2006厦门中考英语作文

2006厦门中考英语作文篇一

2006厦门英语中考试题及答案

2006厦门中考英语试题及参考答案

第—部分（选择题）

（—）听力测试（每小题 1 分, 共 30 分）略

（二）基础知识与运用（每小题 1 分, 共 30 分）

V. 选择填空：从 A 、 B 、 C 中, 选出—个最佳答案完成句子。

21 — Could you give me some ____ ?

— Why don't you join an English club and do more practice?

A. interest B. advice C. voice

A. the, / B. / , the C. the, the

A. someone B. everyone C. no one

24 -- Would you like ______ cake?

— No, thanks. I'm full.

A. another B. other C. else

A. at B. with C. on

A. As B. Though 27 — — In 1999.

A. When A. can C. am going to

29 — —Yes. It sounds perfect.

A. sings B. to sing C. singing

30. The phone is ringing. Who can ______ it for me?

A. call B. answer C. ask

31. Would you mind _____ the music? I can't hear it clearly.

A. turning up B. turning down C. turning on

32. The price of the computer ______ what kind you want to buy.

A. goes on B. takes after C. depends on

33. Look, that's our new school building. There ____ be old and low houses.

A. is going to B. had C. used to

34. Mr Wang _____ dinner when we got to his house.

A. had boiled B. had made C. had kept

35. He doesn't tell me when he _____ . I'll call you up as soon as he _____ .

A. will come, arrives B. comes, arrives C. will come, will arrive

36. I think teenagers in China should _____ to make their own decisions.

A. allow B. be allowed C. be stopped

37. –Will people live to be 200 years old?

--_______.

A. No, they don't B. No, they won't 38. –How often do you watch TV?

much time.

A. in the evening B. for twenty minutes 39. ---Where will we meet?

---Sorry?

---I asked _____meet.

A. where we would A. who B. whose VI. 完形填空 从A、B、, 使短文意思完整。

Please Help

money for children in Africa. Every governments in many African countries do not have the money to take care of poor people.

weather is also bad for farming. The organization we are trying to help. The not want to see children die from hunger. Just one dollar can buy enough rice or

a family of four for three days.

How much do you spend on food every day? Ten dollars? Twenty dollars? I on your own food so that you have a few dollars for the Feed Africa Fund.

Ladies and gentlemen, we will now take a 50 . Please be generous. Thank you.

41. A. borrow B. raise C. pay

42. A. hundred B. hundred of C. hundreds of

43. A. to eat B. to sleep C. to play

44. A. clothes B. medicine C. houses

45. A. growing B. inventing C. eating

46. A. costs B. lends C. spends

47. A. to B. from C. with

48. A. feed B. build C. develop

49. A. more B. few C. less

50. A. show B. collection C. look

（三）阅读理解（每小题 2 分, 共 50 VII. 阅读下面五篇短文, 51－75 小题。

Psychiatrist: "I think I can. All you have to do is to visit me twice a week for the next two years and I think I can cure（治愈）you. The visits will costs ＄75 an hour."

Mr. White: "That is an awful lot of money for a working man like me. I'll have to talk it over with my wife and let you know."

The next week Mr. White phoned the Psychiatrist.

Mr. White: "I won't be back, sir. My wife solved the problem. She cut the legs off the bed."

51. Mr. white is _____ .

A. ill in mind（精神） B. crazy about sports C. interested in his bed

52. The psychiatrist works as a _____ .

A. teacher B. volunteer C. doctor

53. The psychiatrist told Mr. White to ________ .

A. ask his wife for help B. visit him a lot more C. cut the legs off the bed

54. Mr. White became all right with the help of ______ .

A. the psychiatrist B. his wife C. his bed

55. Which of the following statements is TRUE?

A. Mr. White is in a good health because he exercises every day.

56. We know from this passage that maybe Jack ______ last Wednesday.

A. failed an exam B. had an accident C. went to school by bus

57. The sidewalk is left for people who ____ .

A. walk B. drive cars C. ride bikes

58. The word "risk" means ______ .

A. safety B. turning C. danger

59. It's dangerous to _____ according to the rules.

A. ride in the same direction as traffic B. ride side by side (并排) with someone else C. use hand signals when you stop or turn

60. The best title of the list will be _____ .

A. Bike Safety Rules B. Bike Riding Club C. Bike Riding Skills

C

sale ads.

61. There are _____ Pay-Lite stores listed in the ad.

A. two B. six C. seven

62. Jim can call ______ and make sure if the nearest store has the glove he wants.

A. 64l-3139 B. 575-0510 C. 784-1230

2006厦门中考英语作文篇二

2014厦门英语中考作文

XI. 短文写作（本题15分）

假设你是思湘，你的美国笔友Amy来信了解中国的传统节日端午节。请根据如下提示用英语写一篇80词以上的回信给她。

注 意：1. 信中不允许出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名和校名等信息。

2. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

3. 参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival; 为了纪念in memory of

_______________________________________________________________________________

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XI. 短文写作

One possible version：

Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that you want to know something about Chinese traditional festival – The Dragon Boat Festival. I’m happy to share what I know about it with you.

