to be connected has brought solitude to a(n) as we’ve known it. People have

become so in the world of networks and connections that one can often be contacted they’d rather not be. Today we can talk, text, e-mail, chat and blog, not only from our , but from our mobile phones as well. 我们都知道，对与外界连接的渴望已经让我们无法独处。在网络的世界里找到他人是如此

的方便，以至于人们即使不愿意，也能经常被联系到。现在我们不仅可以用电脑来聊天、发短信、发电子邮件、上聊天室和写博客，甚至用手机都办得到。

Most developed nations have become on digital technology simply because

they’ve grown accustomed to it, and at this point not it would make them an outsider. , many jobs and careers require people to be From this point of view, technology has changed the culture of work. Being reachable might feel like a to those who may not want to be able to be contacted at all times.

大多数发达国家都变得依赖于数码科技，只因为他们已经习惯了。时已至此，若是不使用科技会会让

他们成为局外人。此外，许多工作和职业需要与人联系。从这个观点来看，科技已经改变了工作的文化。对那些不想经常被人联系的人来说，随时都能被找得到，会感觉是一种负累。

I suppose the positive side is that solitude is still possible for anyone who wants it.

Computers can be shut and mobile phones can be turned off. The ability to be “connected” and “on” has many well as disadvantages. Travelers have ended up on mountains, and mobile phones have saved countless lives. They can also make people feel

Attitudes towards our connectedness as a society across generations. Some find today’s technology a gift. Others consider it a curse. Regardless of anyone’s view on the subject, it’s hard to imagine what life would be like daily advancements in technology.

对把人们连通起来成一群体，每一代人的态度都不一样。有人会觉得今天的科技是上天的恩赐，但也

有人认为这是个诅咒。对此无论是什么样的观点，如果缺少日益进步的科技，很难想象生活会变成什么样。

Part 3 “Mama, when I grow up, I’m going to be one of those!” I said this after seeing the Capital Dancing Company perform when I was three. It was the first time that my took on a vivid form and acted as interests in the becoming a __company never left me. In the summer of 2005 when I was 18, I received the phone call which made that dream a As I look back on that day now, it surely any sense of reality. I believe I stayed in a state of

pleasant disbelief I was halfway through rehearsals (排练) on my first day. I never actually shaking with excitement. 细节) and stress on practice that schedule of up to five performances a day, I discovered a new of the words “hard work.” What I thought were my physical were pushed much further than I thought I learned to make each performance better than the last. of, not girls but a splendid company that continues to develop and grow-and inspires people every day to follow their dreams.

36. A. hobby B. plan C. dream D. word

37. A connected B. expanded C. exposed D. extended

38. A. rarely B. certainly C. probably D. consistently

39. A. director B. trainer C. leader D. dancer

40. A. symbol B. memory C. truth D. reality

41. A. bouncing B. dating C. turning D. tracking

42. A. lacks B. adds C. makes D. brings

43. A. while B. since C. until D. when

44. A. Cared B. Expected C. Asked D. Decided

45. A. motivated B. relaxed C. convinced D. astonished

46. A. challenges B. profits C. advantages D. adventures

47. A. put B. mix C. build D. pick

48. A. Attention B. association C. attraction D. adaptation

49. A. apart B. aside C. off D. back

50. A. over B. by C. with D. beyond

51. A. function B. meaning C. expression D. usage

52. A. boundaries B. problems C. barriers D. efforts

53. A. necessary B. perfect C. proper D. possible

54. A. talent B. honor C. potential D. responsibility

55. A. victory B. trend C. tradition D. desire

36. A. updated B. received C. shared D. collected.

37. A. though B. until. C. once D. before.

38. A. respected B. shaped C. ignored D. preserved.

39. A. edge B. stage C. end D. balance.

40. A. sensitive B. intelligent C. considerate D. reachable.

41. A. even if B. only if C. as if D.if only

42. A. media B. computers C. databases D. monitors

43. A. bent B. hard C. keen D. dependent

44. A. finding B. using C. protecting D. changing

45. A. Also B. Instead C. Otherwise D. Somehow

46. A. connected B. trained C. recommended D. interested

47. A. pleasure B. benefit C. burden D. disappointment

48. A. slightly B. hardly C. merely D. really.

49. A. out B. down C. up D. in

50. A. aspects B. weakenesses C. advantages D. exceptions.

51. A. hidden B. lost C. relaxed D. deserted

52. A. trapped B. excited C. confused D. amused

53. A. turn B. submit C. object D. reply

54. A. vary B. arise C. spread D. exist

55. A. beyond B. within C. despite D . without

Part 1 英汉互译：

1. Some festivals are held to honor the dead or to satisfy the ancestors, who might return either to

help or to do harm.