The festival has a history of more than 2,000 years. It falls on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese lunar calendar. On that day, people watch exciting dragon-boat races and make delicious zongzi, a kind of special food with sticky rice, meat etc. wrapped in bamboo leaves. These two are both done in memory of Qu Yuan, a great poet in history.

In a word, we all love the festival because it’s a good reminder to look back on history and a wonderful time to get together with family. I hope that you can come to celebrate it with us in the near future.

Best wishes,

Si Xiang

2006厦门中考英语作文篇三

2014厦门中考英语作文参考范文

2014厦门中考英语作文参考范文

Possible version:

Dear Amy,

I learn from your letter that you are interested in one of our Chinese traditional festivals, the Dragon Boat Festival, which has a history of more than 2000 years. Every year, we will celebrate it on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month. There are many ways to celebrate the festival. For example, we will hold Dragon Boat Race, which is very exciting. I often go to watch the race with my family. Another way is to make special food called Zongzi, which is very delicious, I really love it. All these activities are in memory of Quyuan. If you’re interested in this festival, why not come and celebrate with us? I’m sure you’ll have an unforgettable memory.

2006厦门中考英语作文篇四

厦门市2005年中考英语试题与解答

福建省厦门市2005年中考英语试题-新课标

(本试卷分为两大部分，满分1 50分；考试时间120分钟)

第一部分(选择题) (一)听力测试(共35分。每小题

1分

)

I. Listen and choose the right pictures.

(听音，选择符合内容情景的图片。听两遍)

II. Listen to the dialogues and choose the right answers to the questions you hear. (听简短对话，然后挑选最佳答案回答所听到的问题。听两遍

6. A. Hot. B.Cold. C.Wet.

7. A. In the meeting-room. B. In the office. C. At home.

8. A. At 5 : 30 am. B. At 5 : 00 pm. C. At 5 :30 pm.

9. A. In a shop. B, In a restaurant. C. In a library.

10. A. Using the computer. B. Repairing the computer C. Buying a computer.

11. A. A teacher. B. A shop assistant. C. A doctor.

12. A. 21 yuan B. 24 yuan, C. 42 yuan,

13. A. 76 kilometres. B. 670 kilometres. C. 760 kilometres.

14. A. January. B. March. C. May.

15. A. Beef. B. Fish. C. Pork.

III. Listen to the dialogues or passages and choose the right answers to Questionl6 —25.

(听较长对话或短文，然后选择正确答案作答16～25小题，听两遍)

Text 1

16. They are talking about________.

A. Mike's study B. their school lives C. Mike's family

17.________often does some cleaning in the family.

A. Mike B. Mike's mother C. Mike's father

18. Mike's father is good at________.

A. cooking B. planting C. cleaning

Text 2

19. The man went to Yichang for________.

A. visiting friends B. the nice scenery C. business

20. He went to Yichang by________.

A. plane B. car C. ship

21. The man may be from________.

A. a foreign country B. the north of China

C. the south of China

Text 3

22. Tom is a________.

A. student B. shop keeper C. sports man

23. Each Day, Tom has________ sign.

A. the same B. a funny C. a new

24. From this passage, we know that Tom________.

A. likes talking with teachers B rides his bike every day

C, often helps classmates

25. The best title(标题) is .

A. A Fun Job on the Bike B. A Fun day for Tom C. Go Shopping by Bike

IV. Listen to a dialogue and a passage, and fill in the blanks with the right words.

({2006厦门中考英语作文}.

听一篇对话和一篇短文，用恰当的单词填空完成81～90小题，每空一词。听三遍)

V．选择填空：从A、B、C、D中．选出一个最佳答案完成句子。

26. — Do you like fruit?

— Yes, I like the________best.

A. potato B. chicken C. pear D. bread

27. — By the way, have you got________e-mail address?

—Oh yes, it's dbpower@163. com.

A. a B. an C. the D. /{2006厦门中考英语作文}.

28. — Where's my dictionary?

— Oh sorry. I have taken________by mistake.

A., yours B. his C. hers D. mine

29. Jenny's shoes were worn out. She wanted to buy a new________.

A. shoe B. shoes C, one . D. pair

30. John is the________one I want to work with. He is such a lazy boy.

A. first B. last C. only D. best

31. — A lot of people got SARS two years ago. It was terrible.

— Yes. We should________ourselves and keep healthy.