2. For the Japanese festival Obon, people should go to clean graves and light incense in memory of

their ancestors.

3. On this important fest day, people eat food in the shape of skulls and cakes with “bones” on

them.

4. The western holiday Halloween also had its origin in old beliefs about the return of the spirits of

dead people.

5. Indian has a national festival on October 2 to honor MG, the leader who helped gain india’s

independence from Britain.

6. People are grateful because their food is gathered for the winter and the agricultural work is

over.

7. China and Japan have mid-autumn festivals, when people admire the moon and in china, enjoy

moon cakes.

8. The most energetic and important festivals are the ones that look forward to the end of winter

and to the coming of spring.

9. Some western countries have very exciting carnivals, which take place forty days before Easter,

usually in February. These carnivals might include parades, dancing in the streets day and night,

colorful clothing of all kinds.

10. The country, covered with cherry tree flowers, looks as though it is covered with pink snow.

11. People love to get together to eat, drink and have fun with each other. Festivals let us enjoy life,{beyond励志作文}.

be proud of our customs and forget our work for a little while.

12. It was obvious that the manager of the coffee shop was waiting for Li Fang to leave.

13. She said she would meet him at the coffee shop but she didn’t turn up.

Part 2 其它单词短语

beautiful celebrate starve

believe arrive produce

energy necessary permit fashion weep(过去式

poet award worldwide park drown wipe 启程动身回家 盛装 对某人搞恶作剧

信守诺言 屏住呼吸 发生 提醒某人某事

1. 整个国家到处都是盛开的樱花，看上去就像是覆盖了一层粉红色的雪。

2. 很明显咖啡厅的经理在等待李雷离开。

3. 人们感激是因为为了过冬的食物已经被聚集起来，以及农活已经结束。

4. 西方节日万圣节也源自人们古老的信念，认为亡者灵魂会返回人间。

5. 她说她会在咖啡厅见他，但没有出现。

6. 最富有生机以及最重要的日子就是盼望着告别冬天，迎来春天的日子。

7. 在日本的Obon节，人们应该扫墓，燃香，以纪念他们的祖先。

8. 在这个重要的节庆日里，人们会吃制成颅骨形状的食物，以及上面装点有“骨头”的蛋糕。

9. 印度在10月2日有一个全国性的节日，以纪念甘地这位帮助印度从英国人那里获得独立的领袖。

10. 中国和日本都有中秋节，这时人们会赏月；在中国，人们还会品尝月饼。

11. 有些节日是为了纪念死者或者满足祖先的需要而举行的；祖先们有可能回到世上给人们提供帮助或者

带来伤害。

12. 在一些西方国家有激动人心的狂欢节，通常在二月，复活节前的40天。狂欢节活动可能包括游行，昼

夜在街上跳舞以及穿着各种彩色服装。

13. 人们喜欢聚在一起吃饭，饮酒，开心的玩乐。节日让我们享受生活，对我们的习俗产生自豪感，也让

我们短暂的忘记我们的工作。

Part 3 英翻中：

The concept of solitude(独处) in the digital world is almost non-existent. In the world of digital technology, e-mail, social networking and online video games, information is meant to be Solitude can be hard to discover it has been given up. In this respect, new technologies have our culture.

The desire to be connected has brought solitude to a(n) as we’ve known it. People have become so in the world of networks and connections that one can often be contacted they’d rather not be. Today we can talk, text, e-mail, chat and blog, not only from our , but from our mobile phones as well.

Most developed nations have become on digital technology simply because they’ve grown accustomed to it, and at this point not it would make them an outsider. many jobs and careers require people to be the culture of work. Being reachable might feel like a to those who may not want to be able to be contacted at all times.

I suppose the positive side is that solitude is still possible for anyone who wants it. Computers can be shut and mobile phones can be turned off. The ability to be “connected” and “on” has many , as well as disadvantages. Travelers have ended up on mountains, and mobile phones have saved countless lives. They can also make people feel

beyond励志作文篇二

高考语文作文立意创新招数4

句式参差法

写作时根据描写对象和写作角度的不同，灵活地运用不同句式，使语言准确自然，这是文章有文采的一个重要标志。要做到句式灵活，就要反复锤炼语言，力求达到最佳的效果。锤炼语句的基本方法是对同义句式的选择和调整。所谓同义句式，即意思基本相同或相近，而在表达重点、语意轻重、语言态度、风格色彩等方面有所区别的句子格式。根据表达的需要，灵活运用，做到恰当得体，就会使文章文采飞扬、文气流畅。写作时句式的选择，用常式句型还是用变式句型、用整句还是用散句、用长句还是用短句等，依据什么原则呢？

一、句式的选择和调整要服从表达的需要，不能为灵活而灵活。一般而言，客观描写景物，烧托气氛，可用常式句型，若抒发胸中积愤，重在抒情，或语意强调重点不同，可用变式句型，这都取决于表达目的和表达的需要。要批评一个将军的无能可说他“屡战屡败”，要赞扬一个人的顽强精神可说他“屡败屡战”。变式句主要有三种：主谓倒装、状语后置和定语后置。句式多变能避免单调。

二、句式的选择和调整受语境的限制，不能以辞害义。首先句式的选择和调整要受文体限制。应用文体在句式上要求：一般结构比较完整、周密，句型较长，少用省略句；陈述句、判断句使用频率高，而疑问句、感叹句频率低。科技文的句式大量采用结构复杂的长句。文艺体文章，形象化是它的特点，各句式、句型灵活多样。其次还要受上下文的制约。

三、句式的散整松紧和长短要灵活得体，以简洁明快为原则。整句形式整齐、声音和谐、气势贯通、意义鲜明，因此适于表达丰富的感情、深刻的感受，给人以鲜明的想像和强烈的感受。散句的结构灵活多样，其表达虽不像整句那么集中，但散而有序，丰富多彩，故能避免单调、呆板，收到生动活泼的效果，所以，很多作家都是以散为主而整散搭配着运用语言。 河北 考生

美鹿和沉船，哪一个更能引起你的心灵美感呢？美鹿欢快而活泼，象征着青年人的活力和健康；沉船平静自然，象征着老年人的风霜和智慧。

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余秋雨所醉心的是秋风扫起，寒鸦飞过，百草凋敝，一派霜冷长河的景象；梵高所描绘的是灿烂的，热烈的，即使到了最后还紧紧抓住行将远去的夕阳的向日葵的油黄；瓦兹所展示的是地球之上着装希腊服饰的雅典少女弹着只剩下一根弦的七弦琴的悲壮与凄凉。 哪一个更美呢？

答案是丰富多彩的。

美不是唯一的。健全是美的，但维纳斯的美正在于她的断臂；健康是美的，但林黛玉的美却源于她的疾病„„因此，美是多元的。不同的人，吸吮着不同的文化和精神，体味着一个个不同的人生经历，于是相同的事物穿透不同的心灵，透析出了不同的投影。美的区别由此而生。

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在我心灵的投影中，有一种美叫自然。

美鹿欢快而活泼，因为它本来如此，所以它美；沉船平静而自然，因为它本来如此，所以它也美。倘使美鹿归于平静，让沉船变得活泼，那还美吗？天知道那是什么情景？！ 就像圆明园的废墟，那是一种自然的历史存在，所以我们不能重建。它就是这个样子了，它承载着了历史，承载了民族的忿闷和熊熊的火光。历史的悲剧意识的美最能震撼国人的心灵。

“清水出芙蓉，天然去雕饰。”美不是被雕饰出来的，不管是健全的、残缺的、苍老的、年轻的、悲壮的、圆满的„„他们都是自然而然的外溢。

是的，在我以为：自然是美学的最基本的原则。

简评：文章通过对一幅幅自然画面、艺术画面、历史画面的审美阐释，给人一种蕴藉的意象美。尤其是诗化的语言，如同一首无韵之诗，相同句式的反复，浓化了情感氛围，如同诗的重迭复沓；长句短句的错落，造成感觉上的缓急，如同诗的顿挫，整句散句的间用，造成感觉上的跌宕，如同诗的抑扬。

山东 考生

绚丽多彩的春，奔放似火的夏，深沉内敛的秋，冷静严谨的冬，你更爱哪一个？

柔情满怀的西子湖，粗犷豪放的戈壁滩，你更向往哪一个？纸醉金迷的声色之娱，清戒自守的为人之道，你挑选哪一个？„„你也许左右为难，抑或毫无彷徨，这都是你的心灵做出的答案。