A. look after B. look over C. look for D.look up

32. Jack likes to________others but never writes to them.

A. hear B. hear of C, hear about D. hear from

33. I'm sorry. I________go now. My father told me on the phone that my mother was il

A. can B. may C. have to D. think

34. The boy with two dogs________in the yard when the earthquake rocked the city.

A. is playing B. was playing C. are playing D. were playing

35. — I'm looking for Mr White.

— He was here just now. But he________to a meeting and he won't be back until eleven o'clock.

A. was B. will be C. has gone D. has been

36. — I know Mr White is very angry with me. What does he say?

— He says you________away if you're late again.

A. are sending B. has been sent C. are going to send D. will be sent

37. Would you please________the window? It's too cold outside.

A. open B. opening C. not open D. not to open

38. The sun is shining. ________fine day it is!

A. How B. How a C. What D. What a

39. Don't worry, sir. I'm sure I can run________to catch up with them.

A, fast enough B. enough fast C. slowly enough D. enough slowly

40. — He thinks________of others than of himself.

— That's why everyone likes to make friends with him.

A. much B. more C. little D. less

41. We must make the earth a happy home________both human beings and animals.

A. for B. with C. by D. at

42. —Would you like to come to dinner tonight?

— I'd like to, ________I'm too busy.

A. and B. if C. so D. but

43. — Do you know________I could pass the exam?

— Sorry, I have no idea.

A. that B. whether C. what D. which

44. — Could you tell me________?

— She came here on foot.

A. where Kate came from

B. when Kate came here

C. how Kate came here

D. why Kate didn't come here

45. The blouse________is made of silk is very expensive. I can't afford it.

A. that B. what C. because D. though Ⅳ．完形填空：从A、B、c、D中，选择_一个最佳答案。使短文意思完整)

One morning，Sue was riding her bike to school. She was late, so she decided to take a short cut(捷径). But she made a mistake and into a one-way street. . A car was coming from the other direction. The driver quickly drove to one side and drove into a shop window. The shop assistant was greatly ! There was everywhere.

Sue rode into the other side of the street and a man, then an apple cart. The apple cart turned over and the apples went in all directions.

A group of students were having in a small restaurant. Quickly they ran all the apples were and put back on the cart. Luckily, A policeman came by and saw what happened. He Sue from riding to school and asked her some questions, so Sue was even later for school.

46. A. walked B. looked C. turned D. drove

47. A. wide B. narrow C. long D. deep

48. A, glad B. interested C. hungry D. frightened

49. A, grass B. glass C. trouble D. dirty

50. A. touched B. hit C. kicked D. pulled

51. A. breakfast B. lunch C. supper D. picnic

52. A. back B. from C. away D. across

53. A. broken B. picked up C. carried D. thrown away

54. A. both B. either C. neither D. none

55. A. helped B. took C. sent D. stopped

(三)阅读理解(共45分)

VII．阅读下面五篇短文，根据文章的内窖选择最佳答案作答56～80小题。其中A篇每小题1分。其余各篇每小题2分.

A

No parking

Mr Brown lived in a house less than two miles from his office, so he was able to drive home every day for lunch. Every time he drove home at noon, he found many cars were parked outside his house and there was no room for his own car. He had to drive somewhere else to park his car. Then he had to walk back home. This made him very angry.

He had put up a board, which said, "No parking" in the garden facing the road, but nobody noticed it. People seemed to obey (遵守) only a police notice with white letters on a blue board!

POLICE NOTICE NO PARKING

Mrs Brown suggested (建议)that he steal a police notice. He was afraid to do so. She then suggested that he make one just like a police notice. He said he was not the police and couldn't use the word "police". Several days later, Mr Brown made a blue board with white letters:

POLITE NOTICE NO PARKING

"Oh!" Mrs Brown said, "You told me you weren't going to use the word ' police', but why do you use it now?" "Really?" he asked, "Look again. " She started to laugh. "You are really clever. "

56. Mr Brown' s office was________his house.

A. next to B. not so far from C, 2 hour's drive from D. 5 miles from

57. Mr Brown was angry about that________.

A. he found no room to park his car outside his house

B. he had nothing to eat for lunch at home

C. he lost the way when he drove back home one day

D. he couldn't make a police notice outside his house

58. Mr Brown made________notice board(s) altogether ( 一共).

A. one B. two C. three D. no

59. Mr Brown make a notice board which________in the end.

A. was just the same as a police notice

B. was different in colour from a police notice

C. just looked like a police notice

D. said "POLICE NOTICE, NO PARKING"

60. We can infer (推断)that________after he put up the blue board.

A. more people will park their cars outside his house

B. more policemen will come to park their cars at noon

C. fewer people will park their cars outside this house

D. fewer people will visit him at noon later on

B

2006厦门中考英语作文篇五

厦门历年中考满分作文集绵(2006-2015)

2006年厦门市中考优秀作文

以下两题，任选一题作文。

（1）“第四届世界合唱比赛”即将在我们的家乡厦门举行。这全球顶级赛事、激情音乐盛典，激发我们对“歌”的无限遐思„„{2006厦门中考英语作文}.