人生，就是如此，矛盾又真实。

而今，现实真真切切地将一个选择的权利交付于我，选择专业就是选择未来！听上去有些绝对又有些不太浪漫，可你得承认，人生，就是如此。

台灯被缓缓地扭亮，我独坐案前，一盏香茗，伴着袅袅白雾，可以帮我稳定和整理一下思绪了。

又是一个有雨的夜，今夏的雨水格外的多。淅淅沥沥敲打着窗子，冲刷着大地，也荡涤着我的心灵。

我从小一直梦想当一名企业家，可以满足自己的物质欲望，理想很俗但又很现实。随着年龄的增长，儿时的梦想逐渐淡化，我被电视媒体所吸引，渴望做一名记者，而且这个想法越来越强烈。儿时做的梦被悉心保护到现在，总不愿轻易放弃，现实又是如此难以割舍。 人生，就是这样，矛盾又真实。

黑黑的夜，无边无际，呷一口清茶，热热的，滋润着干涸的喉。

雨，让人想到了被雨洗过的清爽的荷和在荷塘边沉思的朱自清先生。那个外貌似柔弱书生实质铁骨铮铮的汉子，以不吃“嗟来之食”而成为中华优秀儿女的代表。

雨，让人忆起了零丁洋畔被风吹雨打的英雄文天祥“人生自古谁无死，留取丹心照汗青”的豪迈，震撼了敌人，也震醒了一代代仁人志士。

雨，让人忽又记起一个在雨夜里孤独的侧影，两指夹着香烟，紧锁着眉头的老人鲁迅先生，他弃医从文的果敢让人钦佩，但更让人仰慕的是他做出如此决断的原因——为医治麻木的国人的心，为拯救华夏民族的灵魂。

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太多太多的往事，在雨夜伴着冷风，一幕幕清晰地涌上脑海，这些人正是用心灵做出了无比高尚的选择。

我明白自己将来该做些什么了。做一名记者，宣传正义舆论才是我最理想的选择。 台灯被扭灭了，我安心地睡了。

明天又是新的一天„„

简评：这是一篇优秀的记叙性散文，文章真实地记录了作者选择专业时的一段心路历程，把看似平淡的专业选择作为心灵选择的突破口，真实而自然。尤其称道的是，凝练的叙述，优美的语言，句式参差，排比、拟人、设问等多种修辞的综合运用，展示了作者深厚的语言修养。

重庆 考生

“名山大川，小桥流水，可悦人目；蝉吟虫唱，风声雨声，可愉人耳；涛走云散，潮涌星移，可启人思；珍器古玩，诗文书画，可怡人情。”这斑斓绚丽的事物，给了我们最直观的认知。

高山流水，天涯毗邻，给了我们知己的感动；相濡以沫，举案齐眉，给了我们爱人的感动；合家欢乐，天伦之乐，给了我们家的温馨。这何尝不是感情的体会？英国当代诗人西格

里夫曾写过一行不朽的绝唱：“我心里有猛虎在细嗅蔷薇。”这说明人拥有两面性：感性和理性。感情亲疏是感性的，对事物的认知是理性的。从历史的源头漫步到现代，我们人类便在感性与理性之间演绎着动人的人生哲学。

我们往往因过分亲近或疏远某个人，而使我们对事物的认知蒙上了一层稠密的感性云雾。子曰：“仁者见仁，智者见智。”对事物的认知，因个体差异而不同，这是必然的。但如果因此而悖驳事物价值的唯一性，这是荒谬的。楚国国君不就因为听取爱妃谗言而使屈原因直谏被放逐吗？夫差因此而丧国。历史中有太多太多这样的昏君，有太多太多这样的历史闹剧。 当然，也有看穿迷雾而感悟觉醒的人。邹忌说：“吾妻之美我者，私我也；妾之美我者，畏我也；客之美我者，欲有求于我也。”他运用这琐事中的感悟，成功地说服了齐王广开言路。

其实，对事物感知也需要感情的柔化。正如棱角突兀的坚石需要柔水圆润，奇伟雄丽的火山需炽热熔化为岩浆，这样才能在逆境中“柳暗花明又一村”。亲情留予我们关怀，给予我们安慰，当我们对事物越发亲近，我们的认知就越发深刻。