歌，咏叹生活的酸甜苦辣；歌，抒尽人间的喜怒哀乐；歌，穿透历史，在文学艺术的殿堂里余音绕梁；歌，跨越地域，在千千万万人的心灵里引发共鸣。

展开丰富的联想与想像，你会发觉：山水有歌，风雨有歌，岁月有歌，亲情有歌，校园有歌„„（友情提示：“歌”既可作名词，又可作动词。）

请以“歌”为话题写一篇文章。

要求：①题目自拟，文体自选。或描述经历，或抒发情感，或说明事理，或阐述观点，考生可根据实际情况加以选择。②字数不少于500字，诗歌不少于15行。③题目或正文中如需出现本市人名、地名、校名者，请用××代替。

（2）题目：那一次，我尝到了的滋味

要求：①加上适当的词语，补足题目，扣题作文。②文体自选，字数不少于500字，诗歌不少于15行。③题目或正文中如需出现本市人名、地名、校名者，请用××代替。

文学长廊之歌

合上书，我的耳际仍然萦绕着丝丝余音，久久不绝。细细一听，竟是从一篇篇名著中悠悠飘出。

奋斗之歌

这么大的人，拉着这么美的车，他自己的车。祥子将车停好，细细打量：微微上翘的车把，亮堂的车厢，那么响的喇叭。祥子自我陶醉在“拥有车”的快乐中，不觉哼唱起家乡的小调，民间的无词之曲。祥子的漂亮车很快就上了一位主顾，一脸斯文的样子。祥子跺跺脚，松松腰，拢住车把，“走嘞！”滚圆的木轮就随祥子稳健的大步向前滚动了。

穿过大街小巷，尽管集市噪声喧嚣，却丝毫无法干扰祥子心中无数遍哼唱的旋律。定是首悠扬的山歌。脑上的汗珠顺着背不断地砸向石板路，硬棒的黝黑。祥子累着，心中却抑止不住地快乐。自己的车，自给自足的生活。他乐得脸蛋红红的，尽管淌着汗。歌唱的祥子奋斗着。

忠贞之歌

清晨新一轮的朝阳渐渐跃出山头，金色的光射在青草上，仿佛镀了一层金边。褐发挺拔的绅士，身着燕尾服，踏着如此耀眼的金色走来。惟美的画面配着轻柔的乐曲，小提琴的柔美音色却无法使达西的紧张有所减退。“我再努力一次，但愿伊丽莎白能答应我。”达西大步地走近，棱角分明的五官透露出忐忑。悠扬的乐曲响起，希望也更加明朗。

当一袭素裙立在青草中的伊丽莎白出现在达西的视野中时，那张棱角分明的脸顿时软化了：“如此美好„„”尽管想立即飞奔到她面前，但是达西的步伐仍然不乱。典型的绅士。阳光四溢，代表希望的乐曲响起，美好而温暖。达西极快地表达心意后，满心期待着答复，局促得像个孩子。一个轻轻的吻印在脸颊，伊丽莎白灿烂的笑着：“我答应。”欢快的弦律响起，见证了这走过傲慢越过偏见后的忠诚。悠扬的忠贞之歌。

坚毅之歌

雨过天晴后的泥土发出阵阵香，鲁滨逊今天起了个大早，提上斧子，便赶往“造船厂”。第十五个年头了，孤岛上的生活不但没打垮他，反而磨炼了他的意志，使他更加坚忍而专注。十二天完工的木板，用围巾筛面做成的面包，圈养的野山羊„„他甚至自己种谷子。

对上帝的信仰使他时常哼着唱着安慰自己，鼓励自己努力劳动。尽管年年与孤独为伴，他还是在这岛上建立了自己的物质和精神王国。

坚毅的歌声响亮地萦绕在孤岛上，快乐勤劳。

尾声

闲时，我常喜欢打开书本，静心品着文学长廓中时时传响的歌，时而婉转，时而悠扬，发人深思，催人奋进。

2007年福建省厦门市中考满分作文及点评

1、在旅行中寻找

背着行囊我在旅途中寻找，来到岳飞庙再也没有人用鄙夷的目光怒视秦桧；游历“九一八”纪念馆，许多人却嬉笑着面对日军留下的种种罪行。在旅行中我迷惘，却想要寻找到那属于中华民族的民族雄魂。