纣王曾问云中子：“先生何处而来？”答曰：“公似白云常自在，意如流水任东西。”纣王发难：“云散水枯，君归何处？”答曰：“云散皓月当空，水枯明珠出现！”正是这种对自然的无限亲切，才孕育了博大的旷达的人生哲学。

然而真正的大智慧，是兼容二者的，庄子便是这棵享有阳光同时设下树阴的哲人之树。他妻子死后，他大哭须臾，后又会心地笑了起来，正是这种感情亲疏和对事物的认知的完美结合，成就了他物我合一，无所依赖的无我哲学。

用感性赋予理性以灵性，用理性铸造感性的肌骨，山高月小，落花流水，当我们寄以情思，这种认知也富有哲理。鹰击长空，鱼翔浅底，这种认知也可勾起我们奋斗的冲动。 在感情亲疏面前，我愿做一株蔷薇；在事物的认知上，我愿是一只猛虎，用理性的心理嗅感性的芬芳。

简评：这是一篇语言优美的议论性散文，观点鲜明，语言生动鲜活，文笔流畅，句式参并，特别是文中的排比，比喻，引用等修辞手法娴熟的运用，增强了文章的可读性和感染力。结尾点明中心，告诫人们要理智地对待周围的人和事，切忌感情用事。

湖北 考生

依稀记得的情景，于暮春三月，撑一柄油纸小伞，流连于姑苏江南的小镇。天空中斜织着密密细雨，两旁路上是古旧的亭台楼阁，踏着湿漉漉的青石板，轻盈地漫步，空气中飘散着湿湿的花

香„„

于是，便有人说，美就是轻柔，

就是典雅，就是雕梁画栋，就是亭台楼阁，就是江南烟雨„„

但是，答案却不是唯一的，答案是丰富多彩的。

燕云十八骑，奔腾如虎烽烟举。苍茫大漠遥岑远目，则青海长云，碧天黄沙。风卷起大旗猎猎作响，秋风萧瑟，胡马长嘶。大大小小的沙肆虐地拍打在你的脸上。但你不会畏缩，你只会感到一股苍凉、一股豪气洞彻肺腑，不禁涌起一种仰天长啸的冲动。

这又何尝不是美的呢?美得豪迈，美得粗犷，美得痛快淋漓。

谈到美人，人们不禁把思想都转到了那粲粲如星的美目，那流光飞舞的长发之上。古人便善写美人：“一笑倾人城，再笑倾人国。”美得妩媚：“千呼万唤始出来，犹抱琵琶半遮面。”美得娇羞；“巧笑倩兮，美目盼兮。”美得玲珑；“回眸一笑百媚生，六宫粉黛无颜色。”美得仪态万方；在烟波浩渺的洛水之上，你也会看到那位白衣飘飘，凌波微步，罗袜生尘的洛神仙子„„

但美的答案又何尝不是丰富多彩的呢? “指点江山，激扬文字。”是朝气蓬勃的美；“羽扇纶巾，谈笑间，强虏灰飞烟灭。”是儒雅飘举的美；“拈花把酒，笑喜怒痴嗔。”是大彻大悟的美；“卧薪尝胆，三千越甲可吞吴。”是坚强刚毅的美。

美是广泛的，姑苏江南，烟雨楼阁可谓之为美，大漠孤烟，碧天黄沙可谓之为美，明眸皓齿，倾国倾城可谓之为美，羽扇纶巾，潇洒从容可谓之为美。但美的答案远远不止于此。 流行乐坛的巨星，BEYOND的灵魂人物黄家驹已故十载，但如今他的歌仍十分流行。因为他的博大和宽容已经深深地印在每个青年人的心中。他的歌不是一般流行歌曲所谓的缠缠绵绵，而是蕴含着一种宽厚和博大。那就是和平与博爱。当歌颂南非总统曼德拉的《光辉岁月》在耳边响起，当呼唤和平的《和平与爱》在耳边响起，你又如何能不为之激昂为之感动呢? 淡妆浓抹总相宜，美的答案是丰富多彩的。也许某天，你从马路边经过，看到一名儿童小心翼翼地拣起一团废纸丢进垃圾箱内，在他的眼中，你也可以读到美丽„„

简评：这是一篇语言华美、句式整散参差的美文。在春雨中，作者探寻美的真谛，诠释文题的多层含义，大量运用比喻、排比等修辞手法，句式整散错落，变化多姿，富于音乐的旋律美，读来琅琅上口，铿锵有力，再加上引用的诗词名句，更使文章文采斐然、妙语迭出。{beyond励志作文}.