寻找，是因为我们害怕失去；寻找，是因为我们迫切需要。

深冬，我站在了北京的圆明园前，这座凝聚了中华民族勤劳与智慧的万园之园，却在用凄怆的残垣断壁向来访者诉说屈辱的昨天，辛酸的历史。

皑皑的白雪唱着无言的挽歌，谱写着那民族的血泪过去，如何的吟唱，怎样的飘落，都盖不住那段苍凉。朔风中，雪地上，几棵枯草，几根石柱，好似我们历经忧患的民族之魂。

寒风中我不禁打了个踉跄，没有民族之魂的人儿啊，又如何使整个民族站稳脚跟，使国家屹立于世界民族之林？ 抚摸着残损的汉白玉石柱，似是触及了1860年的战火，炽热，撕心裂肺的疼痛！英法列强们入侵了我们的祖国，烧毁了华美的宫殿，劫走了无数民族瑰宝，更在我们的民族之魂上肆意蹂躏、践踏。

没有民族之魂的人岂不是行尸走肉，任人宰割？

或许，它曾淹没于哀叹里，隐匿于自卑中，衰弱于列强的铁蹄下，但它永远不会消亡！我们的民族将在烈火中炼就铁血丹心，如同一只普通的鸟经受了烈焰的涅槃将会变作一只火凤凰腾空出世！

我的心中有一团烈火在熊熊燃烧，继续行走，青岛五四青年的“还我青岛”的口号；岷山雪岭红军斗志昂扬的脚印；看林则徐广东虎门销烟的烈火；听欧盟反倾销裁席上的声声雄辩，这不正是民族之魂的写照吗？

在旅行中我终于找到了。是啊，为什么再也没有列强侵犯我们的国土？为什么中国的发展日新月异？为什么这儿即将举办举世瞩目的奥运盛会？因为中华民族是一个不屈的民族。它有着自信、自强的民族之魂！贫贱不能移，富贵不能淫，威武不能屈！在苦难中我们造就了伟大，我们创造了辉煌！

我在旅行中寻找，在缄默了的遗迹前，我寻找到了民族之魂，它永远是我们民族伟大的精神力量，让我们在历史长河中继续旅行，寻找那遗失的精神财富„„

【点评】

阅读此文时不禁被作者强烈爱国之情深深地打动，全文以寻找民族魂为主线贯穿于作者的各处旅行之中，所以虽然文中涉及的旅行的地点繁多，历史的跨度大，但是文章的中心始终突出。文中作者对中国历史的熟悉，对时事的关注，对现状的反思，精当的议论、抒情都表现了作者的爱国热忱，这也是此文能脱颖而出的原因。此外本文在“话题作文中应紧扣话题”这一点上也做得较好，如文中的首尾段，文中的“继续行走”、“ 在旅行中我终于找到了”等词句都起到了紧扣话题的作用。

2、在路上

人生就像一场旅行，不必在乎目的地；要在乎的，是沿途的风景，以及看风景的心情。让我们怀揣着一张纸上路，管它是泛黄的，还是新的呢？看云舒云卷，花开花落。记得录下旅途的点点滴滴，还有那些曾经温暖过我们的，感动过我们的人，所有的这一切，都会成为生命中一道无法磨灭的美丽的风景。

我们并不孤单，一路上总有人同行。怀念那些纯真朴实的岁月，那些翻过围墙溜进学校的日子，那些摇着铃铛哼唱童谣的日子，那些午休时躲在被子里玩耍的日子。那些日子，我们曾经手拉手一起走过。

记得那些个盛夏的日子里，我们站在树荫下大口喝着冰镇的汽水。水甜甜的，凉丝丝的，一直流进了心底。头发有几缕因为汁水的缘故粘在额头上，我们碰着瓶子，开心地笑着，连鸣蝉的聒噪也抛在了脑后，多么简单的幸福。

因为学校的大门关着，我们就从旁边的矮墙翻过去，一不小心把手给划破了，殷红的血一下子就渗了出来。即便如此，我还是咬牙说一点儿也不疼。你当时一定笑话我了吧。明明那副咧嘴龇牙的模样还非要装做男子汉。然后就不由分说要拉着我去医务室上药。

下午的时光是最快乐也是最短暂的。我们摆好了衣服当做球门，就开始了满场的奔跑。不大的球场上，回荡着我们的笑声。{2006厦门中考英语作文}.