多面表达法

叙述要概要平实；议论要凝练精深；描写要形象生动；抒情要真切感人；说明要简明得体。其实在高考作文中，几种表达，不同风格，往往可以糅合统一在一种文体或一篇作文中。近年来，高考命题突出对创新能力的考查，往往只有一个引导性的情境和一个宽泛的话题，鼓励考生大胆创新，表达上不拘一格，明确标示可以记叙经历，可以编述故事，可以抒发感情，可以发表议论，最后还加上“等等”，给考生以极大的发挥自由。所以，只要我们根据自己的表达特长，选择合适的表达方式，就能写出别具新意的好文章。

首先，在记叙类文章中，记叙是基本的表现手法，但也可以有议论和抒情。它一般有两种基本方式：一是文章的主体部分是记叙，而开头或结尾部分是议论或抒情；一是边叙边议（或抒情）。不管哪种表达方式，记叙是议论和抒情的基础，而议论和抒情是记叙的深化。通常说来，对人物、事件、景物的描述比较具体，而议论和抒情则应力求精要，起到“画龙点睛”的作用。

其二，在议论类文章中，议论是基本的表现手段，但在行文中，也时有记叙。记叙大致有两种情况，一是对议论对象的交待，二是议论时的举例。不管哪一种，议论文中的记叙都要言简意明。

其三，在抒情类文章中，往往寓抒情于记叙之中，在叙述描写的字里行间渗透着作者的感情。感情是比较抽象的东西，独立的、不依附于其它表现手法的抒情手段是不存在的。抒情总是通过议论、描写，叙述等来表现的。一般说来，抒情分直接抒情和间接抒情两种直接抒情常通过议论感叹的方式来表达，间接抒情通过描写和叙述的方式来表达。不管采用哪种方式，作者抒发的感情应当健康、真切、强烈以激起读者的共鸣。

总之，不论哪种文体，记叙、议论、抒情、描写等相结合，一定要注意内容的内在联系，要注意转换衔接自然，使全文融为一体。

例文1

湖北 考生

看云，就是解读生活。看那流云飘忽不定；苍穹底下立着小小的人影，每个人都在看云，每个人都在经历看得见摸不着的生活。{beyond励志作文}.

不同的人，看云看出不同的形状色彩；不同的人，对生活有不同的理解，不同的答案。答案千姿百态，人对生活的追求便不一。于是生活便因答案的丰富而多姿多彩了！

生活，一个多大的概念？纵穿古今，横越中外。总之它无处不在无所不包。花木兰的人生字典有“孝勇”二字，这便是她对生活的答案，于是身披战袍的她终于演绎了一首感古动今的千古绝唱！

古今中外，那难以计数永卧沙场的将士，与敌人殊死搏斗从不言退，因为他们对生活的答案就是：是军人，就要金戈铁马去，马革裹尸还！生活便因此抹上了浓重的豪情壮志。

四百年前罗马鲜花广场上被熊熊烈火烧死的那个不屈的灵魂，毕生信守的人生答案便是坚持真理，几百年后的世人在仰望真理的同时，生活里又有了关于真理的动人色彩。不甘摧眉折腰事权贵的李白，在仕途不如人意的迷惘中，从难于上青天的蜀道中得出了新的答案，于是在广阔山水中挥洒不羁情怀，挥毫成就一篇篇传世文章。

人民的好总理周恩来的一生就是为人民服务的闪光历程，这也是他对生活唯一的答案，所以当他的骨灰撒向滚滚浪涛时，亿万人民痛哭失声，永远铭记这一伟大灵魂。

唐太宗的目光深远地看到了回纥的牙帐、吐蕃的城堡，他明白，统治的稳定首先要有民族的和睦。他的答案不同于成吉思汗的继任者们。于是皇城的大门打开了，迎来了高原的气息、苍山的风、洱海的浪 、东北的大风雪。于是这个封建君主的人生便以独特的姿态立于历史祠堂中。

不同的历史人物作出了不同的人生答案，演绎出的，是一部丰富的历史。而生活的丰富与美好，还在于有差别的创造。当然，它也源于对事物不同的答案。一亩快要丰收的麦子，农人看到的是饱满的麦粒，梵高看到的是生命的激情，诗人看到的是色彩与海浪的组合„„于是社会的物质大厦与精神大厦便拔地而起，生活便丰富坚实。

朋友，走过历史的烟云，你对生活有什么答案？你将如何面对现实？你将以什么姿态去面对未来生活的挑战？别忘了，我们正年轻，“看云”的日子不要迷失在天真浪漫中，寻找一个理性的答案，让我们追，让我们飞。生活要我们去创造，美好的未来是我们自己的！

简评：云，飘忽不定，不同的人看云会有不同的答案，作者从看云谈人生态度联想巧妙、自然。那么，如何对待生活呢？作者举出古今中外众多名人，最后谈了自己的看法。在表达上叙事、议论、抒情紧密配合，旁征博引，流畅严密，显示了过人的文字功底。

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作文事例

◆可以用在努力、坚持、nothing is impossible、有梦想就会成功 等的主题中

As the old saying goes, practice makes perfect. Nothing in the world is impossible if you are determined to do ti. It reminds me of an experience of my friend/sister Amy.

Amy loved piano so much since she was a child. As she was growing, she became more and more determined to be a musician like Mozert. Noboday believed such girl with short fingers can achieve success in music and considered her dream to be just illusion(幻想). However, Amy cared little about what others said. She just kept praticing piano every day,. With her Perservance and persistence, she was successfully admitted into the top musical college, which shocked those who used to look down upon her a lot.

Now, when others talked about Amy, they speak highly of her. Though Amy’s way to be as Mozert is till long, but she has illustrated that if you want to realize your dream, you should be determined. Only in this way can you make the wonder and pave the way to success. Her story tells me that perservance makes wonder.

◆可以用在人的品质等方面（诚实）

1. Taking a look around, we can find too many examples to list. But the best illustration may be the story of the first president of US, Washington. When Washington was a child, he was naughty. One day, he cut dow his father’s favourite cheery tree in the garden because of his curiosity of a new knife. However, little Washington was honest enough to acknowledge his wrong action when being asked by his angry father which moved his father a lot. Nevertheless to say, his father forgave this honest boy instead of punishing him. Therefore, it is not difficult fo find that it is the quality of “honesty” that helped Washington become one of the greatest presidents in the history of America.

2. Once upon a time, my parents were told I had cheated in an examination. Instead of scolding me, they told me the importance of being honest. They told me that withour honesty, one can hardly have a promising future or even do something wrong and make nothing in his life. I soon realized my fault and never cheat from then on. (和诚实有关，但也可以用在家庭父母的教育)

◆可以用在关于teamwork/ cooperation/ 团结才会胜利 等话题

The author’s experience reminds me of my own experience. I once participated in a basketball match with other four classmates in the sports meeting of our school. Before the match we were so confident in ourselves, though our opponents were so excellent. However, shortly after the match began, we immediately realized that our “enemies” were outstanding beyond our imagination. They ran so fast that we couldn’t catch up with them and they cooperated perfectly. On the contrary, each of us seemed to play the game individually. As a result, we fell behind half of a game. We carefully analyzed ourselves and our opponents during the rest hour. When the match began again, we cooperated perfectly, no matter running or shooting Soon the goal were equal and we beat them eventually.

The match taught me that teamwork is the most important in team activities, and even in the social life. Only when we unite can we beat our opponents and achieve the final success.

◆励志的可以写张海迪或海伦凯勒的例子

Zhang Haidi, a young woman（或heroine） whose courage and determination in the face of severe

illness moved the nation to tears.

Unable to attend school, Haidi taught herself English, Japanese and German, took university

degrees and published numerous literary works. She became China’s very own Helen Keller, and was thought highly of by everyone.

Zhang Haidi, who later became a member of the CPPCC(中国人民政治协商会议), has

certainly done a great deal to promote a more positive image of disability in China. As a disabled woman, she won people’s respect with her strong willpower as well as her optimistic attitude towards life with which she overcame disease and gained knowledge.

Helen Keller is an outstanding American author. When she was about 19 months old, a high fever

left her becoming blind and deaf, cutting her off from the outside world. However, Helen was not someone who gave up easily. Despite the physical handicaps, she lived her life to the full instead of crying "Jesus, life is unfair!"(上帝啊，生活太不公平了). She began to explore the world by using her other senses. With the help of her teacher, Anne, who gave Helen tender hearted love, Helen got rid of the darkness and later could read and write. She even gained a college degree with her great effort. Who could have imagined such a girl, blind and deaf, grow up to become a world famous author and public speaker? Helen’s experience inspired the handicapped and her striking（惊人的）optimism might be her secret of success. She deserved our respect.