一道短线急促地划过天空，紧接着就是第二条，第三条。然后就听见“啪”的一声，是雨点打在叶子上的声音。迟钝的我这才感觉到是下雨了。你拉着我的手飞奔，就是在下一秒钟的事。好几次我都差点摔倒，但还是紧紧抓着你的手不放。终于，我们一路狂奔到了屋檐下，看着早已经淋成落汤鸡的对方，开心地笑了。

虽然我与这些日子已经渐行渐远，但是在不经意间的回头的一瞬，风景依旧。你们都不曾离开。感谢你们陪伴我走过那段路。是你们，给了我力量，让我今后不管遇到多么险峻的高山，多么泥泞崎岖的路途，多么湍急的河流，不再彷徨！

所有的温暖，我都会把它们小心地收藏在心中最柔软的角落，或许将来有一天当我遇到人生的冬季时，我会把它们唤醒，让曾经的感动再次在心头荡漾，化了这一季的冰霜。

收拾好我的行囊，挥手告别了满天的云彩，我又将上路。人生踽踽，我会珍惜在路上的每一分、每一秒，留恋于旅途中旖旎的风景。

哪里会是我的下一站呢？

【点评】要写好文章，首先要学会培养自己捕捉感动生活瞬间的能力。应该看到，这篇文章的作者就是善于通过回忆学习生活里的点点滴滴，然后就构思出了这样一篇充满温暖和柔情的幽雅之作。美好友情弥漫在文章里，珍惜友谊跳跃在笔尖下。我们阅读者也似乎跟着回到了那段永恒的时光。文笔的优美展示，情感的酣畅流露，尤其是对一些经典诗歌语言的化用，如“挥手告别了满天的云彩”“云舒云卷，花开花落”，都很好地表现作者的文化积淀。

3、那时，我的灵魂被他敲醒

在我的心中，有一座山。那座山离我很远，却也离我很近；那座山很雄伟，很高大。那座山，就是毛泽东。 我不敢看他，因为他高得我抬头也无法看到尽头；我不敢读他，因为他已埋得很深很深，哪怕倾尽我一生，也未必能看懂它大山中一水，一花，一草，一木。惟有感受，我只能化作一缕清风，去采撷一朵小花，去捕捉一滴泉水，从点点滴滴，感受他。让他敲醒我沉睡的灵魂。

“恰同学少年，风华正茂，独立寒秋，橘子洲头，看万山正红遍，层林尽染。”美好的河山，那荡漾着万千柔情，凝聚着悠悠历史的壮丽河山，引起了一个32岁青年的雄雄意志。“问苍茫大地，谁主沉浮！”鸿鹄之志，在顷刻间绽放，伟大抱负，注定了他将书写的明天，辉煌灿烂。他淡淡地敲醒了我沉睡中的野心与意志，他告诉我，“敢教日月换新天”，才是炎黄子孙，中华儿女的真本色。

充满自信与朝气，舒展我们的勃勃生机。“踏遍青山人未老，风景这边独好。”满腔的热情，似火山般，欲喷薄，豪情万丈，势不可挡。哪怕即将面临的长征有多艰难，仰天长啸“而今迈步从头越”，把一切困难咽进肚子。

长征大道，过草地，爬雪山，磨的不是鞋底子，磨的是那顽强的意志，刚强的生命。“五岭逶迤腾细浪，乌蒙磅礴走泥丸。”这细浪腾出了多少不朽的英雄，这泥丸走出了多少不屈的英魂啊！真不愧“江山如此多娇，引无数英雄竞折腰”，沉痛而昂扬。浓浓的爱国情。他叫醒了我那时沉睡中的顽强与坚韧。

推翻了蒋介石，他终于可以笑了，笑着告诉天下人“天若有情天亦老，人间正道是沧桑。”他谱写出的历史，坚如磐石，谁也不能逆历史潮流而行，谁也不能颠覆这天下。

一个有血有肉的人，他亦怀有万丈柔情。为了革命，他丧妻失子，纵有万般无奈，也只有“吴刚捧出桂花酒，寂寞嫦娥舒广袖。”蝶恋花，蝶恋花，恋出一代伟人两行清泪诉柔肠！

“风雷动，旌旗奋，是人寰。三十八年过去，弹指一挥间。可上九天揽月，可下五洋捉鳖，谈笑凯歌还。世上无难事，只要肯登攀”。在这改革开放大道上，我仿佛看见毛主席在前方的路上，用他春天般温暖的笑容，叹道：“年年后浪推前浪，江草江花处处鲜”。

新时代的篇章，要由我们来写，只能说谢谢他，谢谢他敲醒了我灵魂中沉睡的奋发向上，积极进取。毛泽东，我会深刻领悟您大山一样坚定顽强的精神，努力为祖国明天的大好河山贡献出自己的一份力量！

“俱往矣，数风流人物，还看今朝”！

【点评】这篇文章用饱含深情的笔调抒写了毛泽东诗词对一个少年的影响与启迪。

读毛泽东诗词，让小作者体会到炎黄子孙“敢教日月换新天”的本色；读毛泽东诗词，让小作者舒展勃勃的生机，引发了小作者的自信与朝气，顽强与坚韧；读毛泽东诗词，让小作者感悟到一代伟人的万丈柔情。

小作者独特的阅读趣味和较为深刻的思想值得肯定，小作者丰富的诗词积累让人叹服，小作者由读毛泽东诗词引出自己的内心感悟，再次让我们感受到在学习语文的过程中，读透一个作家（诗人），走进一部名著，徜徉于文学殿堂对写作的重要性。

14、那时，我破茧成蝶

卓越是快马送来的一纸诏书，于是李白大呼：“我辈岂是蓬蒿人。”奔赴了纸醉金迷的长安。

平凡是屋檐下的一夜秋雨，所以杜甫默叹：“茅屋为秋风所破。”拿起被子，寻找一片淋不到雨的地面。 卓越是书桌上一盆精心照顾的紫罗兰，引起一片连连的惊叹声。

平凡是墙角一坛封存老久的酒，静静地见证着一个个蜘蛛网的成长。

秦王扫六合，汉武屈匈奴，太宗建盛世，明成拓远泽。他们的事迹见证了他们的伟大，深刻在史籍中，万载不灭。

董存瑞舍躯，邱少云坚忍，李素丽敬业，罗盛教勇敢。他们的事迹彰显了他们的品质，牢牢记在人们心中，百代流传。

每个人都希望能一夜成名，登上乐坛，体坛，文坛。

只是梦想而已。

我们每天走着同一条路，踏着同一个时间做着同样的事。

现实是我们依然平凡。

平凡不是平庸，平庸的人只会做梦，平凡不同。

平凡的人会积聚能量，等待那一刻，破茧成蝶的一刻。

所以我看到，杜工部的诗文被后代文人骚客反复吟颂。在北宋时，洛阳纸贵，杜甫的卓越不下于李白。

所以我看到，墙角的那坛老酒被发现，那浓浓的酒香立即倾倒了所有的人，老酒的卓越甚至超过了鲜花。 我没有多金的父母，没有显赫的家世，也没有上层的熟人，我很平凡。

但只要我有梦想，有企盼，有毅力，有决心，我将卓越。

每一个人生如同登山一样。我没有缆车，没有直升机，甚至没有一双像样的球鞋，而山顶又是那么高，山路又是那么陡。

但重要的是，我一直在走。平凡的人生没有尽头，像一条无限延伸的路，但当你勇敢地走下去，你会发现前方另有一片天地。

那时，我破茧成蝶。

【点评】散文诗一样的语言中真实地透露出作者在平凡中渴望破茧成蝶，实现梦想的强烈的热望，使人读后不禁被深深感染、震撼。开篇的两组对比，句式工整，语言精当，对比鲜明。看出了作者较为深厚的文学功底。文末两个“我看到”的段落与开篇遥相呼应，展示了作者对卓越与平凡的独到见解：卓越固然好，但平凡中追求不懈，跋涉不止同样能破茧成蝶。真情倾泻，感人至深。

2008年厦门中考满分作文

大海，我的朋友

我时常想：在月明的海里，可有一舟，承载着我全部的信念?

我站在海边，你轻轻靠过来，用你温暖的手轻拍我的脚背。白色的玉屑般的浪花是你献上的礼物么?你说，人要坚强。纵使有狂风裹挟着愤怒，无情地抱起你向那突兀的怪岩砸去，你也不曾落泪，粉身碎骨在岩石上，你也无悔。你与狂风抗争，吸纳它的锐气，最终用墨绿的大浪把它压入海底。我看见你激战后的疲惫与伤痕，泪忍不住涌上。我时常凝视海天相接的那条分界线，因为我的亲人在你的深处沉睡，我触摸着你，好似触到亲人温暖的脸，那曾是我最熟悉的脸，此刻却只存于记忆中。你爱怜地收起我滚落的珍珠般的冰凉的泪，我曾经的哀伤融在你的心里。我知道我要坚强，像你一样。现在我不再哭泣，只托你向亲人问好，送去我的思念。大海，我的朋友，我所有的勇气都来自于你呵!

你知道我胆小，于是一次次突然急促地扑向我，我知道，你并不全是顽皮。高尔基说你在狂风闪电下变得暴怒，考验着海上的动物，你也是在考验着我吗?我愿作海燕，撕扯开沉重的天幕，用太阳的温暖照耀着你。我鼓起勇气，大胆地扑向你的怀抱，在蔚蓝的水中自由穿行。我在海浪间快乐地旋转，纵使你用厚实的浪打来，我也如美人鱼般敏捷地逃脱，你在我耳边低语，诉说你最美最神奇的故事。我在沙滩上向你得意地挥手，你也欣喜、快乐得一遍遍冲向沙滩，敲击着岩石。你是打着鼓点祝贺我的蜕变吗?你蔚蓝而炽热的心传递给我的力量，让我如草原上的雄鹰一般强壮而矫健。大海，我的朋友。你一直鼓舞着我!