◆关于和谐的提法：

1. 假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会’’的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。

要点提示：1．人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心

2．人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助

3．人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护

4．你的态度：(内容由考生自己拟定)

注意：1. 倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计人词数。

2．内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。

A Letter to High School Students in Jiangsu

Dear fellow students,

Our government is aiming to build a "harmonious society" (和谐社会). I think it is every citizen's duty to work hard to achieve this goal.

As high school students, what should we do?

________________________________________________________________

As for myself,______________________________________________________

Dear fellow students, let's start fight now and spare no effort to do a little bit every day,

every hour, and every minute!

Li Xiaoping

From Jiangsu High School

参考答案：

<1>There are several important things in building a “harmonious society”.

<2>Firstly, we must build a harmonious relationship between people and society and people should love and care society, including homeland, hometown and school.

<3>Secondly,we must build a harmonious interpersonal relationship and everyone should be honest and helpful to his families, teachers and classmates. <4>Thirdly, we must build a harmonious relationship between mankind and nature and everyone should cherish and protect nature, including energy sources, environment and propagation.

<5> I must do all I can to make contribution to building a “harmonious society.”

2. 互助/爱心传承

If we offer assistance to those who suffer from the trouble, we can make a difference and help them

out. And above all, those who receive our help willl be so thankful that they will pass on our spirit. Then the world will be filled with love and eventually becomes a harmonious one.

We never forget the earthquake happening in Sichuan Province, which caused a national concern. Not only did people donated money but some went there to help ease the local people’s pain. One year has passed. The homeless have been settled and all the children have returned to schools. Now, the city is being rebuilt and come to life again.

I am (或everyone is) deeply moved by the kindness of us Chinese. It is love that help the country go through the disaster. We should carry forward the spirit of helping each other and realize our dream of building a harmonious society.

3. 阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

James Bender，in his book How to Talk Well tells the story of a farmer who grew award-winning corn. Each year he won a blue ribbon. One year a newspaper reporter interviewed him and learned something interesting about how he grew it.

The reporter discovered that the farmer shared his seed corn with his neighbors. "How can you afford to share your best seed corn with your neighbors when they are entering corn in competition

with yours each year？" the reporter asked. "Why，" said the farmer， "didn't you know？ The wind picks up pollen（花粉） from the ripening corn and carries it from field to field. If my neighbors grow bad corn， cross-pollination（异花受粉） will slowly reduce the quality of my corn. If I am to grow good corn， I must help my neighbors grow good corn."

He is very much aware of the connectedness of life. His corn cannot improve unless his neighbors' corn also improves. The lesson for each of us is this： If we are to grow good corn， we must help our neighbors grow good corn.

写作内容：人与人之间本应和睦相处、互帮互助、共同进步。

1、以约30个词概括短文的要点；

2、发表你的看法，谈谈你的认识。

参考范文

To everyone's surprise，a farmer's corn always won a blue ribbon in the state fair every year. This remained a secret for a long time until a reporter learned the truth while he interviewed the farmer. He shared his seed corn with his neighbors， for he knew very well that if he wanted to grow good corn， he must help others grow good corn as well， or the quality of his corn would be affected.

So it is in our life. Those who choose to live well should help the poor to live well， for the value of a life is measured by what the life brings to others. In fact， we're all members of a big family. Obviously，no one can live normally by himself without keeping in touch with others. Therefore，we should help each other and improve our lives. Only in this way can we get our dreams realized.

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李笑来iBT高分作文

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TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 思路＋范文 完美重排版 目录

1. Why people attend college?

People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：

增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野

为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)

为了保证将来的就业机会

父母要求子女上大学

别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书

找不到工作

("无知"，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是[1]，去博物馆如是[12]，从事危险运动亦如是[43]。) 相关题目：[168]

『范文』

After graduating from high school many young people have the option to directly enter the work force. Most

students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market.

Before attending college, students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college

degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be well prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.

Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For example, many

companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place

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a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who also possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who lack college diplomas.

Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road towards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.

2. Are parents the best teachers?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

『分析』

因观点绝对而不能同意。

不是所有的父母都是好老师

最好的老师不仅仅是父母{beyond励志作文}.

有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知

有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响

『范文』

Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally most concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.

First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote themselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious. In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common senses.

TOEFL.iBT 高分作文 完美重排版 Edited by Lost Lawyer Moreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their children almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today takes much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.

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