大海，我的朋友，在昏黄的夕照里，我多少次向你诉说心底沉积的话语?我毫不掩饰我的心，因为它如你一样蔚蓝澄静，我在月明的海里向你诉说我的忧伤，漆黑的夜空，明亮的星星见证着我的赤诚;我在绚烂的早晨向你吟咏最优美的诗句，第一个醒来的花苞收录了我的情意;我在明媚的阳光下向你呼喊我的壮志，飞翔的流云记下了我的热切。

大海，我的朋友，我用最诚挚的感情热爱着你。我的坚强，我的自信，我的豁达，皆来自于你的声声劝导。我们的友谊，是那错杂的迷宫吧，藏着种种惊喜;我们的友谊，是那飘飘摇摇的船吧，没有终止的港口;我们的友谊，是那没有年轮的树吧，永不停息地生长!

大海呵，我的朋友，我在月明的海的舟中问你，你可曾这般喜爱我?

点评一首充满激情的海的颂歌，一段我走向坚强的生命历程，一番我与大海相守相许的动人情思。难能可贵的是小作者以细腻的描摹、诗意的语言使本文充沛的情感有据可依且层层推进、婉转低回，规避了许多同类文章中极易出现的空洞无物的弊病，自有一种感人的力量。陈文莉老师

那一次，我读懂了花落的声音

无边的暮霭勾勒不出阳光灿烂的鲜艳，倦归的鸟儿展翼向风。迷惘的我默默地踩着树影回家，暗暗梦想着我的将来。

蓦地，一瓣残花飘落到我的肩上，顺着我的身子滚落车轮下，我被这一点点的苍凉牵动了心弦，竟下了车子推着前行。不远处有一棵不高的花树，它正竭尽全力地开放着最后的花朵，同时那些曾经美丽的粉色小花，也抵不住萧风的呼唤“零落成泥碾作尘”。我扶着车子瑟瑟地走向那树，冥冥中似乎觉得那无名的花树正传递着一些关于生命的讯息，这是我所迷惘的。

冷不丁，又是一片花瓣悄悄打落在我的左颊，继而又卧倒在我的脚边。我直觉地发现这残瓣上清晰地刻着一个“秋”字。曾经热烈奔放，曾经生趣盎然，在这花期已尽的时刻只能化作生命的碎片。我不禁沉沉哀叹：为何花有凋零时啊？我心中莫名地划过一阵激动与难过，好像正在抬手与放手之间肆意地丢弃着什么，而丢弃的是令我又心痛又畅快的东西。

正在这时，我猛然发现那无名的花树上密密地结着一层青绿色的小果子。我不知那叫什么，有什么作用，可第一眼，我就喜爱上了那青巧油亮的小东西。哦，那繁花的盛开与零落正是为了孕育这小小的果实啊！刹那间，我的心明亮开来。真正的精髓只有在你经历了喧哗和寂寞之后，才悠悠显现出来。当然，这种喧哗是需要你用勤奋、韧性和执著来完善和度过的，而这种寂寞更需要你耐心和积极充实。花树用片片花瓣的飘落，换得了满树累累果实，而我们的生活呢？那些美好的赞誉，执著的求索，以及无数次噙泪的跌倒与爬起，都应如繁花般成为个人崇高理想，而不是伤痛地怜惜成功的代价。因为花儿飘落的声音是美丽的、快乐的，它们为生命的延续留下了更重要的精髓，更多的小生命！

花开固然美丽，花落更具意义，我要把生命的花瓣一片一片洒在通往成功的路上。我不会后悔，不会为努力之后与结局之间的必然喝叹停滞。因为我明白了花儿飘落的伟大，我也曾为生命的延续留下了最美好的东西！

2009年厦门中考满分作文

1．我们就是那初生牛犊

仲夏的阳光毫不吝啬地投射在我的脸上，表情湮没在灼灼的阳光中模糊不清。起风了，习习的风吹散阳光的氤氲，看见了吗？看见了我款款的笑魇了吗？我的表情分明在说：我们就是那初生的牛犊。

我们的童年虽然早已悄然远去，但是我们的眼眸里，还是泛着对世界好奇的目光。我们看晚霞轻吻云彩，看雨点轻叩车窗，看日出日落，看云卷云舒，看花开花落„„一切事物对于我们来说还是那么新鲜。我们就是那初生牛犊，抱着好奇的眼光，起身推开通往世界的大门。

我们正值年少，我们对未来充满了向往。远方那馥郁芬芳的花海，是我们向往的未来。我们想去远行，迫不及待地挣脱父母温暖的怀抱，恨不得快快长大，开创一番事业，回馈社会和亲人。我们就是那初生的牛犊，不谙世事的我们期待远方，鼓足了风帆，期待远航。像是一支拉满弦的精弓上的羽箭，将一触即发飞